Hey peoples here's chapter 4 (i believe) tell me my mistakes n good things n all tat stuff, i need to know how to improve n what to keep n all tat stuff peoples!
It has been forever sense Inu n Sess had been trapped in that cave. Far too long to count. But Inu n Sess were determined to escape n rescue the ones they came for. Inuyasha continue to pat the walls hoping for a discovery that will lead them to out. Sess did the same nut wasted little energy, unlike his brother which jumped n rolled n climbed everywhere.
"Ah!" Inu finally let out, "That's it, i am so ganna blow this place up". Inu drew his sword n prepared to summon the powerful 'Wind Scar'. He held it up high, over his head n was about to blast the wall in front of him when suddenly Sesshoumaru graped his arm n said, "Inuyasha u fool, if u have a death wish, by all means complete it, but do not take me down with u, do u know what u would had done if u had done ur attack?" "Err..." Was all Inuyasha could get out. "Foolishness is what gets the weak killed, u would had caused a cave in n not only trap us here for good but u could had even killed us both, foolishness!" Sess scolded at Inu.
"Ah! Let go over me already" Inuyasha said while shaking his hands free. Sesshoumaru's grip on Inuyasha was firm n stronger. "Hmph, i will only touch a sickening think like u if there was not other choice", Sess said n turned around n went off to the other side of the cave n continued to search for...anything. "Hey, wait a sec", Inu asked his brother. Sesshoumaru stopped n turned around. "I am for Kagome, but why are u here"? Sesshoumaru thought about this for a second n then said, "i am here to fight the strongest that this world has to offer", he said this with no sickel of emotion running though his face. 'Yeah, but how about that gir-", Inuyasha was stopped short because the south cave wall just exploded open. Inu and Sess stood there, shocked. But Sess got his wits back in only a second and stood ready. Inu saw this and he got ready too.
Once the smoked cleared, Inu n sess were shocked for what they saw, they saw that the wall has rebuilt itself, in other words, it was back to normal, closed, as if it had not blown up at all. But what shocked them was not that the wall was closed, it was that that copycat demon was standing right there, still in there father's form. Sess took a whiff of the air n announced, " You can't pass as our father, you smell nothing as how he did, so show us your true form coward"! "Hehehe, u idiots, if u knew what u r up august u would run away right now"! "Ha! If that's true, then show us!" Inuyasha roared and began to charge. 'Idiot Inuyasha', Sesshoumaru thought. The demon began to transform once again to a huge monster, it did not even fit in the cave anymore, it burst though the roof of the cavern n still continued to grow bigger n bigger. Inu was so shocked he stopped in his tracks, but Sess stood straight n ready, but he too knew this has gotten much harder.
The monster demon grow to at least the size of skyscrapers, Inu and Sess were astonish to how big this thing got, they were ant size compare to this thing's size. The demon broke the ceiling of the cave so now the were in the pure open, they could see the dark clouds hovering over them n it was pitch dark, they were in that cave for so long that it is already night time, n the clouds were so big n dark, Sess took another whiff into the air n realized, 'Hmm, it is going to rain, this could be bad', Sess thought. But back to the demon, it did not just grow, he molded n changed n was basically a whole other demon by physical feathers, its if he truly was made of clay n can just as easy morph to something else. Just use your imagination for this thing, it was just like……the great dog demon's demon dog form, he was just like their father. "'Ah!", Sesshoumaru yelled, "You r only full of fakes, no one impersonates great demons, u may look like him but u r not him, prepare to die!"
Well people, that was chapter 4, hope u liked it n tell me how to improve