If Dreams Can Kill
I would like to thank Allismine for rewriting this for me and Twilight-to-nightfall for reviewing my fic it's the same thing just edited. Thanks Guys!
Warning: May contain stuff that doesn't even exist in Naruto, characters may be OCC, this is my first fan fiction so please tell the truth and I don't mind flames there just opinions.( There 15 all of them except team Gai there 17, The Team Gaara's in are as the age's follow Gaara 16, Tenmari 19, and Kankuro 18. My OC is 14 I know she's young but it's part of my plan and sorry if I have bad grammar or spelling)
Disclaimer:I don't own Naruto or any of it I only own my OC and places I made up and a song or two and the plot.
Summary: A girl out of this world comes and has something that may cost her life who will be there to help?Mainly Sasuke x OC, Shikamaru x OC, and Neji x OC and Gaara x OC .( Final pairing would be voted or if I want it to be a certain way.)
Genre: Romance/Action/and Adventure.
Rated: T( For violence,a bit of cursing, and to top it off blood for now)
"Blah"(Talking)
'Blah'(Thinking)
Blah(Dreams or Flashbacks)
Blah(someone singing a song or playing one
Blah( When the reader needs to know this is very important.)
Blah(Parts of Zaara's Past slowly coming to her)
(A/N: Blah)(Authoress Notes)
Now to the story...
My name is Zaara Kagenochi(A/N: Zaara Kagenochi literally means Desert Shadow of blood and Zaara is an Arabic Word Kagenochi is Japanese.)I am a sin for my life has been nothing but blood, lies, and battles for I was created for a weapon the only ones I know who have sheared at least ΒΌ of the same pain as me is in a fictional tale also known as the world of Naruto...My friends are in that world... my only friends...are...gone...I'm...empty...I wished at least some of this pain would leave me for I can no longer cry any more tears but blood...This is my story.. and my life.
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Zaara's Pov. 'Where am I...awwhh...my head...', Zaara thought, while still attempting to remember exactly where she was. 'Not to mention my shoulder hurts like hell right now...' "Hey, Sakura-chan! Is she alive?", someone asked, in an obnoxiously loud voice. "Shut up, Naruto, you baka, or your going to wake her up!", hissed another voice. Her voice was feminine. 'So that voice must belong to the so-called Sakura...", Zaara thought. 'And the loud one must be Naruto...wait...Naruto? But that means...' But Zaara's thoughts were interrupted suddenly by Sakura's voice. "K-Kakashi-sensei...look at this..."
"Huh? What is it, Sakura?", asked a voice, that seemed disconcerned by Sakura's inquiry. 'So...', Zaara thought, 'I'm either correct, or I've gone completely insane...this is...Naruto's World...' She smirked happily. 'So I'm finally back.' "Good, she's awake.", said yet another familiar voice. "Can we go now?" It was none other than Mr. Impatient Sasuke.
End of Zaara's Pov. Start of normal Pov.
"Shut up, Sasuke-Teme!", replied Naruto. "It's ok, Naru-kun, let it go...", replied Zaara softly. "But..." Naruto began to argue, but his thoughts were interrupted by a MAJOR realization. "WAIT, HOW DO YOU KNOW MY FREAKN' NAME?" Oh, the freakin' joy of having Naruto scream so freakin' loud that everyone would become freakin' deaf and everyone's left or right eye began to freakin' twitch. "Don't you remember me, Naru-kun?", Zaara replied, still holding her soft tone of voice. "It's me, Zaza-chan..." Naruto and Sakura were like: O.O, but Sasuke and Kakashi were just confused with the whole situation. "Zaza-chan...", Sakura said, uncertainly. "Oh my God, it's really you! So the MaNoChi gang is back together!", she said, high-pitched and excited. Zaara had a small smile on her face. "Hai...Guys...Hai..."
"Um...Miss...", Kakashi said, confused. "We--" But Zaara interrupted. "Zaara...Zaara Kagenochi." Yet again, everyone who heard this probably looked like this: O.O, but Naruto and Sakura stared down at her sadly, probably knowing what she's been through. 'But...', Kakashi thought, 'The rumors said that Zaara Kagenochi was a BOY, of Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto's age...' To his surprise, today he found out that the so-called Kagenochi Clan heir was actually an heirESS.(A/N: Now ain't that screwy.) 'So...', Sasuke thought, 'This is the last Kagenochi...but I thought she was a he...strange...she didn't try to glomp me like every other female I've ever met...and she is a lot less annoying...and...she's...beauti--wait! I hardly KNOW her! I JUST MET HER! That's it, I've been hanging around Kakashi too much.' Sasuke looked the strange girl over.
She strangely had a very light version of purple hair that were in low pigtails hiting her back (A/N: Think of tsunade's hairstyle.), with two small red and black stars hanging to the ties on each side of the pigtails, loosely hung. She had crimson red eyes that had a dash of sliver, and something else...something showing more emotionally-based...hatred, maybe? She also had two plain sliver hoop earrings, and two more silver piercings on her right ear. She had a depressed look on her face, yet she still looked as innocent as a newborn baby. She wore a red kohona headband that was tied loosely around her waist, and a grey, worn-out, leather choker with a glazed star bottle that contain a red liquid...it resembled...blood...She was also wearing a shirt resembling Ino's, but pitch black. A belly ring was visible in between the bandages around her stomach; it had a silver crescent moon on it with a small ruby jewel filling in the missing part of the moon. She had bandages tightly wrapped around her arms and stomach. Her hands had black, wrist length gloves that were fingerless. She wore a very baggy, dark red (almost black) skirt, that reached a bit past her thigh. She had a dark red kunai holester hanging on her left side; it look like it was practically falling off. She wore a silver scroll holder the same way but hanging on her right side instead. It carried lots of scrolls with a strange insignias on it. Last but not least, her shoes were same as Tsunade's, but with crimson red laces that went up to her knee. "It's been too, long Zaza-chan.", Sakura said, beaming down at her. Zaara simply smirked. "Hai...much too long."
Well that's chapter one (cough) remix (cough) and since I didn't keep my promise about chap 2 I'll give youmy loyalreaders a pic of Zaara soon when my friend emails it to me chapter two should come soon maybe in June since I have to finish my exams ( T.T) I HATE TESTS! Well please Rate and review and if you have any ideas for the story please tell me and remember this is my first story.
Hana No Chi
