Ug! The first chapter was… shit to say the least. Not many reviews (But lots of thanx to the people who did review). So I'll just write up this one and see if it does better, if not I'll probably kill this story chop up the limbs and boil it in a tub of acid. Also I probably should have said this last chapter but this story is more of a T+ maybe even an M-. For language and a lot of violence which I hope to get into later if this story survives. Anyways on the story thing!

During the fight with Neji

These humans were riding his last nerve. They were stepping into a zone they should not be in. It is one thing to assault them for feeding on something they need, but it's a whole different situation when they walk into your home and act as our betters. Neji could not take it anymore. He was in a fury and needed a vent. Unfortunately for the girl with her hair tied back in buns. She was standing in front of it, the ferocity behind his blows were astounding. Not only did her bones creak with each blow but entire anatomy was shaken. She was a pincushion and Neji was playing the roll of a seamstress (except for the women part lol.) She was not skilled enough to lay a hand on him. Hinata, who had been standing back from the fight this entire time, looked all over the room to see her comrades falling to the vampires. She looked up and saw a sight she would have rather not seen. TenTen was gradually and slowly being beaten to death. Her life was slowly ebbing away. She was grasping to a single strand of life that was threatened to be cut at any moment. She had to do something, but what could she do? She was definitely one of the weaker ones on the team and some of the most experienced were being beaten like a child by an adult. She had seen enough. No matter how hard she would like to avoid conflict, she just could not stand this abuse to her friends any longer. She darted behind the one called Neji and prepared a stake. After a slight hesitation she pulled back and thrust it deep within his pale flesh. He gasped as he felt this crude weapon penetrate his back. He took a swipe at the intruder and hissed letting a dangerous growl vibrate through his throat. Just then Hinata jumped back and told all the others to collect there friends and leave.

During the fight with Shikamaru

(Damn this is getting tedious) Shikamaru may have been the laziest and most probably the weakest, but in no way did he lack in brainpower. He could predict your movements and in the same moment play with your mind making you move best for his advantage. He constantly taunted and provoked the blonde girl named Ino and enraged her to the point where she would become careless with her movements. She had become quite reckless to the point where she had only but one thought in her mind: KILL THAT BASTARD! She couldn't stand his constant wit. His tongue hurt almost as much as his fists. She would just love to rip that tongue out. Her attempts were to no avail however.

"You are one of the most pathetic excuses for a hunter I have ever seen in my life. Not only do you lack skill itself but your hits are like an annoying pest buzzing around my head." She was sick with his antics and chose to ignore him.

"What wrong? Did I offend you? Or is it just that you finally realized that you can stop wasting air that some useful people could use by shutting that vacuum of yours?" She had snapped. She let many of her vital areas open when she lunged at him. This proved to be a huge mistake. With an inhuman speed he struck every last pressure point. Something had stopped him from hitting more deadly areas but was still satisfied when that annoying bitch collapsed to the floor immobile and incapacitated. He hadn't been paying attention so he must have missed when someone signaled for the hunters to retreat. The barely wounded grabbed the severely wounded and ran like high hell was chasing them. All except for one. That poor soul was damned.

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"Good you're awake. I want you to feel this." An unfamiliar voice spat. The world was tinted due to his sunglasses. The man looked down through his tainted world and saw that he had been bound from head to toe and was in no place to compromise. He looked up to see the blonde vampire staring down at him. The sinister look on his face was unnerving even to the calm man tied down. He refused though to grant them the pleasure to see him squirm. He merely looked at them and stood his composure. "You fucked us over! Look what you did to our home." He looked around indeed to find it in complete disarray. Blood spatters almost soaked the floor and the walls. It was like a horror film. He was the victim. "I am personally going to bite you, let you heal those wounds I gave you, then I'll break every bone in your motherfuckin' body, let them heal and then do it all again. You have no clue how annoying it is for us when we go out for a meal and get up to see a fucking gun barrel in your face."

"When I eat I don't kill innocent people." Shino said still in his calm demeanor.

"You will though. As I said before, once your bones heal more and more your hunger will build. No one can deny their hunger. So when it gets to great for you. We will untie you and unleash you on your little precious fucking humans. Then we will see who is wrong. If we are wrong for eating humans, then you prove it to us. You will realize. It is not so easy." Naruto growled, the venom in his voice dripping.

Then, he began the process. Shino did not scream as he promised himself. But the next part proved to be much more difficult. They took turns as if it were a game to them. Neji was put into a near death status as that stake Hinata attacked him with skinned his heart. I suppose this was payback for the hell the hunters had given them even if the vampires had won in the end. They kept beating him and beating him. They started with the legs, then his ribs, arms, and then finally his face. That blunt weapon owned him. He was its bitch and it was his master. Many times did he find himself stifling shrieks of pain. They had no mercy on him. After one especially bad night Shino received a well deserved rest. The next morning though was worse. It seemed to carry on that way. The only time they weren't beating him was when they fed, slept or if he had gotten an extreme beating and needed to heal. But unfortunately for his new increased healing rate, it didn't last long. It was the last night and they all knew it. Shino was starting to sweat and teethe. His body was filled by a thirst that could not be quenched by any beverage; he had grown a hunger that no food could suffice. He could no longer keep down his blood lust. The last night they did not beat him. They ate in front of him. This proved to be the worst punishment of all. The occasional wafts of blood and flesh were enough to make him go insane. They smiled at him and walked over they undid his binds and stepped back, letting him do as he pleased. Sure enough he leapt for the doorway and was gone.

He fed on three people that night. He was covered in blood when he came back to the only place he knew accepted people like him, if he was even human at all. He loathed himself. He watched the terror in their faces. He enjoyed it. For that, would he never forgive himself. It was his nature though and he did what he must to remain of this world.

He opened the door and saw four faces look up from a T.V. they had somehow gotten. They smiled menacingly at him seeing the blood covering his face. He didn't say anything to them and walked over to a nearby chair to watch the T.V.

"How was it?" Asked Naruto, interested on how it went.

"It was amazing" He replied nonchalantly. Sasuke smirked as he was at least being honest.

"Are you coming to feed tomorrow with us? Shikamaru asked.

"I suppose I'm going to have to if I wish to keep my body properly sustained." He replied again in a tone implying he was in no mood to talk. Satisfied with their new apprentice they began watching the television again.

"One question, what was it like being a hunter? Did you all decide one day that 'hey we're gonna' fuck up a few vampires while they try to eat'? Neji asked. It took a while for him to answer as if he were weighing the possible outcomes.

"I suppose most hunters are hunters because they lost someone dear to them to a bloodsucker. A few are in it for the thrill of being an inch away form life or death."

"Why did you?" Naruto asked.

"I lost my brothers. They screamed and yelled but we could not get to them in time. It was… unfortunate."

"That fuckin' sucks" Naruto spoke. Those last words were followed by a very awkward silence which after they decided to drop the conversation and call it a… day.

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"Alright then, we're gonna' teach you how to hunt." Shikamaru told him. "As you probably figured out how to do the basics last night we're gonna' skip right to the fun." He continued. They immediately started moving. They leaped from one rooftop to the next.

"The key to hunting is stealth" Sasuke told him. "Make your movements more fluid and easy and make as little sound as possible. Once you find prey you don't just jump right in there and fuck em' up. You have to wait. Wait until the area is clear and they are alone, preferably in a secluded place. The best and the worst to people to eat are probably drug dealers. They may taste like shit but once you loot their corpses they're usually loaded from previous dealings that night, and they have lots of drugs. Personally none of us do drugs but it's a great lure for more food." Sasuke finished.

"Also occasionally you have those tasty girls who have never done drugs before and are just looking for something new." Naruto chimed in. "It's usually not good to eat a guy on drugs though the taste is horrible. Still it's free and easy and also I've grown an acquired taste to them." Naruto then said. Neji to lazy to give advice just nodded at all the previous comments.

"See that guy over there? He has the smell of drugs all over him. Now watch and learn" Naruto told him. At that he leaped down and approached the drug dealer. After awhile of talking Naruto flashed a bit of money and they continued to talk. The dealer then took out a baggie of something and Naruto new he had hit the jackpot. With a swiping blow he smashed the dealers head to the wall and left a trail of juices and blood down the wall as he slid to the ground. Naruto bent over and drank him dry. After a while of going through his pockets he found what he was looking for. He started leaping back up to where Shino was and handed him the drugs.

"Now, I want you to go to anyone you see and ask if they're looking for drugs. The best part is it doesn't matter if they are or aren't, if they're alone they're food. Also if they happen to be a cop it doesn't matter you have to kill him and anyone else in the area. If they are looking for something make sure you take them to a secluded place alright?" Naruto asked. Shino merely nodded and was on his way. Then all the others also split to find their own food.

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I know that was shorter then the first chapter but I don't want to spend a lot of time writing if it just turns out no one is going to review. If people don't then I might kill this story. Can you sleep at night knowing you killed a story? So review.

Later.