Summery: How in keeping w/ Hiei's personality is this?

I'll let you be the judge. A poem about Hiei. What happens

When lack of sleep & utter boredom meet, Enjoy!

Hiei: Looks up curiously from his place on the couch watching TV.

"What are you doing little onna?"

Jenna: "Nothing really, just writing a poem."

Hiei: Raises an eyebrow & gets up to come stand behind me, while

reading quietly to himself. Then he looks at me.

Jenna: "What? This is a poem that I actually wrote more than 15 yrs

ago, but I think that it fits you to a tee….well what do you think?"

Hiei: "I wish you ningen's would stop trying to analyze me before I

feel the need to rip your throats out."

Jenna: "Be nice or I'll take away your sweet snow privileges."

Hiei: "As if you could."

Jenna: "Hiei." Scolds him in Vietnamese while giving a death glare

that beats his, hands down.

Hiei: He shrinks back under the weight of said glare & grumbles.

"Damn ningen female, I should have slit your throat when I had the

chance…grumble, grumble."

Jenna: "What was that, I couldn't quite catch that last part?"

Hiei: "Nothing human, just do the disclaimer already."

Jenna: Pouts! "Na hu…I'll only do it if you be nice & apologize

to me."

Hiei: Glares daggers, then rolls his eyes. SIGH "Fine little one,

I'm sorry, I don't really want to hurt you, your to cute for that. Happy now?"

Jenna: Smiles cutely. "Immensely Hiei, there's sweet snow in the freezer

if you want."

Hiei: He cocks his head to the side, then looks toward the kitchen. "You sure?"

Jenna: Laughs. "Yah, just don't make yourself sick."

Hiei: Red eyes light w/ amusement & he chuckles. "Hn…" He disappears into

the kitchen. His rich voice carries into the room. "Do the disclaimer, onna!"

Jenna: "Yah, yah, I heard you the first time sheesh….I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho,

or it's characters, if I did, Hiei would have a mate & my children would have a

different Sire."

Hiei: Leans out of the kitchen. "What are you doing now, little tiger?" He comes

& reads over my shoulder, before I can stop him. Then he looks down at me

w/ a contemplating look in his feral crimson eyes.

Jenna: BLUSHES, & looks away from his intensity. "He, he, he, he,…

Anyway on w/ the writing, hope you all like it."

Nightmares

The day dawns black.

The world as cold as my heart.

No souls today.

They've gone to play.

Never to return.

Gone away.

As I wake from my slumber.

To nightmares of ever more.

Hiei: "That was actually quite good, if a bit dark even for my tastes."

Jenna: Think so? Well what do you all think out there, did I get Hiei's

Character down? Let me know as it tends to inspire me."

Hiei: "Hn…for a little thing, you sure talk a lot."

Jenna: "Shut it! You psycho pyromaniac!"

Hiei: Chuckles darkly.

Jenna: "Till next time, Ja Ne all….bye."

END

Author's Note: I gave up precious sleep to get this out to

you fine folks. So no flames please, as they will be used

to warm my cozy bed so I can finally get some sleep…Amen!