well here is the first actuall chapter. It probably sucks but i won't know untill someone reads it and reveiws it so please reveiw at the end. It might motivate me to write more. Any ideas for the story would help. soooooooooooooo yeah.

Disclamer:I Don't own kingdom heart but i wish i did. don't we all.


Chapter 1: Riku

My head starts to hurt from the loud music so while I'm going to change the CD I turn down the music some. And then I have an urge to dance. So I dance. Then I hear a knock at my door.

"Mom go away." I yell. But then I hear another knock. Thinking it's my dad I yell,

"Come in."

If you ever heard anyone come in a room quieter, you would be lying. Whoever it was remained quiet. My dad said he loves when I dance so I keep dancing. That is until I turn around and see a silver-haired boy sitting on my bed. Surprised I go turn down the music and sit down near the boy on my bed.

"Hello my name's Kitiara." The boy doesn't say anything.

"What's your name?" I ask him trying to make conversation.

"Riku Miyahara." He finally answers. "I came over to see if you could turn down the music but,"

"I already turned it down." Finishing his sentence for him.

"Yeah."

We just kind of sat there. Not sure what to say. So there was a really awkward silence. And we just stared at each other,

Riku's POV

That girl Kitiara was just sitting there smiling at me. And it was quiet. Really quiet. Then her mom brought us up cokes. She hand me one.

"Thank you Mrs..."

"Oh, just call me Victoria. Mrs. Makes me feel old."

"Okay."

Then she left. And we were silent again. She sits there. Smiling. Drinking her coke.

'Come on Riku, say something.'

"Kitiara, are you doing anything today?"

"Why?"

"Well I figured you would like to meet some more people before school on Monday. So if you would like it, I could show you are and introduce you to people and stuff."

"Really?" I nod." well let me go tell me go tell my mom. You can wait in the living room."

She bounces out of the room. And if possible, she had a bigger smile on her face. So I follow her out of the room and stand next to the door. She comes skipping back.

'She is one strange girl.'

She goes out the door and holds it open for me.

"Thanx."

"No problemo."

I start walking toward the beach. That is probably where most everybody is.

"So miyahara," she starts

"You can call me Riku." I don't like people calling me by my last name.

"Okay, Riku, how long have you lived here?"

"Well, actually, I've lived here my whole life."

"Really! I can't imagine staying in one place but I guess that's just because I'm use to moving so much."

"Why do you move from place to place?"

"Well, I guess it's just whenever my parents think that it is time for a new place. They will just randomly decide to move."

"I don't think that I could live like that." How could anyone live like that not knowing where they were going to be the next day. Having to just drop everything and leave.

"After a while you get use to it. It adds excitement and adventure to your life. Anyways, where are we headed to?"

"The beach."

"Oh really. I love the beach." And she keeps on talking about how she love the sand between her toes and stuff like that. I suppose she changed the subject for a reason so I decide to let it drop. For now at least. We arrive and Kitiara stars skipping around in the sand being weird. And of the midst of all that I guess she didn't see my friends walk up.

"Who is she?" Tidus asks watching her start to build a sandcastle.

"New girl. She moved into the house that they built. Her name is Kitiara."

"Someone say my name?" she looks up, and seeing the group of people staring at her she gets up. "Hi." They all just look at her while she stands there smiling like there's no tomorrow. Maybe it was just my imagination but I thought I saw her checking Roxas out.

Tidus's POV

Kitiara was about 5'5". Beautiful jet black hair and her eyes. They are this like purplish-black color and depending on the way she stood they could look completely purple or completely black. She is wearing purple shorts and a pink halter bathing suit top.

Pointing, Riku introduced us. "Kitiara these are my friends: Roxas, Tidus, Kairi, Leon, Wakka and Namine. Everyone this is Kitiara."

She is smiling still. She has a beautiful smile. Her perfect white teeth look even whiter against her dark tan skin. Then she turned to look at the water.

"What are you looking at?" asked Namine.

"Is the water cold?" she answered the question with a question.

"Why?"

"Well, I want to go surfing." Ha I'm not the only one that wants to surf.

"That is what I was just saying we should do."

"No!" everyone else answered at once. I was about to protest but Kitiara said something first.

"Why not? It is a beautiful day."

"We were on our way to my house to watch movies." The red headed girl named Kairi answered.

"Oh," she sighs," well I'm going to get my board. You want to stay and surf with me Tidus?"

"Me?" I ask back in amassment.

"Are there any other Tidus's I should know about on this island? I don't want to be out here all by my lonesome." I would surf with her except for one problem.

"I don't have a surf board." I mumble hoping she wouldn't hear what I said, but apparently she did.

"Well then how were you going to surf?"

"I usually borrow a board from Riku."

"You can borrow one of mine. Follow me."

"I wouldn't do that if I were you." Kairi said. Why can't she ever keep quiet?

"Why not?" Kitiara asked with a puzzled look on her face.

"Because he has a habit of breaking surf boards." And she starts laughing along with everyone else. I then realize I'm blushing so tire at the sand next to my feet.

"That's okay," Kitiara whispers to me," you can still borrow one. The truth be told I break them sometimes to. It's just part of surfing."

"Are you sure?"

"Of course. We just have to run back to my house." We start to walk off. Then they notice.

"Hey. Where are you two going?" Riku yells.

"To go get surf boards." Kitiara shouts back." if anyone else wants to surf with us meet us back here." Then she jogs off and I have to run to catch up with her. We arrive at her house and she opens the garage. The place is huge. She walks up to a wall lined with surf boards and takes one down. It's a pink and black board decorated with skulls.

"Well pick one." She says looking at me.

"Anyone?"

"Yeah. Which ever one you like best. There all mine so don't worry. I kind of collect them. I've got to go change my shorts. Be back in a minute." That being said she goes inside and shuts the door. 'She sure has a lot of stuff' I think looking around. I look up at the surf boards and take a purple board down. I turn around and she walks out. She has a pair of black board shorts on in place of the purple jean ones.

"What are you looking at?" she asks and I divert my eyes to the floor.

"Nothing," I say, trying not to blush.

"Didja pick out a board?"

"Yeah," I hold up the purple board.

"Okay then. Let's go. Last one to the beach is a rotten egg." And she takes off running. I watch her for a minute before jogging after her. While she runs her black hair streams behind her like a river. When I get there I see Kitiara and Riku taking. Wakka and Leon were there too.

"Anyone else coming?" I ask walking up to them.

"Yeah. Roxas is spose to come." Riku says just as Roxas walks up.

"hey Leon," Roxas said," I didn't know you surfed."

"What are you an idiot or something? Of course I surf." Leon stated as if everyone should know that. I turn toward the water to see Kitiara sitting on her surf board out there waiting.

Kitiara's POV

'I wonder what their talking about?' I wadded and watched them talk. Then they started to paddle out. 'I suppose they realized I was out here already.' I see Tidus first then the rest. Knowing they were out here I started my surf day. There were some pretty decent waves and after a few hours I just hung back and watched them. Riku spotted me and paddled over.

"What? You tired already?"

"No. I just have had enough for today. So, is there anyone else I should know about?"

"Well, Sora is at his father's house this weekend so you'll meet him on Monday. And…"

"Who's Sora?" I ask seeing Riku smile while he was talking about Sora.

"Just one of the guys." Was I just imagining it or was he blushing. I decide I would be nice and change the subject. Seeing as Tidus was coming over to join us.

"Hey guys. What are yall talking about?"

"Nothing," I reply," hey I have an idea. Why don't we go hang out at my house? We could order pizza."

"Did some body say pizza?" Wakka said as the last two joined the group.

"Yes. We were just discussing going over to my house for a while. Do you guys want to come?"

"Yeah/ sure." they were saying.

"I can't," Leon stated. "I have something to do."

"You mean someone." Tidus said and giggled.

"Shut up, Tidus!" and he smacks Tidus upside the head.

"That's okay Leon. I guess I'll catch up with you later. Stop by if you can. Feel free to bring anything I mean one with you." Sensing what I meant Leon mumbled bye and walked off while Tidus started giggling again. Then the rest of us started walking to my house.


So there you go. as you can see it sucks.

Riku:And as you can see she has no self confidence. So please review and motivate her. I want to see my S

BlueFlames:shhh. any ways. i do have confidence do ignore him but if you review ill give you a hug. no well i guess you get a cookie. but not a glass of milk. lol. get it. well if you don't never mind. well till next time this is me signing off. review and have a good night.