Hello! I am back….. thanks for the reviews. Oh and I'll have to tell you I won't respond to any questions in the reviews because all my chapters will be premade. But if you have any constructive criticism then I'll take it as I read my reviews. Let the story begin:
I stared around at the car yard as my brething decreased. "I…I can't beleive-", but I was cut off by, who I instantly recognized as the voice of Kleiver. "Whats a scrawny little girl like you doing in a big yard full of my vehicles?". I stared at him. He still looked like he did in the game. Then I brought up my hand and found out I had transformed into an animated state. I gasped and rubbed my hands together. Then I snapped back to my current situation. " I uh…um..I come from...Haven...annnd..", I began to lie,"I need to see Damas..uh..please.", I casually put my hands behind my back. He rubbed his chin,"Hmmm…so Haven dumped you out, eh?". He walked closer and she took one step back. "What did you do?". I sat frozed as I tried to think of another reasonable lie. "I uh…um…". But just then, thankfully Damas walked in," What is going on here?", he scrutinized me,"And who is this?". Kleiver looked down at me. "Uhh..I'm Kirsten.". "Well why are you here?". "I um..was dumped into the wasteland by Haven". Wow was my video game info coming in handy! " Ah a juvenile delinquent?", he slightly smiled. I smiled back and nodded. "Well we will find use of you but right now-", he turned to Kleiver," When will Jak be back?". I quietly gasped," Jak?". Damas and Kleiver looked down at me. Damas asked suspiciously," You know him little girl?". I yet again dug for an answer," Ya..I uh, heard of him.", I said scratching behind my ear and looking at one of the cars.
Damas also said," You must have done something very bad if they chopped off you ears". I looked up at him and fingered the round point of my ear."Um..I need a private word with you your highness", I covered my mouth. Shit! He looked at me with another suspicious glance," Fine…". We walked out of the car yard and on the grounds of the city. I spoke softly," Listen please. You HAVE to believe me!", I said and looked around," I..I'm not from this planet.". I guestured toward the people on the streets," On my planet, people don't carry around large guns, don't have pointy ears, and don't wear the same style of clothes.". She looked back up at him. It looked like he wasn't buying it but he said," Don't worry, we will take care of you". He turned back into the car yard," Go into that house over there for now", he poity at one of the houses," A friend of mine will feed and clothe you, but for now I am busy". I looked at the house and back at him to thank him, but the door shut. I shrugged and walked over to the house.
I knocked on the door and a woman with blonde hair and a soft face answered," Yes?". I paused for a moment," Um, the king would like for you to help me". She just looked at me for a moment, then smiled," Come in".
Luna, that was her name, was very nice to me. She fixed me my dinner and talked to me. "So how old you be?", she asked as she sat next to me, and ate. "I'm only twelve". "Strange ears and clothes you have". I paused,"Uhhhh, it's a long story.". We continued eating and she showed me my room. I sat on the bed and thought before I turned off the light. What if I never got home? My mom is probably crying her eyes out now. I layed down and muffled the rather large candle. This was gonna be a long adventure.
