Hey!I am back. I've got some news. You judge wether its good or bad for yourself. Like, my aunt was washing my clothes and she accidently washed the floppy disc with my stories on it, sooooo, it might take a bit longer for me to update my stories. Oh! Now I can reply to your reviews because I decided not to premake my stories, and I want to thank some of you for giving me constructive criticism.
I woke up, yawning. Why did it feel really early? As soon as I opened my eyes I put on a puzzled face. It was still dark outside! But then I realized what had awaken me. I heard the screech of a car outside. I ran to the window but the sound was coming from the car yard. I put my boots on and sprinted downstairs. I suddenly stopped and listened. I would have to be quieter as not to wake up Luna. I tiptoed out side and gently closed the door. I finally let out a loud sigh and started toward the car yard. I looked behind me but me not paying attention led to an immediate collision. Well, except I fell and Jak….Jak! I gasped and attempted to say something. But he didn't help because he just held his hand out and waited for me to say something. My mouth went open..then closed…..then open again. But I finally spoke,
"Sorry".
"No problem. And who are you?", he replied.
"I'm uh, Kirsten", I said, my stomach wriggling.
"Well why are you out so late?", he said looking around.
Well that was the whole problem. I came out to see him and I was going to tell him that? I would sound like a stalker. Lies usually work, but Jak was just to friggin' subtle. Well, I would just have to try.
"I was hungry so I decided to do some late night shopping", I said trying to put on an innocent face, yet one with attitude. And he obviously liked it or something cause he put one on, too.
"So where do you come from?",he asked. Daxter, by the way was asleep on the side of Jak's head.
"Uh, Haven. They got rid of me.", I lied and put my hands behind me. He frowned,
"Same here", he said and put his arms to his sides,"What did a rather small citizen like you do?". I pouted a bit but answered him.
"I destroyed a building here and there until they finally got agitated of me. And you?".
He put his hands on his waist and looked up," I destroyed more of like a whole quarter of the city". He looked rather proud of himself. I grinned and laughed a little. He looked down at me and put on another half-smile. I stopped and blushed. My head drooped so he couldn't see me. But I just knew he could tell.
"Well", he said,"I guess I'll see you around". He walked past me and I didn't move. I finally turned around and said,
"Ya.".
I walked over to Luna's home and opened the door. Lifting up my head, I turned it and looked for Jak but he was gone. I sighed and walked in toward my room. When I was there I sat on my bed and twidled my thumbs. I thought for a moment and laughed under my breath. He was flirty with every girl. Well, except when he's talking about war and battle tactics. Then I thought about Ashelin and my smile fell a bit. She's so- NO! I shook my head and fell on my bed (hey!I'm a poet and I don't know it!) My eyes drooped a bit. It would be so cool to hang out with him…. My eyes dropped and I fell asleep. Maybe eventually I would be able to. But I seriously doubt it. That kinda stuff only happens in my dreams. But to even barely get there, I have to be outgoing and clever. I'm not so good at that though. But….well, I'll try anyway.
Like it? I hope you do, and I'm real sorry if my grammar is bad, but I'm really trying you guys!
