Hello!I would just like to say, I'm sorry that the chapters are so short! On Microsoft Word, they look long. I promise I'll try to make them longer and separate the dialogue! BTW, I looked at the Mary Sue society. I don't know if I could deal with that sight. I'm already confused as it is, so I don't know. I'm trying my best. And like, I just noticed that another girl made a story just like mine! Only hers dealt with Jak II. But its pretty cool! If you like this story you would love hers! But I can't help you because I can't remember the name or author! Sorry!
Once again, I woke up rather uncomfortable. I had slept with my arms crossed and my legs, too. I tried to just hop up. I moaned and rubbed my inner thigh. It had a rather large bruise on it.
"Dammit, why is it so bruised?". It looked rather intense for a normal soar. Anyway, I slipped my boots on again, and trotted downstairs. Luna already started eating. She looked up at me and said,
"Sorry I didn't wake you up. You looked mean?", I asked as I sat down.
"Well, you were smiling, and squeezing your pillow", she smiled and held her head with her fist," So what were you dreaming of little lady?". I instantly looked her in the eyes,
"You-you knew what happened?", I asked nervously. She nodded grinning,
"And I was watching your face the whoooole time. You thought you wouldn't wake me up?". I shook my head, still staring at her. She flicked my nose,
"Your in love", she grinned and bit off a piece of bread.
"I most certainly am NOT!", I said and shoved a bunch of food in my mouth.
"I saw the way you looked at him…but-", she looked at me funny," You just met him right? You seem to know a lot about him. Damas told me. And he also told me about…", she looked at my ears. I stared in confusion for a second then spoke,
"Oh!Oh ya…", I whispered and lightly touched my ear," Its confusing. You see, on my planet, we have video games. They're mixtures of animation, light and color, all in a TV screen. We have controls that we use to make the characters move and use any ability needed or just wanted. Well, and Jak is one of them.". I ate a bit of an egg and continued," The game usually goes by a storyline, and I think even now, the storyline is happening in real life on this planet.". Luna seemed to be following quite well. She inquired rather excitedly," S-so you now what going to happen with Jak? Anybody else?". I nodded,
"Damas, Seem, Kleiver, and tons of others. But-", I grinned," Not you!". She frowned,
"Oh yes, I feel oh so special.". I laughed.
"Hey, you should go see if Damas wants you for anything", she suggested. I nodded,
"Alright, I guess I should go.", I started to the door but stopped," Um, you uh, have something I can wear?", I asked. She smiled and stood up.
Luna gave me some really nice clothes and some equipment. She gave me a tan vest that showed my belly, a thin white top with a high neck to go under. Some forest green breeches and some Black Hand gloves. For my own purposes, a gun holder that fit on my thigh and a larger one that was on my back with suspenders to hold it over my shoulders. I thought I looked nice. When I asked her why I had gun sheaths, she said that Damas would give even a seven year old a weapon.That was pretty cool.
I was already on the elevator to Damas's throne. It was really slow. I twiddled with the gun pocket on my thigh as I wondered if I'd ever get there. But then the elevator stopped and I was looking at the beautiful fountains, and the wasteland leader in his throne. I slowly made my way to him and bowed. He arose and said,
"We will try our best to train you to be a fine female warrior when you get older. No one makes it to the wasteland just so we can protect them and feed them. You will soon have to hold your own. So we will assign you a teacher. Well, rather let you meet him now. He is waiting to train you in weaponry, first hand combat, and vehicle skills. After long weeks of lessons and labor, you will be assigned a permanent job that you will hold till you die. You will be promoted to harder jobs as you get older and it comes easier to you. Do you understand?". I nodded,
"Yes sir!".
"Good. Your teacher will be waiting for you on the bay. Now go! I am busy.". I bowed and walked back onto the elevator. I took a last glance at Damas before the elevator began to lower.
I waited yet another long trip down the tunnel and stepped off as soon as it stopped, and before I would be taking a second trip up. I walked through the town of which civilians were traveling freely. The air smelled of gun powder and baked goods. A strange mix, but one I would probably have to get used to. I made my way to the beach and stepped over large ledges and deep sand just trying to get there. When I reached the bay, I shaded my eyes in search of my instructor. But I saw no one. I walked around looking hard. This place was a lot bigger in real life. I brought my hand up and studied the animation. Obviously no one could tell they were animated around here. But when you were actually an animation it seemed more real than watching it on the TV screen. I was about to give up when I saw something yellow, like hair poking over some rocks. I made my way closer to investigate. I finally reached the spot and my eyes widened. I realized I was on the bay, and Jak was my instructor.
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