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Chapter 23

Flashback on The Pearl:

"Where is she Jack? Where is your daughter?" Davy Jones roared, at Jack, pinning him to the foremast by the throat, with his giant claw.

"How the hell should I know? You're the one who kidnapped her. I should be asking you that question." Jack snapped, although privately thanking whatever miracle had spared his daughter up to this point.

"You'd best not be playing games with me Jack Sparrow. I don't much like games, and your daughter will pay the price for the loser. And the price in this game, Jack, is painful, bloody, death. I think I'll be taking that compass of yours, just as a good faith payment. Until I get my key back." Davy said, his tentacles gripping Jack's compass in a vice-like grip.

"But, uh… I might need it to find her." Jack said.

"I don't think you will Jack, not if you want her live." Davy Jones said, and vanished with his crew.

"Jack, what are we going to do now? If he finds her…" Mari dared not finish the sentence, she didn't need to.

"If she isn't on the Dutchman, then we have little hope of finding her without that compass. And if Jones finds out how to work it…" Jack said

"Lord help us all." Gibbs finished for him.