My 1000 view special. Yup, I'm famous. (Not really) anyways here is the remake of the Hyuga hulk chapter one. I'll probably post the original as another story.
Also, shoutout to SPark681 for being an awesome fan. You're awesome!
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NEJI HYUGA vs. HINATA HYUGA
"Oh no…" Hinata muttered to herself. Neji knew everything about her accidents and she didn't want naruto or the village to know anything about it. Only the hokage and her team knew. She didn't even know what it was. A demon? A monster? Hinata was growing in panic. What if she loses it. She could hurt somebody! Naruto may not want anything to do wi… Naruto?
Naruto put his hand on her shoulder. "You got this!" "Yeah..." Hinata said with a small smile as she walked the stairs to face her cousin. As the two Hyuga walked towards each other, neji felt all the years of hatred and disgust rushing back. If she didn't have that damn curse, his father….could've been alive. "Never thought I'd be facing you, monster!" He sneered. A chill was sent down Hinata's body. She wasn't prepared for neji. Shino, who's normally calm, was scared shitless. He remembered the mission that nearly costed his team's lives
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"HINATA!" Kurenai yelled as Hinata crashed into a tree. She was currently getting her ass kicked as they were engaged in a battle with rogue ninja. Kiba and Shino were nearby but far enough to not be able to help hinata. For the whole trip, Hinata was stuck by Shino. Shino was quiet. She loved quiet. She needed quiet. But without quiet, she felt….angry. ANGRY! Kurenai came to attack but immediately stopped when hinata put her hands around the man's neck. She squeezed, snapping it which killed him. Shino and Kiba came rushing back as soon as they heard the man scream his last to see Hinata growing in size and her skin turning a dark green.
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Hinata wanted to run. She really did but something was stopping her. Oh, it was obvious. Oh, naruto. How she admired him so. Hinata didn't realize that she took her eyes off of neji and turned to the blonde. Neji immediately caught on. "Are you seriously in love with the village runt." He said. "He isn't?!" Kurenai said to herself. Neji is playing with fire. She had to tranquilize Hinata every time she had an incident which was twice.
"Who's he talking about." Naruto asked Sakura, his teammate. Sakura shrugged. "What do you mean,"runt"." Hinata said. She can sorta take anything anyone throws at her word wise but naruto. Just no. "What do you think will happen if you start dating. Everyone will call you a freak. Oh wait, you already are. Aren't you, sweet weak hinata. A ticking time bomb who doesn't even remember what it does after it sets. Do you remember what happened to my father, hinata?" Neji asked. "W..w...what."
Hinata hasn't seen her uncle since 5 years ago. "You were kidnapped as a young girl. You then were cursed by the same man who took you. The hulk curse." Neji explained. "What's that." Naruto asked lee. "All neji told me was that one who has it, when angry, turns into this big green beast named hulk." Lee explained. "The effects after getting are extremely severe. You went crazy and immediately murdered that man. However, the clan he belonged to called this unfair and demanded the death of your father. But he made my father do it instead. All because you were born!" Neji explained. "Why! What did they want with me?" Hinata asked intensely. She didn't care that everyone saw she was crying. She was responsible for two people's death. "Your eyes and revenge against Hiashi. Why else would anyone want you out of everyone else. And about that thing inside you." Neji flashes and appears behind Hinata and hits her with the 64 palm technique. "I want a chance to kill it myself." Hinata falls to her knees. "NO!" Her inner mind screamed. She was doing so good without an accident for a while. The worst thing for Hinata was that it hurt. It hurts so much in her body when she transforms. Her mind feels like it's being taken over. "H..h..help me." She tried to get out but it was too late. Kurenai was about to move but a part of her wanted to see what would happen.
Hinata began growing. Her skin turned a dark green. She grew more muscular and, in time, size. Her hoodie slightly tore and the zipper broke apart. Her hands had a huge grasp on her head as if she's fighting for control. Then everything stopped. Hinata was gone. Her hands released from her head and clenched into fists, revealing the true face of anger. Everyone in the room was in absolute shock, especially naruto. He always thought of Hinata as this weird, shy girl but he never thought she had this kinda power. Hulk roars and goes for a punch. Neji dodges and activates byakugan. Hulk activates hers without even having to move. "Impressive. But your defeat is already sealed with this move." Neji said as he went for her arm. He hit her chakra point.
Nothing
"WHAT. Impossible! How are you not affected." Neji said, slightly stepping back. He was starting to panic. No one hasn't been affected by the chakra point cancellation before. Hulk roared and ran towards Neji, punching him in the face. He flies to the wall, slightly spitting blood. Hulk then grabbed his foot and slammed him into the ground. Naruto was dumbfounded. She was just like him. For the first time ever, he could relate to someone about his demon. "GO, hinata." He yelled. Neji,at this point, was basically defeated but his pride didn't let him go. Neji tries a gentle fist but Hulk's hand grabs his. Hulk smiled and squeezed his hand, breaking it. Neji squints in pain. Hulk is about to punch him but Kurenai pins her with a tranquilizer, calming her down. She shrinks back into normal hinata. She opens her eyes to see Neji injured and everyone staring at her. Even gaara was interested. Naruto and lee jumped down to the floor to help their friends
"Hinata, you ok?" Naruto asked. "Did I… do this." Hinata asked shyly. She hated to admit it. She was a monster. She didn't even notice that she started crying again. "Yeah..., but it was awesome." Naruto assured. "How does he do that? He always knows what to say." She thought, blushing.
Neji came to her more angry than ever. "This changes NOTHING! You're still a wild animal who needs to be caged!" Neji yelled. "Says the guy who got his hand crushed by a girl. Leave her alone." Naruto shouted back. "Hm." Neji sneered as he left with the medics.
"Interesting. Maybe hinata can show naruto things no one else could. Kakashi observed.
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Everyone, I'm so sorry this took a long time to get out. I'm not gonna give any excuse for being lazy. I just wanted this to be perfect. And I think it is. What do you think of this remake? And also thanks for 1000 views.
