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Chapter 11: The road to Marik

Meerice an interesting young woman, old and young at the same time I could since an age to her no human should ever have. No human but me that is.

They arrived at the airport quickly and explained the situation that she was to lead them to Marik, Kaiba grumbled about having to rent another car. Finally he stormed off and went to rent one. Leaving everyone waiting for him to get everything ready suddenly Meerice stepped up to Rachel.

"I wish to duel you" Meerice says looking on with determination before asking "Do you accept?"

Rachel smirks her grin wide and almost wicked looking, "Sure, I'll accept."

Meerice smiles in return laughs and frowns suddenly "Very well my move first" she says drawing her first 5 cards the look on her face even worse. But she Looks decisive she makes her move. "I play a monster face down in defense, and now it's your turn to move" She says as she ends her turn.

Rachel draws, and smirks even wider if that was possible. "Some people will never learn, time for me to pull off a one turn win," she says, with a laugh. "First, I play Pot of Greed," she says, and draws 2 cards. "Now, I play the magical Walkuren Ritt!" Suddenly a bright light shines around them, and 4 figures start descending appearing on the field. "Now I summon Valkyrie Sovite (1600/1600), Valkyrie Brunhilde (1800/2000 + 1200), Valkyrie Altest (1600/1600), and Valkyrie Dritt (1000/1800)!" The Valkyries emerge; the face down monster is destroyed. "Now, Altest gains the amount of attack points equal to that monster's attack, and Dritt gains 100 attack, I'll then summon Spear Dragon (1900/0)!" The spear nosed dragon appears.

Meerice looks on with empty eyes, but still with a frown of discontent, "Your monster gained altogether 850 attack points."
Rachel says, and smirks. "Now my monsters, direct attack!" The 5 monsters dive at Meerice. (1100 + 3300 + 1900 + 1600 + 2450 10350) the warriors swords cut apart Meerice spilling her blood around the area before the spear dragon pins her to the ground with it's spear like nose. "You lose."

Meerice looks towards Rachel smiling as the holographic blood fades away, she gets up and walks over then holds her hand out to shake. "Thank you, I know how I can improve now".

Rachel nods, and shakes your hand before walking away from Meerice.

Meanwhile a short distance away

"Lets see what you've got. Shall we?" Stryder said standing in front of wanderer blocking him from going to watch the duel.

"Fine your on I'll even let you take the first turn" Wanderer says activating his chaos disk. "Oh, your too kind." Stryder says as he slides on his black disk and draws his cards.
"I'll start with this in Def. mode, and laying this face down. Your move."

"Alright" wanderer drew and "I'll set these three cards and summon a monster in face down defense position. Your move"

Stryder draws "I'll play my change of heart to take your monster"

"Oh goodie there goes my soul tiger."

"Relax, I won't keep it. I tribute both my monster and yours for this Tyrant Dragon! Attack his LP directly."

"Ooh nice I'll activate my fairy box and choose heads"

"So what does that do?"

"Your monsters attack is reduced to 0 by my fairy boxes effect since I've called it right."

"I hate to be the holder of bad news, but you forgot the ability. Traps can't target tyrant Dragon. So your trap card is null and void."

"No way damn it all" wanderer said the huge dragon breathing fire at him burning away hair and flesh.

"I'm afraid so. So you lose 2900 LP. I end my turn."

"Well I'm at 5100 big deal" wanderer drew " I'll set this monster on the field and end my turn your move"

Stryder Drew "I'll set this in Defense, and lay this face down on the field. I won't attack this turn. Your move."

Wanderer drew "well thanks for skipping your turn I guess now say bye, bye to your monsters as I flip summon my cyber jar!" wanderer draws five cards and shows them to his opponent opticlops (goes on the field in attack position), magic jammer, dark magician, mask of darkness (is set on the field) and pot of greed.

"Well, I would have been out no matter what I did. Mine are Magic Jammer, Metal Morph, Divine Dragon Ragnorok (goes in face down Def.), Cyber Jar (Goes face down Def.), and Witch of the Black Forest (goes face down Def.) It's still your turn."

"Alright I set this card and since I can't flip up my monster I attack your cyber jar with my opticlops activating it's effect." wanderer draws another five cards berserk gorilla in attack, roulette barrel in defense, disc fighter in defense, dark hole and trap hole.

"First I get Witches effect, (takes Summoner of Illusions and shuffles) and now I get Spear Dragon (FD def.), Raigeki, Heavy Strom, The flute of Summoning Dragon, and Graceful Charity. Thanks for the magic cards, and it's still your turn."

"I know so first my berserk gorilla has to attack so he destroys your face down spear dragon."

"Not quite my negate attack ends your battle phase saving my spear dragon" the mystical circle appears absorbing the gorilla's fire blast.

"Fine I go to my second main phase and I play pot of greed then set another card then summon my gagagigo and end my turn."

"My turn I draw, now I activate Call of The Haunted, to bring back my Tyrant Dragon. Its third effect says I must Tribute a Dragon if it is returned from the Graveyard. So Spear Dragon is gone. And since Tyrant can't be targeted by Traps, its freed from the equip of Call of the Haunted. Now I play Raigeki."

"Did you forget about my magic jammer? I negate your Raigeki with it by discarding my dark magician"

"No, that's EXACTLY what I wanted you to do. Now I can play Heavy Storm and get my real targets, your Magic and Trap cards."

"Eh nothing really good in them" wanderer says as the huge storm rips apart his face down magic and trap cards.

"Now I play Graceful Charity Draws three and discards two Lay these two cards face down, set this in Def., and have Tyrant Dragon attack your Gorilla. Dropping you LP's down 900. But I'm not done, Tyrants first effect says I can attack 1 more time if there are other monsters on your side of the field. So now I attack Gagagigo. I end my turn. You've taken 4850 damage." Your LP's are at 3150" Stryder says.

Wanderer's life point's slip down to 3150 "I draw and activate bait doll on your right hand card" the card flipped up and exploded. "Now I sacrifice my two remaining monsters to summon my all powerful buster blader his attack shoots up to 4100 thanks to your dragons and I add my wicked breaking Flamberge baou by discarding relinquished. Now my blader attack his tyrant dragon!"

"Nooo" Stryder yelled as buster blader's sword slashed through Tyrant dragon cutting him in half and spraying blood everywhere. LP's drop to 6300 "Ouch. I hate that card."
"It's your move"

Stryder Drew "I'll lay this face down, and set this in Defense That's all I've got, for now. Your move."

Wanderer draws " I set this monster and I attack with my buster blader!" the blader leapt and slashed at the monster

"You triggered my Trap card, Mirror Force!" suddenly the blader's sword appeared and smashed into himself."

"Damn, well your move"

Stryder drew "Yes, I play my Monster Reborn, to bring back my Lord of D, and play the Flute. This lets me Summon up to 2 Dragons from my hand, which I happen to have. The first is Luster Dragon, and the other is my Blue Eyes White Dragon. Now I flip summon my Summoner of Illusions (800/900). By tributing my face down monster I can special summon any fusion monster I want, provided I destroy it at the end of my turn. I choose Black Skull Dragon (3200). Black Skull, attack his face down."

Suddenly the obnoxious Celtic guardian appeared he stood flames burning around him but his sword held out in front of him. "Say hello to my friend the obnoxious celtic guardian."

"Darn. Then I have to end my turn, and that means Black Skull is destroyed. Your move."

Wanderer drew and laughed before showing the card in his hand "well I'm surprised this card decided to show itself against a normal duelist say hello to the heart of Merlinous! Now activating it I fuse it with my dark hole card creating the dark hole dragon!" now discarding one card from my hand I destroy all cards on the field besides dark hole dragon, now my dark hole dragon attack him directly!"

"What?" Stryder yelled as the monster blasted him with a miniature black hole punching a hole in his stomach and his Life points drop to 3500 "This is turning out better then I ever thought, and by the way, I'm no normal duelist."

"Really good then I don't feel so bad, since I'm out of cards in my hand it's your turn."

"Out of cards, pity. I've still got one." Draws "Make that two. Your monster is powerful, but I've already played something better, and with this, it's coming back. I pay 800 LP's to play Re-Fusion" LP's drop to 2700 "Think of this as a Premature Burial, but it only works on Fusion monsters. Return my Black Skull Dragon. And I equip him with the card I just drew, my Axe of Despair. Black Skull; attack his Dark Hole Dragon (4200)!

"Don't you know anything? Now both our monsters are destroyed," wanderer says as the two monsters battle and dark hole dragon ruptures turning into a black hole sucking everything into it and his life point's slip to 1750.

"Well I'll pay that price if it means getting rid of your monster now it's your move."

"Alright I draw and set this monster"

Draws "This will help. I play Pot of Greed". Draws two more. "And now I summon my second Divine Dragon Ragnorok (1500/1000), and have it attack your monster."

"My penguin soldier is flipped face up and your monster is returned to your hand"

"I end my turn then."

"I'll draw, sweet I'll play my swords of revealing light"

"Wait, I've still got this! Magic Jammer!"

"Damn it all your move I've nothing left I can do"

"Please, give me a monster." Slowly Draws "You've played one of the best duels I've ever had, but I'm afraid its over. I summon Luster Dragon (1900/1600); it's been an honor. Luster Dragon Attack. "

"I could let this duel end without showing this but I don't feel like losing so I'm activating my dead dark hole dragons final and most amazing ability as like any good black hole it hungers for more" suddenly the black hole appeared on the field again "all cards are removed from our graveyards and fields by removing the top five cards from my deck from play as well." Raigeki, robbing zombie, blazing inpachi, emblem of dragon destroyer and des feral imp are removed from the game. "It's still your turn anything left you can do?"

Stryder's jaw drops open "Only lay this face down. Your move."

Wanderer smirks and draws "like I'd said the heart of Merlinous is the most powerful of the five dragons, I'll set this monster.

"Well I've got six words This duel is not over yet" he Draws "I'm running low on cards, but I can still play Spear Dragon, and attack."

"Ha you hit my battle footballer" the machine punched the dragon right in the eye and Stryder lost 200 life points.

"Rugby anybody? Spear goes to Def. I end my turn" Stryder said as his life points slipped down to 2500.
"Hahaha oh man this is funny" wanderer summoned his own spear dragon "I attack your spear dragon with mine!" the dragon launched itself and smashed it's nose through the other dragon and deep into strider's gut."

Stryder's Life Point's drop to 600 "Is that all?"

Wanderer's own dragon switches to defense mode "yup your move"

Stryder draws his card "This is a risk, but since I'm already top decking. I summon Lord of D. and attacks your Spear."

"That your turn?" wanderer says as the warrior beats his dragon into pulp

"Yes, I end. It's all I can do."

Wanderer drew "well looks like this duel is finally over it was tough and hard fought. You forced me to show off every one of the dark hole dragon's effects, so you're right your no normal duelist. I activate my magic card united we stand making my footballer's attack 1800. I switch my monster into attack mode and I attack you." battle footballer threw a football right through lord of d spilling his guts to the floor.

Life point's 0. Stryder shuts his disk off, and count his remaining cards. "Nine. Of course you know I want a rematch someday."

"Oh trust me you'll get it however next time we'll see what dragon shows up." wanderer says as he puts his deck all back together and looking down at the heart of Merlinous.

Stryder gives a good bye salute and walks away "Indeed, but next time, we duel on my turf." Holds his arm in front of him, it glows gold for a second and then fades.

Wanderer ignores the comment.

"Finally noticed his item?" his wife spoke up from beside him.

"Where've you been?" he whispered.

"Around sheesh your not the boss of me."

"Why you little"

"What?"

"I love you, you silly woman so why've you been gone out of sync again?"

"Yup"

"Remind me to fix that when I get home."

"I will, you better believe I will now lets go watch the duel."

Meerice turned around in surprise, but then quickly smiles pulling her deck out before putting it back in the disk. "Very well then I pray that it will be honorable duel" Drawing her first five cards she decides her move. "For my first move I shall place one monster face down in defense and add a magic/trap card face down" Setting them down she then looks back at Marie. "It is your move."

"Yah don't have ta worry about not having an honorable duel, just have ta worry about losing," Marie says and draws, with a smirk. "Ah play Harpie's Feather Duster!"

"My swords of revealing light have gone to the graveyard" Meerice says the smile still not leaving her face.

"Now, watch this, Ah summon a monster known as Cyber Dragon (2100/1900), in attack mode!" Marie exclaims, and a mechanical serpent dragon appears. "Now, Ah equip mah Cyber Dragon wit' Wicked Breaking Flamberge Baou!" She says, discarding a card, the sword appears. "Now, attack her defensive monster!" The sword plunges deep into the chest of shining angel.
"Darn it my effects negated."
"Does that end your turn" Meerice asks the smile a little brighter.

"Ah'll set these two cards, an' that'll do it fer meh," Marie replies.

"Very well then it is my move" Drawing a card, Meerice thinks for a moment. "I activate a magic card graceful charity" The angel appears overhead shining light over Meerice. "Now I can draw three new cards and dispose of any two I wish, I discard these two cards." Placing two cards in the graveyard Graceful charity disappears. "I now place and activate another magic card the change of heart your monster now comes onto my side." Meerice smiles as the two-sided angel comes to the field and heads towards Marie's monster.

"Fine," Marie says. 'Ah've got other plans, just in case she did something like tha'.'

Marie's monster then comes onto Meerice's side its eyes blank white from the magic.
"I now sacrifice your monster to bring out my dark witch in attack mode,"
the monster disappears as an angel with dark blue wings and hair with a spear comes onto the field. (1800/1700) "I now also remove two monster from my own graveyard to special summon, my soul of purity and light"
Meerice removes the two monster and then in a flash of brilliant light another angel appears on the field appearing behind Meerice hugging her gently. ATK 2000 DEF 1800
"I first send my Dark witch to attack you with mythical spear!" Dark witch raises her spear and heads towards Marie.

"Time fer a chain," Marie says and activates two trap cards, the first is harmless, it's just a Jar of Greed, she draws 1 card, the other trap card is trouble, a shield is thrown up, and destroys both monsters, it's Mirror Force. "Sorry, but yah lose both your monsters thanks ta Mirror Force."

Meerice smiles as the dust clears, both of her monsters disappearing, leaving only her face down monster.
"I place one magic/trap card face down and end my turn."

Marie draws. "Ah summon another Cyber Dragon!" the machine appears again. "Now Ah play Raigeki, an' Double Spell," she says, and first the face down monster is destroyed, then the set cards are by Harpie's Feather Duster. "Monster Reborn, revive Cyber Dragon, an' fer tha grand finale, Ah play Pot of Greed," she says, and draws 2. "Game over, Ah play Power Bond, fuse tha 3 Cyber Dragons ta form Cyber End Dragon (4000/3400 + 4000)!" She exclaims, and the mighty 3-headed machine appears. "Now, direct attack!" the huge creature blasted boiling oil all over Meerice making her scream and fall to the floor.

Meerice staggers as she slowly gets up. "You truly are strong Marie."
Meerice looks down sadly. "I'll never be a good duelist, at the rate I keep losing, you won't want someone as weak as me in your group." She looks from Marie to the group watching, softly she begins to cry still with a very weak smile, and she turns to leave.

"Your only weak, if yah think of yourself tha' way," Marie says. "We don't always win."

Turning around again Meerice looks sadly, "Could I ever get stronger?"

"If yah put your mind ta it," she replies. "Ah wasn't tha' good when Ah first started playing ta tell yah tha truth, but Ah didn't give up."

"You didn't?" Meerice looked in surprise.

"No, Ah didn't," Marie, replies. "Ah duel fer acceptance, Ah'm not really human, not in tha normal sense at least, an' this is tha only way Ah can find a way ta be accepted."

Meerice stood still in surprise then answered. "I'm not human either, maybe through this game I can find acceptance as well," she said rubbing her tears away.

"Ah hope yah do, some people in this world just don't accept people tha' are different," Marie says. "It's been like tha' for mah family since mah grandmother's time."

"I see, from now on I'll try my hardest and I promise I'll get better until I'm a worthy enough opponent for you and I'll try to be more reliable for the group from now on."
She said her smile returned the hurt vanishing she held out her hand for Marie to shake.

Marie nods, and shakes your hand. "Hey, yah tried your best, that's all tha' matters."

"Yeah, I promise not to cry not so much" With that Meerice smiles gladly.

"C'mon people let's go," Kaiba says walking up as several cars pull up ready to take them to their destination.

Wanderer jumps in the seat next to Meerice and watches the scenery fly by soon they pulled up at a small temple.

"We're here," Meerice says as they stop.

Marik was standing outside waiting for them; he walks forward and says, "Ah you've arrived good"

"You know why we're here."

"Yes I got the gist of it."

"Good"

A young woman with Green eyes and black hair with blue sapphire highlights walked out of the temple "hello everyone my names Angel Crypt, I used to be a rare hunter" the look she threw Marik was one of love.

"Look we're not here for introductions we're here for the items," Wanderer said stepping forward.

"Well your getting both" Marik said stepping in front of him as another person exited the temple.

"My name is Mill Tem" he had red hair with blue eyes and is about Yami Yugi's height. "I'm stationed here for my father Pegasus."

"My name is Sumeria" she was 5' 6" with dark hair and eyes from the look in her eyes she was also in love with marik.

Then yet another woman appeared she had Light plum-ish colored hair, Emerald eyes, 5"2 height, White cat ears and a Millenium eye birthmark on collar bone "my name is Aeko Miabi welcome to our temple."

"Now that you've met everyone to take the items you must take us along so we can keep you all contained." Marik said moving in front of the others.

"Yeah fine whatever." wanderer said frustrated at the continuing introductions.

I can't believe these people stalling, stalling, stalling I mean the worlds ending and there just standing around making introductions we can do those on the run can't we I mean c'mon.

Name: DARK HOLE DRAGON
Attribute: DARK
Star Count: 7
ATK/DEF: 2800/2300
Type(Toon,Ritual,Union/Effect): RITUAL/DRAGON/EFFECT
Effectif any IF NONE FLAVOR TEXT: DESTROY ALL CARDS ON THE FIELD BESIDES THIS ONE BY DISCARDING A CARD FROM YOUR HAND, WHEN THIS CARD IS DESTROYED IN BATTLE DESTROY THE CARD THAT DESTROYED THIS ONE. WHILE THIS CARD IS IN THE GRAVEYARD REMOVE ALL CARDS FROM THE FIELD AND GRAVEYARDS BY REMOVING THE TOP FIVE CARDS FROM YOUR DECK.
DESCRIPTION: A HUGE BLACK DRAGON A GAPING BLACK HOLE IN THE CENTER OF IT'S CHEST
Suggested rarity: ONE OF A KIND
SUGGESTED OWNER: WANDERER
SUGGESTED PACK NAME IT COMES IN: NONE