Hey readers, how are you lot then. This is my second chapter, of my very first fan fic. I really hope you like it. I was wondering if you could review this please, because I would love some tips from other writers, and any suggestions on how to improve it. Anyway, enjoy!
Night Dreams
Harry's P.O.V
Flashback
I could feel him around my throat; I could feel my head screaming in pain. All I had in my head was to just keep fighting, and then I could see my angel again.
He was looking at me with his snake like eyes, and I had never seen a look of such detest in my life. He reached out for his wand, and he pressed it against my chest. He started saying the killing curse, so I kicked him in the nether regions. He bent over, and I did the same spell as he was going to do on me. He lay lifeless on the ground, and I nearly fainted. I had killed Voldermort, the man who had killed my parents then turned on me as a helpless baby, yet I still wanted to cry. I had done what I set out to do, but I had become a murderer.
End Flashback
I woke up with a start in bed, my scar giving me the world record of most painful migraines, and for the first time in months I nearly cried. I was covered in sweat, cold sweat, and my hands were shaking and shaped like they were holding a wand.
I could hear footsteps coming towards my door, and instantly grabbed my something to fight with. Then I gave a sigh of relief, it was my angel at last, and I felt safe.
'Harry what is wrong with you? I could hear you screaming from my room.'
I collapsed onto her, and for the first time ever, I wanted to stay like that and never move, never move.
'Harry he is gone, you told me so, so do not be scared. You are free Harry, and plus you have a besotted ginger woman looking out for you so I recon you will be fine!'
I looked up at her, and I laughed for so long to try and get rid of my pain.
'Ginny, angel, have I ever told you that I love you?'
'Well not recently. The last time was about….two hours ago,' she joked, smiling,' Besides, I love you as well Harry Potter, and I am staying right here with you.'
Ginny's P.O.V
I hugged him with all my mite and I swear I saw him smile. I kissed his lips softly and I could taste his tears on his lips.
'Who knew the boy who lived would cry in a dream.'
He kissed me again with so much passion I thought he has gone mad on me. His tongue explored my mouth, and did the same to his. His hands travelled up my shirt, and this time I did not stop him.
'Angel you have changed since last time haven't you?'
He took my shirt off for me, and I took his off revealing the most gorgeous set of muscles I had ever seen.
'Nice view.'
'Ditto.'
He kissed my chest valley until I groaned, as I lost my hand in his black unworldly hair. He moved down my body, leaving a trail of kisses I could still feel hours after and eventually reached my trousers.
'Can I?'
'Surprised you needed to ask.'
I took my trousers off, and then my panties. He looked, and smiled, and got to work. He kissed and prodded, and I swear I nearly came there and then. I reached down to his trousers and took them off, and massaged his already hard bald avenger.
'Do you want to, I mean we don't have to.'
'Babe, of course I want to. Why wouldn't I, I love you.'
I went inside me, and for a split second it was pain, but then passion. He raised over me like a lion, and I opened up like an orchid. I was in peace, and by the look of his face, so was he.
