I noticed that I'm not getting that many reviews. I only have two from the same person (thanks playstation by the way)…I want more people to review with constructive criticism so the readers will enjoy this story more. So please, PLEASE review. Also, at times I will have mini chapters, such as this one, presumably three to five. They will be significantly shorter than future chapters. Anyways, here's the first Mini Chapter.
Mini Chapter 1: The Princess of Soleanna
The city of water…Soleanna. Home to Princess Elise. The keeper of the Flames of Disaster and the beautiful Chaos Emerald that she wore as a necklace. It was a nighttime sky in the city, but it was filled with a roaring crowd. Several multicolored fireworks brightened the sky, and bright fire red torches burned gracefully at the edge of the boat the princess was traveling on. The crowd roared on with excitement and she waved with enthusiasm to them. The boat was moving towards a center isle in the middle of the stream. The boat passed through a bridge, and was no at the isle. The princess boarded off the ship and onto the small isle. In front of her lay a very large empty goblet. Torches off the ground were sticking upwards, near the wires that were connected to the giant goblet. Several hooded figures stood were waiting patiently for her arrival. When she arrived in front of the Giant Torch, the hooded figures raised their hands at the crowd, a sign for silence.
"Sun of Soleanna, guide and watch over us with your eternal light!" Elise chanted. Suddenly, the torches started to lean towards the wires, firing and burning the wires. The fire was suddenly followed into the goblet, letting out a giant flame burning at the top. The crowd suddenly roared with enthusiasm, and the Princess was very happy. She waved once again to the crowd, as the fireworks exploded into the sky behind her.
Or where they? As soon as the last firework went off, several missiles were sent straight down towards the princess. The ground shook and several small explosions occurred. Robots came out of the sky, hovering down to the isle and circling it. It was then, a large machine started to land in front of the princess. When it finally landed, the princess could see who was in it. A strange, somewhat overweight man stepped out. His mustache was ridiculously long, and he wore sunglasses over his eyes. He was totally bald. He wore a red leather jacket and black pants.
"A pleasure to meet you at last, Princess of Soleanna." Eggman.
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