Hi! Uh...do I even have to say it? Yes, another Naruto poem! Man, I really need to get back to my fics! Well, anyway this is a Naruto and Hinata poem. It's partly inspired by my crush, or old crush I don't know if I like him still or not, it's complicated (he like insulted me the other day though, and I kind of wanted to cry, but I didn't). Anyway, enough about me, I hope you like this and I hope it portrays Hinata's feelings well.


Notice Me

When I see you

My head begins to spin

My heart pounds

I feel like I can't breathe

My face turns pink

I smile automatically

You look at me

I turn away

Trying to hide my face

You turn your head,

Confused,

And just look at her instead

I sigh to myself,

Thinking you'll never know

How I feel about you

Because I suppose to you

I'm just

An ordinary girl

I wish I was someone else

Anyone else

Then maybe you'll notice me

I wish I was stronger

Smarter, prettier

More dependable

More confident

Then maybe you'd notice me

I lie awake at night,

Thinking about you

I dream about you

You make me smile and laugh

You make me feel so blissful

But at the same time

You make my heart ache

I cry at night because of you sometimes

I feel unimportant, too

Because you never notice me

I just want you to notice me

You did once

I thought that meant maybe you care

But now I'm not so sure

I feel so confused sometimes

You cause all these feelings

At first I wasn't sure what they were

But I am now

I love you

I love you so much,

I can barely be near you

Because my heart beats so fast

And my head spins with all these thoughts,

I'm not sure what to say

I don't want to look weak or stupid in front of you

So I stay quiet, my shyness getting the best of me

I'm so nervous, and afraid

That you won't return my feelings

But I really just want you to notice me

And I know I'm not like her

I'm not perfect in everyway like she is

And I understand why you like her so much

She's smart, pretty, and strong

She's better than I am

That's why you notice her

Instead of me

I don't blame you for liking her

If you want her, then I think you should have her

I'll I really want is for you notice me

You don't have to love me, want me, or even like me

I just want you to notice me.

Notice Me.


Well, tell me what you think. I hope you liked it, I know it's not my best, but I still think it was okay. I hope I portrayed Hinata's feelings well. Please review, no flames, and arigato for reading it this far.

Sayonara