I felt like changing chapter 3 because I didn't really like the original. I wasn't really thinking when I was typing it so it didn't come out the way I wanted it to. It wasn't a surprise party like it was supposed to be. So here's the redone chapter 3.
Roy: I have to suffer again?
Ed: Yes I get 2 revenges on you!
Roy: Why me?
Chapter 3:
Mustang's Surprise Party
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When Roy arrived at work that day he found it strange that no military personnel where there. He went into his office and found a note on his desk.
Colonel Roy Mustang,
You are needed in the cafeteria for something immensely important.
Roy decided to go. Maybe that's where the rest of the military is, he thought.
Roy arrived at the cafeteria. When he tried to open the door it wouldn't budge.
-----Inside the cafeteria-----
The door shakes as if someone was trying to open it.
"Brother I think he's here." Al said
"Hurry up!" Ed yelled
-----Outside the cafeteria------
Roy continued to try and open the door. Finally it opened. He walked in only to find the lights off and no one inside. The lights suddenly came on and people jumped out screaming "Surprise!"
"Congratulations on being promoted." said someone. "Congratulations." said someone else.
"I'm being promoted?" Roy asked
"Yes." Replied the Fuhrer himself.
"Congratulations!" Ed said slapping him on that back so hard Roy fell face forward into the cake that said, Congratulations Roy Mustang.
Roy stood up with chocolate frosting and cake on his face.
"I'm sorry. Here's a napkin." Ed said handing Roy a napkin
Roy used the towel to wipe of the cake. Unknown to him the napkin had blue ink on it causing Roy to smear blue ink on his face.
Roy at first couldn't understand why people we're staring, laughing, or trying not to laugh at him.
Once Riza handed him a mirror he understood.
"I'm sorry." Ed said, "There's a sink over there if you wish to wash the ink off."
Roy headed towards the sink to wash off the ink that made him look like an alien. When he turned on the sink hot water sprayed him in the face.
Roy turned and glared at Ed.
"I'm sorry." Ed said a third time, "Here's a towel to dry off with."
"I'm not falling for that again." Roy replied.
So Roy sat the rest of the party, soaking wet with blue ink, chocolate frosting, and cake on his face.
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So did you like this one better? I did. Please tell me who Ed should get his revenge on next.
Al: I only had one line.
Ed: Better than none like last time.
Roy: At least it's over
King Bradley: I wasn't important
Also tell me some people who've called Ed short. See ya next chapter!
