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The armed and uniformed dressed cop pulled Kori's arm towards the door where the inmates were.Kori was terrified of them and jail.The jail was a extremely large gray pent house,with hundreds of cells on about eleven floors. Underneath the cell floors was the basement or 'main grounds as the guards called it.That's where the inmates right now where socializing. About 170 mean looking, muscular women, all wearing the same hideous orange junpsuit that Kori was wearing all gave her an evil glare.Kori hugged the diary close to her chest sending the others a scared vibe. As Kori was passing and ugly tall women with bushy brown hair, and a lazy eye she was tripped.Kori stumbled to the ground crack ing one of her teeth.

" Watch where your goin'!" the ugly girl screamed at her.As Kori brought herself up she said very quietly...

"Bitch."

"What the hell did you just say to me!" The women jumped at Kori , Kori dodged out the missing the wall by an inch.The women then threw punches at Kori hitting her in the face twice.

"Hey that's enough." one guard said restraining the women.Kori picked herself up hugging the diary close to her chest.As she began to start walking she felt the diary being tugged from her arms.

"Hey! kori exclaimed as she felt the diary being torn in two halves.


It was late at night andKori was fretting over what to do. First of all half of the diary was gone, and second of all Richard never explained how it worked.Kori sighed and got out the jail cell bed. She crouched at the bars so she could get some light.Kori then opened the diary to where it had been ripped.

Dear Diary ,

In two days I'll be getting married.Tonight my friends gave me a wedding shower...

"There I'll go back to the wedding shower.It was the night before the rehersal so I can tell Rachel before she gets married."

Kori reread the entree. This time she lost the feeling of breath, ans was swallowed by a silver light.

" Kori, Kori areyou all right?"

As Kor's vision became less blurry, she saw Rachel with a concerned look on her face.

" Your nose, it's bleeding!"

" Oh,what!"

" Hold on ." Rachel ran into the bath room.Kori could hear the fosset running.RAchel then came back with a wet towel."

" UmRachel I'm a little tired."

" Oh, sure." RAchel said and they both went to sleep.


The next night was the night before the wedding.

I need to get Rachel alone so I can tell her. Kori thought to herself.

Everyone was very busy it being the night before the wedding and all.

"Rachel can I get a moment?" Kori said to a very busy bride.

"Sure."

Kori pulled Rachel into a empty room.

" If I knew something about Richard you'd want me to tell you right."

" Of course.Why?" said Rachel

a moment of silence then like word vomit Kori blurted outjust as Richard walked in...

" He's cheating on you!"

Rachel just stood there in shock. She looked at Kori the at Richard.

"Is this true?" she said to Richard

" I.. it... I can explain." he said panicing

" Is this how I'm going to find out the day before my wedding from my best friend!" she screamed

" Some best friend she's the one I've been screwing around with." Richard said

Rachel looked at Kori tears in her eyes the she ran out the room.


LAter that night Richard and Kori decided to go to Rachel's hotel to explain themselves.

" Rachel?" They called

No answer

Panciing they began scrambling around to fing her until they heard the tub running.The door was locked.

" Rachel please come out, we need to talk." said Kori said from the other side

" Rachel,RAchel!"

Water began to flow from under the door.

"Rachel!" Kori and Richard started banging on the door.Finally The door busted open. They saw Rachel fully dressed in the tub.They ran over to her, and Richard quickly picked her unmoving body out the tub and layed her on the floor.She wasn't moving or breathing.The was a cut over her left wrist with blood slowly coming out.

" O my gawd, she comitted suicide." she Kori in shock.


I am so sorry for taking to long . I was really sick and I had writer's block any ways

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