chapter 2: hevans soilder part two

we now see patrician staring down his knew opponent and member of the powerranger familly the heavan ranger.

nice pajamas but that wont help you. patrician pronounced raising his sword.

eric pulled the golden blade off his back and jestured the hell worrior to bring it on. they clashed blades fuoriousliy. eric broght his knee up and nailed patrician in the gut. he then sliced the back of the doubled over patrician.

such power said the fallen worrior.

patrician returns too his feet and charges forward. eric sides steps him and brings his double blade up slashing paticians back sending him flying through the air into a nearby tree. eric charges his sword in a golden light. before he knows it hes soring through the air with golden wings made of light on his back . he points his blade towards the ground and a golden circle shoots to the ground traping patrician in a golden circle. patricians legs lock together and his arms go up making him stand in a t formation.erics blade lights up in a light blue light he soars down like a missle slashing directly through patricians chest .patrician explodes in a marvilous light.

eric turns his head to make sure his work is done. he lets out a sigh of releaf when he sees just smoken rocks.

he gets ready to head back to heavan when he sudanly hers claping. he looks aroud him and theres crowds of people cheering and clapping.

a small boy walks up to eric. mr. ranger are you going to stay and protect us from the bad guys.

eric kneels down and says: yeah kid oh and its heaven ,im the heaven ranger.
the yong boy gives him a hug. thankyou heaven ranger oh and im skyler or sky as some kids call me.

well sky ive got to be going so nice to meet you. with that eric is gone in flash of blue light.

hell:

so it would seem heaven has turned to zordon for help. hmm not bad thogh a heaven ranger.

so your not upset?

no ithink itll be fun to have some compatition itll make our victory all the more sweeter.

heavan:

eric comes running in and stops when he notices his cloths have turned into a blue leather suite with a blue leather jacket with white stripes and its unziped so you can see the white t-shirt under it on the back were a golden wing design.

oh now i likes this.

thoght you would. said zordon walking towards eric. so will you stick around and join the ranger family.

yes i... im just speechless but i can say hell has risen so you can count on me to take them down.
okay i know i need work but school is mostley my priority so let me know what you think.
please review.