I don't own Naruto, I just love it
Foreword:
Remember this is a rewrite. This is not a continuation. I am merely redoing a fic that I had already made and am doing some changes into the characters and how the stories flow.
I will be following up on the suggestion of someone to look at the map as I need to determine which area I will place the village, because until now I am not sure where to put it. If you can please give your suggestions.
Thanks for those have reviewed and for those who would like to help. It means a lot.
Warning: This is a chapter that introduces a character or group. It is not meant to be a real chapter itself. I know I should have made this first, but as a freak accideent I finished the other one first than this one. Remember this chapter is not yet fully edited so don't flame me for the bugs so fast, instead help me find the bugs. Since I'm having a hard time pinpointing the errors. Even with a computer since one paragraph may conflict with the other although still have the right spelling and grammar. Also please tell me if there are still questions about this character or group that I have intoduced as their full retelling of their story would come out somewhere else and I will need your opinions on what mystifies you so that I can explain things later on.
Chapter 2: Relative of yours?
When we are alive people are often complaining about what they have. They can't even be content in what they have, while some were in misery with their family. Each of them has a dream of experiencing the good life for the sake of their families, which was a direct opposite to what kind of life they are leading just now. One such young woman had brown hair that was in a pony tail and was walking towards a village with her four year old daughter and contemplating on the miseries in her life and clan. Their lives and the life of their clan was not an easy. They needed a home to live in and not in a forest where they had a hard time living. This was the reason for her mission to this village.
"Haifa.. This life sucks." Kasumi said as she thought about her life in her clan while she was walking towards the village where she was sent. The life she had led with her clan for the past years of her life was not an easy one. Her clan had been in exile for over two decades which meant that she was born when they were in exile, but she had been told about their life before the exile of her clan by her mother and she could only wonder if those times will ever come back again.
A long time ago her clan was one of the most powerful and influential clans of the Cloud. Their current leader explained the history of their clan to them, since he was one of the oldest members of the clan. Their current leader was the old head of the Cloud Anbu squad. During the old times according to him they were able to make a name for themselves and become one of the feared clans of the Cloud, but this also made them lots of enemies that somehow united against them and waited when the time was right to strike. While they did not strike grievous wounds to the clan, they did their best to scatter some of the other clan members with false charges and planted evidences that helped exile them.
One day however one of clan families that were exiled helped save the clan from complete banishment from their home. That clan member was a man known only as the Yondaime of Konoha, the leader of one of the most powerful villages of Konoha. While the Yondaime reigned in Konoha his clan was an instrumental figure in creating peace between the village of Konoha and village of the Cloud. In this time they were saved from exile due to the importance of the clan to the Cloud. No one wanted war and it was only through her clan that they could at least assure peace for their village. This new found importance of her clan angered their enemies and only fueled them in their drive to get rid of her clan.
Then one day, their time of power faded as a terrible tragedy befell the clan. It was a disaster that marked the end of their clan's power in the cloud and their influence with the leaf. It was the day that the Yondaime of Konoha perished and with his death the decline of her clan's power.
When the Yondaime died the usefulness of her clan died out. From being one of the most respected and the most needed they were brought down to a lower post, but it did not end there.
Some time later a member the clan was charged with treason after helping an injured nukenin escape during a mission. This would have turned the own person's clan against him had he not told his story.
According to the nin they were ordered to hunt down a group of nukenins in that area and as a member of the Hunter nin squad he joined immediately. When they arrived in the designated area they quietly and quickly took out two of the three missing nins while the two were shopping for their comrades while in a henge.
The other three had been hiding in a forest besides a farm which apparently one of them owned. The hunter nins chased and baited them into coming out. The accused shinobi was ordered to take out one of the three. Inside the house and being dutiful nin he entered with the intent to kill his target. Inside however his choice would seal his fate.
Inside he fought the nin which he defeated and was about to kill when a little girl came out screaming 'daddy!'. Kasumi pitied the man once she heard his story. For the little girl had thrown herself before him and his newly arrived comrade and the nukenin who had an injury to his leg preventing him from moving, this was all he needed to change his decision. Ignoring the protest of his fellow nin who he knocked unconscious, he ordered the nukenin to go and take his family with him earning him the entire family's gratitude. Some time later they were banished from the Cloud and although some of the younger generations were angry the elders who understood how the nin felt explained that it would have happened anyways.
"How right those old men were." Kasumi thought as her father's memories played into her mind. She could see the old clan head give an explanation.
"This was nothing more than an excuse. We are already hated in the Cloud. It was only a matter of time before they had us exiled some ridiculously made up charge. They needed a scapegoat and we became the goats. Do not blame Ken for he does us proud. We are a clan that believes in Honesty, Integrity and Hope. For us there is only what one wants to do and what one does not want to do. This is who we are." Kasumi remembered thanks to her father's constant reminder of that lecture he received with some of the other younger generation of their clan.
"MAMA!" the little girl shouted as she pointed to a gate which was colored black and was guarded by two Chuunins with the symbol of the Tenshi on their foreheads. The woman shouted for joy while waving at the two shinobis who were at the gate and looking at her like one would look at a madwoman.
"Who the hell is this woman?" Hiryo thought as he and his partner were looked at the brown haired woman who approached them. It had been their turn on guard duty so naturally they were not pleased, but their annoyance with their duty was replaced with the suddenly alertness at a possible enemy. Unknown to them something the woman would say in answer to their question would take their sanities from them.
"Who are you and what is your business here in the Tenshi village?" Hriyo asked the woman stood in front of him smiling while hey readied themselves for any sign of trouble. If anyone tried to attack their home they would face death before they even tried to reach their leader's home. What they heard instead was something that would shock them to the core of their being.
"I am Uzumaki Kasumi and this little girl beside me is my daughter Uzumaki Mihoshi, we are here in behalf of the clan Uzumaki to request for asylum and acceptance into your village from you leader the Tenshikage." Kasumi said as she tried to hold her giggles as Hiryo then fainted to the ground. This made little Mihoshi giggle as she soon found it fun to poke the man in the face as he laid there on the ground and was more pleased when the second chuunin too fainted with a flop as her mother began laughing hysterically. While somewhere a young kage and newly declared kage was signing a bunch of papers while he felt suddenly as is somebody was laughing at him.
"Why do I get a feeling I'm going to be seeing something that will shock me soon?" The Tenshikage thought as he heard the laughter from the gate. He thanked the kami for that distraction from paper work and then resumed with the work that was a shinobi leader's bane the paper work. That was until someone came to inform him on why there was laughter and from there on then he fainted into dream land.
Summary and End Words:
Here is chapter two. Chapter two is not yet proof red unlike chapter one. So there should be some errors. This is also just a character introduction, so don't comment it being short or that centered on one person.
Chapter 3's draft is nearly finished. I should have it printed with the thing that I am doing for my friend's group by the begining of the October. The editing will take me at least two weeks to do since I don't expect to have that much time and it is kinda long and hopefully it will be better than the first chapter.