It's late, I'm tired this is what came out. Not beta, if it's to bad, stop reading and wait until the beta's arrived.
Nightfall,
I'd loved to watch the sunset,
The sun falling slowly into the red mountains desperately trying to escape her end,
Yellow flames playing with the long shadow they create,
Everything is peaceful when the sun goose out,
I remember smiling holing my gun,
My relieve after watching the enemies die,
Waiting for the ease of the hard cruel day,
The night falls as I watch the sun say her goodbye,
City's light up and the moon rises,
Yellow taxis drive by getting loaded with people who want to go home,
Everything seems to fall asleep,
I remember sitting in the window-seat,
My head resting against the cold stone wall,
Waiting for the morning, glaring at the moon to make her downfall,
I'd loved the sunrise, it's even better then the set,
It's because a new day is born,
Hope from last day restore,
Nightmares forgotten,
I remember driving away from the mess,
My balance restored and my head clear,
Waiting for the sunlight to touch my cheek,
Now I only remember,
Never will I see the sun again,
Never again will I see the light,
All I have left are memories,
And the cold night.
Things started to get a bit foggy if you are about to fall asleep. If the poem is to bad, sorry bout that then.
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Luvzzz Sue-AnneSparrow.