Hey everybody. First of all, thanks for all the feedback, favorites and follows. The fact that are many people wanting me to continue this story makes me happy.
But ok I know the problem with the story. I read the chapter, and while I could follow it's a kind of a mess. Just like the DCEU in the beginning. I put too much into one chapter. I could have separated like one chapter is the league discussing the straw hats and the other one is Luffy rampage. I am not the best writer, but I have some problems with the website because the doc system has a problem in saving, he deletes some words because he believes its spam or a virus. I am trying to learn how to fix up for the future. Usually, the way I write is on Word, then I upload the chapter to doc management, I edit the chops that were cut, but even that is not all done. So, a few hours later I use the app of fanfic and I fix everything to be readable. I know is not the best way, but it is the only that works for me.
The main fact of the chapter was Batman wanting to know everything about Luffy and the crew's intention. Even if Batman try to act nice, he would put them in Arkham and then later put a disguise to investigate more, just like he did with the second Rosarch. The fact that Luffy is so easy to trick with cool gadgets, he would be put in a cell in seconds. Could that hold him? No, but with the league presence, the different arguments could be played out.
I promise the next chapter will be a bit more coherent and easier to follow. Also, not that huge. I deeply thanks everyone that enjoy this story. I will be working on a new chapter later.
Thanks for the support, Leonardo18anime.
