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The Shaft
The four Jedi wait for an elevator to arrive. They turn around and see they are face to face with three Destroyer droids.
The droids start blasting away. Anakin deflects the bolts. "Destroyers" yelled Anakin. Obi-wan frantically pushes the elevator button several more times. Finally the door opens, and they rush inside under a hail of laser bolts. The elevator door slides shut. The Jedi turn around to see Battle droids standing behind them. "Drop your weapons! I said drop 'em."
The Jedi activate their lightsabers and destroy all of the Battle droids with a few well placed slashes. R2-D2 notices two Super Battle droids entering the hangar. He moves and hides behind a Jedi Starfighter.
The elevator begins to move and screeches to a stop. "Did you press the stop button" asked Obi-wan. "No did you" said Anakin as he looks at the two students and Obi-wan. They all say "No!"
"Well, there's more than one way out of here." Anakin ignites his lightsaber. "We don't want to get out, we want to get moving. Artoo... Artoo. Do you copy? Activate elevator... (Obi-wan looks at the control panel)... 31174..." said Obi-wan. Anakin cuts a hole in the elevator ceiling.
Two Super Battle droids are inspecting the Jedi Starfighters. They overhear Obi-wan's voice over the comlink and are distracted. "What's that" said one of the Battle droids. "Get back to work. It's nothing" said the other.
Obi-wan was still trying to contact Artoo. Anakin climbs through the hole in the ceiling of the elevator. Obi-wan looks up "Always on the move." Obi-wan continues to talk on the comlink. Artoo quietly beeps a reply.
Artoo tries to muffle the comlink as the two Super Battle droids try to figure out where the voices are coming from. Artoo extends an arm and plugs into a computer interface. "Artoo, switch on the comlink. Artoo, do you hear me? Artoo, we gave you a job to do! Artoo."
Suddenly, the elevator plummets down the shaft. Anakin quickly jumps and grabs onto the hallway entry door. He watches as the elevator recedes down the shaft and disappears. Anakin struggles to keep his grip on the closed door as sparking wires rain down on him.
The elevator starts to descend rapidly. "Stop, stop! Artoo, we need to be going up.
Anakin struggles to hang on to the narrow edge of the elevator shaft. The door to the elevator shaft is pried open, and two Battle droids appear in the doorway and look down at Anakin. They point their guns at him. "Hands up, Jedi! Don't move" said one of the droids. "Roger, roger" said the other.
The two Super Battle droids overhear Obi-wan's comlink messages to Artoo. "There it is again" said one of the Super Battle droids. Obi-wan still talking to Artoo "Artoo, do you copy? Artoo, do you hear me? Artoo, we need to be going up, not down." The elevator races down as Obi-wan holds on. "Stop. Artoo! We need to go up! Stop, stop!"
The elevator stops with a jolt. The three jedi fall to the floor. The door opens up and the three Jedi see a few Destroyer droids rolling in the hallway, until they deployed out of ball mode.
The two Super Battle droids see Artoo and walk toward the little droid. "Hey you" said one of the droids. Artoo plugs into the interface again and the elevator shoots up.
Unfortunately the three Jedi weren't in the elevator, but are trying to avoid laser blasts. The two padawans had strayed far away from Obi-wan's position. Suddenly Obi-wan feels a disturbance in the Force. "Sona, Ran get back here quick." But it was too late. Ray shields separated the padawans from the Jedi master.
"Find a way around. I'll meet up with you later." The padawans ran off to find their way back to Obi-wan. Obi-wan tried to hide himself behind a column while he tried to talk to Artoo. "Artoo, I need you to bring the elevator back down and work on those ray shields."
Artoo is held up by two Super Battle droids, who chuckle as the little Astro droid curses and swings at them. "You stupid little astro droid" one of the droids say as they pick Artoo up and shake him.
Anakin looks down and sees the elevator heading toward him at a high rate of speed. He looks at the Battle droids leaning over him with their guns pointed at him. He calculates for a moment, then gives himself a push and flips himself onto a nearby elevator shaft.
Artoo ignites his arm rockets and shoots out of their grip, spraying them both with oil and setting them on fire. The Super Battle droids slip and slide until they fall, smoldering. Artoo rolls away.
Anakin pulls a spare comlink from his pocket and calls Artoo. "Artoo... Artoo, where's Obi-wan." Artoo beeps an answer. Anakin looks down to see an elevator door. "Well, can you open the door."
After a few Force pushes Obi-wan was able to bring down the Destroyers. Obi-wan walks over to the elevator and he walks inside. "Artoo can you bring the elevator back..." Suddenly Anakin drops through the hole in the ceiling and Obi-wan is startled and ignites his saber. "Oh, it's you..."
"What was that all about?"
"Well, Artoo has been..."
"No loose wire jokes... He's doing the best he can."
"Did I say anything?"
"He's trying!"
"I didn't say anything."