Hello peoples! Metalner, if you are reading this PLEASE REVIEW even if it's only 'hi' (and that goes for every reader). So Sarah303 gave me all these great ideas for performance day which is after the sports day and the bonus chapter that WILL be better than the last one I wrote (which was lame).

Oh and whatever happened to Seoshi-Alina, has she moved on to bigger and better things or is she reading but, heaven forbid, not reviewing (please review, me loves reviews) or is she under a different name, maybe she just doesn't like the story anymore. Well I hope she'll come back but if not Alina (in the story) will be replaced.

Oh and I have a correction I told coco gash niccals that Yuki would beat Naomi in soccer then beat her up, instead she will get Naomi in a different way (I changed my mind) but don't worry everyone will have a chance to beat up Naomi, it Sarah who gets to beat Naomi in soccer though. Now on to the story….

"hello sports fans were back" said the teacher "and right now our athletes are gearing up for an intense preliminary round of soccer. Red vs Green and Blue vs Yellow first and we'll move on from there"

"won't this be exciting?" the wife exclaimed "I can't wait to see these kids play"

"on to the game!" the teacher said

first we will do Red vs Green…..(I can't write sports well so there and this is not the exact way you play soccer it's just how they play at this camp)

the ball went into play and the game began…

"Tia has the ball and his making her way over to the Green goal" the wife said "but oh look at that Kida came and kicked the ball all the way towards the red goal"

"Sarah stopped it just in time and passed it to some kid who passed it back and they ran up the field passing" the teacher said "but then out of nowhere came Naomi driving her new and improved car, she slams the ball, she shoots and she scores, wow! That's way more then the red team can handle!"

on the field….

The consoler picked up the ball and waited for the kids to stop talking

"I thought you got rid of that car" Kida said gasping for breath

"I'd never do something like that" Naomi said smiling "besides you should be happy I got a goal for our team"

"no one likes a cheater" Tia yelled running up

"yeah and no one likes a sore loser" Naomi shot back

"you haven't won yet" Sarah exclaimed

the consoler threw back in the ball

"and the game starts back up!" the wife said "it goes to Tia then Sarah then Tia then Sarah then some kid but wait now it's back with the green team and what's this? It looks like Kida is trying to dismantle Naomi's car when she's not look!"

Naomi shot Kida an evil glare…

"you shouldn't have said that aloud" the teacher said "back to the game, some kid from the green team has the ball and passed t to another member and then the third while Naomi was busy glaring at Kida, but then the red team took the ball and scored a goal."

"now it's 1 to 1" the wife said

on the field….

The consoler picked up the ball….

"see what happens when you try to wreck my car" Naomi said

"yeah, I can see" Kida said "I see you not cheating, not running over people and not being a bully do you want me to tell everyone about your little or should I say BIG crush on Zatch?"

"Yuki already told everyone" Naomi said

"did she tell…Zatch?" Kida asked slyly

"err…no" Naomi said nervously

"well that sates it" Kida said "you play fair Zatch doesn't find out"

the consoler threw back in the ball

"and here they go!" the teacher said "Tia kicks the ball to Sarah who passes it to some kid who trips and the ball goes to the green team who kicks it at the goal but misses"

"meanwhile" the wife said "Kida is forcing Naomi to put her car away so with the green team down two members it's time for a shot on goal"

"but wait" the teacher exclaimed "Naomi picked up Kida and threw her into her car and let the car drive off!"

"your dead Naomi, dead!" Kida cried as she was whisked away by Naomi's car.

"now the green team is permanently down a member" the wife said "and Naomi is trying to make up for that by playing to every extent she can"

"it's chaos!" the teacher said "Naomi is pushing everyone out of the way with her extra car she's driving and she has scored a goal!"

on the field…

the consoler picked up the ball

"nice cheating, Naomi" Sarah said

"thank you" Naomi said smugly

the consoler threw back in the ball…

"he we go!" the wife said "if the green team makes another goal then they win and the red team needs to more goals"

"but look" the teacher said "that was a FOUL the kid just pushed that kid"

on the field…

"you get a free shot at the goal, Tia" the consoler said and put the ball on the ground in front of Tia and just like you knew she would she got the ball in the goal.

"now it's a tie" the wife said " 2 to 2, that's a tongue twister" (yes the wife makes lame jokes: two to two)

"who ever scores the next goal wins" the teacher said "so all the kids rush for the ball and trip"

all the kids fell into a pile, including the goalies that are not even in the goal but are pretending to be defense but run all over the field. The ball rolled out of the pile but everyone failed to get up.

"look Naomi's out of the pile, with the ball and heading towards the goal" the wife said "can anyone stop her?" (yes! Yes they will)

"Sarah runs to catch up to Naomi and save the goal once and for all" the teacher said "but on that car Naomi is super speedy"

"Sarah is gaining on her, faster, faster" the wife said "you're almost there"

several minutes of slow motion silence. Please visualize Sarah running in slow motion and kicking the ball away from Naomi's car which is also in slow motion. She kicks the ball so hard it flies right at he other goal…..

………………(you all know what's coming)

"she scores!" the teacher yelled "and that means the red team wins the game" (Pretend to hear all these applause and visualize people cheering and the red team jumping up and down in happiness)

"I'll get you for this Sarah!" Naomi said

End of Chapter

Next time:

"the yellow team and the blue team go at it" the teacher said "who do you think is gonna win?"

"and then the two winning teams face off" the wife said "while the two losing teams battle for third place" (note: what the wife said will happen the chapter after the next)

"oh and after that" Hannah said "you get to read a nifty bonus chapter but now you must review or it's text book reading for you"