FINALLY

I have finished writing second chapter .Its my first story so it takes me a while to get the

story written well. I tried different layout please tell me if it is okay or not. Moreover,

Please FEEL FREE TO WRITE me a NEGATIVE that is right I said Negative comment about something and what I need to change to make it better. I would be happy to receive comments or helpful tips u can send them to my hotmail. OR by submit review. And until I get 5 at least 5 REVEIEWS I will NOT continue until I get 5 REVIEWS.

Thank you,

Adrienne.b

P.S.- Thank U for ppl who review my story and gave their thoughts about it plz continue that.