Flippin freakin koolies. I'm so happy. I wasn't even gonna write anymore today, but that was marked off, because I re-read all my reviews, gosh you all (sniffs proudly) I never thought I was that good. 33 reviews, and you all are making me sound great….brilliant and awesome….oh you readers kick macho ass! So I decided to go on and write until I get sleepy, which well…is gonna not soon! Ha…witty. Sorrys, me hyper now…hahaha

Ok…Me no own Jack, me own Shyla…and spider (shivers) freakin spider, I hate it. Who wants the spider…ew. Ok, seriously, I don't own anything what so ever, not even the plot…which, I isn't that brilliant to own. (stomps foot) no fair. Ok, I also forgot to say, for a disclaimer last chappy, I don't own that song, Jamie O'Neal does, and those of you who want to know what it is, It's called, I'm still waiting. It's a beautiful song, or else I wouldn't have used it. Kay…now….FORWARD MARCH…on with story!


Chapter 25

(Stars off in the Cave)

The whole cave was filled with treasures of all kind. Gems, jewels, diamonds (don't know really, jus go along with it.) gold, sliver and even dresses, spoons, forks…ok you get it. Now, The walls were lit by torches and shafts of moonlight, Pirates moved through. Taking Will to be near the cursed gold. The pirates were climbing over rocks, and through waters, just to get to the center. An air of grim anticipation was in the air. Will, who had his hands bound behind his back, was shoved along. Pintel and Ragetti had him. Pintel being the foul and fat little shorty he was, smiled for the pure joy of it.

"No reason to fret. It's just a prick on the finger and a few drops of blood." Pintel said, happily for once. Ragetti smiled, happily although dumbly.

Twigg who was walking by at the time, heard the conversation. Being evil, he wasn't going to let just a prick happen.

"No mistakes this time. He's only half Turner. We spill it all." he said and pushed him forward. This only made Pintel happier, and more amused.

"I guess there is a reason to fret after all." he said. Ragetti nodded.

(Elsewhere Aboard the Dauntless, Main Deck)

"Elizabeth, Shyla?" their father asked, but they didn't answer. So he continued hoping that they listened.

"Elizabeth, I just want you to know…I believe you made a very good decision today…And I couldn't be more proud. Shyla, I know that you were trying to help get your sister back, but I can't let them know, so I have to tell that you were kidnapped." he said, pausing.

(Inside the cabin)

Shyla and Lizzy were at work, making a get away blanket. By knotting together several sheets. Which they were surprised to have found. Both girls stop and look at each other from their father's words. They knew he wouldn't like this, but again, their mother would've been behind their decision a hundred percent. They quickly get to work, trying to finish before he decided to come in.

"Finally." Lizzy said, Shyla gave her a look that said shut up. She tossed the sheets out of the window and looks at the door for a moment, and quickly ushering her sister out of the window and follows after her but stops when she hears her father through the door.

(this is what he's saying and your still in the cabin)

"But even a good decision made for the wrong reasons could be a wrong decision. Not that you've made a wrong decision. But you're setting the course for your entire life, and you must please yourself, not others, not even me. Which is not to say that I'm not pleased." he said, pausing.

She smiled, he said it himself. Don't please other's just please yourself. That would be good blackmail someday. She smiled and left out of the window, not wanting for him to come and see her leaving.

(Isla De Muerta, Lagoon, at night)

The girls rowed through the water, the Dauntless leaving their view. Shyla smiled and knew that she out witted the wittiest person alive to her anyway. Shyla looked behind her sister, who got stuck rowing the longboat and smiled.

"Look, there… There's the Black Pearl. Oh…I hope no one's on it." Shyla said, not wanting to go. Elizabeth smiled.

"Don't worry, Jack's crew is on that ship. I'm sure they'll help us out." she said, Shyla nodded and smiled. This may be good after all.

(Caverns, main Cave)

In the center of the cavern, Will is pushed close to the stone chest, his chest barley touching the chest…(a lotta chest going on there.) Koehler who was pushing him, along with Twigg, which they shoved him to his knees. Koehler pushed Will's head forward directly over the chest, the medallion hanging below his throat. Barbossa, (I refuse to call him Captain, he don't deserve it.) takes the stone knife from atop the chest of gold.

"Excuse me. Pardon me. Beg pardon." Jack says as he passes people. Which he sees, Barbossa putting the knife at Will's throat, then he looks down at Jack, and stands straight up. (I'm just tryin my best. If it don't happen like this, Sue me….no don't I take that back…flame me or something, no suing,…suing bad)

"Not possible." Barbossa whispers to himself, surprised that Jack actually got off the flipping island.

"Not probable." Jack says holding up his arm and holding out his finger, correcting Barbossa. (Jack's smart. Jack: sure am love. Me: oh hey…shhh story time.)

"Jack!" Will said surprised and raised his head, which is shoved right back down.

"Where's Elizabeth?" Will asked. (remember he thinks Shyla's dead)

"She's safe, just like I promised. She's all set to marry Norrington, just like she promised. And you get to die for her, just like you promised. So we're all men of our word really. Except for Elizabeth, who is in fact…a woman." he said the last part a bit slowly. Bo'son (the scary pirate) held onto Jack's left shoulder. Barbossa pointed a knife at Jack.

"You're next." he said, and went to cut young Will.

"You don't want to be doing that, mate." Jack said, holding his neck up and looking at Barbossa. Barbossa looked at Jack and smirked.

"No, I really think I do." he said, shaking his head, making his feather do a little dance. (not tryin to be funny, but it really does do a little dance.)

Barbossa points the knife back at Will, but Jack, who can't keep his mouth shut for a moment decided to make a remark.

"You're funeral." Barbossa whirled his head back to Jack. He really wants to kill Will, you could see it on his face..

"Why don't I want to do it?" he asked. Jack goes walk forward, but Bo'son hasn't moved his hand, making a little noise, Jack slapped it away and walks up to the chest. (I love when he does that…it's soooo funny…oh right, again sorry)

"Because the H.M.S Dauntless, pride of the Royal Navy, is floating right off shore, waiting for you." This causes Barbossa to hesitate.

"I don't trust him. He's up to something!" Koehler says. (is he the black one with the dreadlocks? I get him and Twigg confused a lot )

"Of course he is." Barbossa says, locking eyes with Jack.

"He wants the Pearl." this causes Jack to smile, his boyish smile.

"I want the pearl." he said agreeing to Barbossa

(With Norry and his friends)

From behind the rocks Norrington and his men waited for the pirates to come out. So that they could ambush them. Sur Jack had told him to do it from the Dauntless, but he wasn't going to listen to a filthy pirate. So awaiting the pirates were men, in seven longboats on both sides of the caves entrance. Murtogg and Mullroy are setting behind Norrington, who was standing and watching.

"What are we doing here?" Murtogg whispered to Mullroy.

"The pirates come out, unprepared and unawares…we catch 'em in a crossfire and send 'em to Ol' Hob." Mullroy said in a whisper. (Who's Ol' Hob? Anyone know?)

"I know that's why we're here….I meant, why aren't we doing what it was that Mr. Sparrow said we should do? With the cannons and all?"

"Because it was Mr. Sparrow who said it." Norrington said dryly.

"You think he wasn't telling the truth?" Mullroy asked dumbly.

"He doesn't tell the truth even when he's telling the truth." Murtogg said, remembering their first encounter.

(With the girls still in the boat!)

"It's taking all day to get there." Shyla whined. Elizabeth just rolled her eyes.

"Yes well if you would just help out, it'd be faster." she said, saying the last part in a sing-song voice.

Shyla's eyes went wide at her sister's remark. True it would be faster, not that she was lazy or anything. But her, Shyla Heaven Swann row a boat. Why that would be like what happened to her, Lizzy and Will when they were younger. They wanted to fish, she hated it. So, being the nice little girl she was she said she'd row the longboat…and she did, causing the boat to first go round in circles then flip. She wasn't going to do that anytime soon.

"Don't you remember what happen last time? When I first rowed a boat?" she asked fearfully. It was night and it was cold…she didn't wanna go swimming now. Elizabeth laughed.

"Yes, and that's why I'm not letting you row the boat. So hush until we reach the pearl." she said, laughing a little. Shyla nodded and looked at the cave, hoping Jack was alright.

(With Jack...We skipped half the talk…so yeah)

"Name me Captain, I sail under you colors, I give you ten percent of me plunder, and you get to introduce yourself at tea parties and brothels as 'Commodore Barbossa.' Savvy?'' Jack finished standing right be side the chest and in front of Will. Who couldn't believe his ears.

He never thought that Jack would do this just to get a ship. But he also knew from the time that he knew Jack, it wasn't probably what he thought. He wanted to see Elizabeth again, but he was also sadden over Shyla's supposedly death. He knew Jack loved her, and he didn't think he'd be able to live if Lizzy had died instead of her sister. He looked at Jack and wondered how he could just forget about her and do this?

"And in exchange, I s'pose you want me not to kill the Whelp?" Barbossa asked. Jack shook his head giving a careless look.

"No, no, not at all by all means, kill the Whelp. Jut not yet. Wait to lift the curse until the opportune moment. (he picks up a few medallions) after you've killed Norrington's men…(he drops them back one by one as he talks) every…last…one." he said and Will catches a glimpse of what he's planning and decides to play along.

"You've been planning this from the beginning. Ever sine you learned my name." Will said with an angry look on his face.

"Yeah." Jack shakes his head, without hesitation.

"I want fifty percent of ye plunder." Barbossa said, takin the bait.

"Fifteen."

"Forty."

"Twenty-five. And I'll buy you a hat. A really big one…commodore." Jack said, whispered the last part for dramatic effects.

(Ok skipping last few words…and going straight to the Dauntless.)

"Elizabeth, Shyla? Are you there? Girls, are you even listening to me?" he said and enters the room gasping.

"Oh, what have you two done?" he asks the empty room.


And CUT…hahaha. left ya with a sorta cliffy...hahaha. So deal with it. Yea, yea I kno...hey. I haven't got long until this story is done..oh...Sniffle, I don't wanna be done...it like this story and it's weirdness...Awww...some one, any one...give me ideas for a part two...I have a few but, I wont tell what they are until I write part two...so yeah.

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