A/N: Yo! What is the uppness with you all? Back with the next installment of your favourite story. You all diggin' this man! Fo' sure! Keep reviewing and shit. Reviews are the shiz.
Disclaimers: Are for spanners.
I apologise for the long review responses but I have alot to say to some folks.
TheCoffeeBean: Yes I know it is good, you have great judgement. Yeah I am Irish as a matter of fact. How'd you guess?
Lyonser: My dialogue is funny and you know it! My story needs no improvement, it is unique. I don't improve to please others. Got it? I'm glad I 'cracked you up' though, that was my aim. Steeeeeerike ONE for the Squash!
squiddrude: First off; where'd you get the name? It's pretty gangsta! No I am not a 'ghetto folk' I do not label myself. I don't beat people up for no reason either, only when they're bugging me or they are all up in my grill. Then they just askin' for it. What did your review have to do with the story anyways? Nothing, that's what. Take a hike.
LGandLDForever: If I wrote my dialogue like that then this story would be just like every other story on this site. I like to be different and if your gonna criticize my story just because I tried to make it different then you're basically suggesting that you want me to be a clone of every other aspiring writer that posts here. And I'm not down with that shit! Got it? If you don't like it, DON'T READ IT! And yes of course this story is going somewhere. Patience is a virtue
LukeNLorelaifanatic: I appreciate you taking the time to put some thought into your review and actually tell me something usefull. But I'm not cool with you telling me what not to call people. I call it like I see it and they were being 'smart-asses'. I agree that no writer is perfect which is why I don't get all these folk trying to change me. I is who I is. I write how I write. If you ain't down with that, then you is a fool. Thank you for your opinion but I am honestly not gonna take any of your advice.
obsessornews56: You don't remember me saying it because I didn't. No Rory is not in college yet. And yes I agree with you, my story is very good. As for the shortness; it's short and sweet. Like it or lump it. Your choice.
Strange Things Are A Happening
Chapter Four: Sick of Sighing
Rory turns around and goes back inside Luke's.
"What's wrong with your Mom?" Luke asks as Rory takes a seat at the counter.
"I don't know, she's been snapping and yelling at me all morning. I don't know what I did wrong." Rory sighs.
Luke pours her a mug of coffee and pushes it towards her. "Well your Mom is horribly unpredictable." Luke smiles at her.
"Tell me about it!" Rory says returning the smile.
"I just did!" says Luke. "Jeez, Lorelai was right. You are annoying." He takes away her mug of coffee and heads towards the kitchen.
"What the?" Rory says, confused. "Luke?" But Luke was already in the kitchen. Rory gets up and walks out of the diner. She looks around and spots Lorelai sitting on a bench in the Gazebo. Crying.
Rory sighs. "Mothers!"
She considered just leaving Lorelai alone and going home. But what kind of daughter would she be then?
She was sick of Lorelai's mood swings and she was sick of sighing.
So she walks towards the Gazebo.
A/N 2: Cliffhanger! Bet your wetting your pants in anticipation for the next one eh? But you just got two chapters in one day so stop being selfish and WAIT! Ah I'm just clowning, I'm glad your excited. I have a rehearsal with my rap coach tomorrow so next chapter should be up the day after that. Keep it real homies.
