Hey people how are you. I am very sorry it is taken me months to update but I was caught in a writers block but any way.
ShardyPsykoElf- thanks for the tips but if u don't like it so much don't read. And this is fanfiction I can do what ever I want to dammit this is my story. So if ed is taken off by Ripper on the train, then he is taken off. And if u hate my plot go complain to the hundred others who wrote a plot where ed is not exactly like he is in the series.
KitsuneOfShadows- thanks again for reviewing my story. And I hope u like this chapter as well.
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Disclaimers: I don't own Full Metal Alchemist. But I do own John R. Ripper, and his family (Cause I made them up OO he he.)
Chapter 5
Scar Showing
(REVIEW) (Ed POV)
"Sam..., Sam..., SAM..., dammit were did she go."
(NEW) (Ed POV)
I kept running and getting hit by every damn tree in my way. "SAM," she wasn't answering, I didn't know if she didn't answer cause she was mad or if she was in danger. I wonder if they picked a dense enough forest to practice in I thought sarcastically.
"Sam I know your mad, but please come out I will explain everything." A branch hit my left shoulder leaving a red cut. I ran faster with more branches leaving there marks on my skin. My left arm didn't look too good and it started to throb with pain, if my jacket wasn't already red it would've been.
"Ahhhhhhh...," I heard from nowhere, it was sam but I couldn't track where it came from. I heard more screaming it sounded like I had already past it. I doubled back hearing more screaming and a large boom as smock and red lightening rose from the ground in the direction I was running. It was quite and I started to cry from being so scared. I remember only crying a couple times but this was different, odd in a way I couldn't find reasonable.
I ran harder and found lindzey only a few yards in front of me. I caught up quickly and asked if she knew what was happening. She didn't know and we finally entered a smog.
I couldn't breath, it sounded like lindzey was having a tough time breathing as well. Suddenly I could feel something tugging on my head, I punched what ever was on it and ran the opposite way screaming for sam and lindzey.
(Sam's POV.)
I ran hard from Ed and lindzey even when I heard them calling my name. I kept running even after I heard them following. I had some branches cut my face as I ran harder sensing the distress in Ed's voice.
I was running more and heard someone behind me so I ran faster but they caught up. I turned and ran different ways so I could lose who ever was behind me. I could feel them put a hand on my head and I screamed loud to scare them but it didn't work. They grabbed for my neck as I screamed some more.
"You will be my bate to get Edward over here." He had a cross scar on his face and weird tattoos all over his arm he was holding me with. I couldn't see his eyes for he had sunglasses on.
He quickly switched arms and put his tattooed arm on the ground and a very large bang rang my ears with smoke and red lightening flowing every where. I couldn't breath as I fell to the ground coughing up the smoke my lungs drew. Only to have my lungs take in more smoke with each breath.
I could hear Ed faintly call my name as I slowly fell to a cold sleep.
Ok another short chapter but hey I updated so do I get credit for that. I realized I can't leave cliffhangers very well unless u call that a cliff hanger.
Hope you enjoyed chapter 5 and remember to review.
Your friend,
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