-AN: hell people please don't kill me, yesh i know it's been many months since i've last updated well i tried to make it longer so yeah. don't kill me for the grammer, i know i suck i just wanted to get this out before i hate it and want to throw it away. well enjoy! -

disclaimer- I DON"T OWN FULLMETAL ALCHEMSIT JUST MY CHARACTERS I MADE UP, (the rippers and lindzey)

Echo's things will be in Bolded italics


New Love

Loss of Love

(Review) (Sam's POV)

I could hear Ed faintly call my name as I slowly fell to a cold sleep.

(New) (Ed's POV)

I ran faster and faster, only to take in more smock with my heavy breathing. I couldn't see any thing, so when I tripped over a random object I wasn't too surprised. Feeling the ground I became aware that I wasn't in the forest anymore but somehow on the other side. Grass and weeds took their homes here with little trees to be found, except the trees marking the entrance to the forest.

I stood up looking through the smock as it was clearing up, I turned around to see what I had tripped over and my eyes widened. It was Sam on the ground (unconscious) with blood exiting her ears and the side of her mouth. I quickly kneeled down and picked her body up. She was still breathing, but it was off. I needed to get her out fast.

Turning to run out of the smock a scared man appeared in my way. I jumped from surprise and took some steps back.

"Looks like I caught you fullmetal," Scar smirked and walked toward me with a faster pace then I was using to back up.

I ran to the nearest tree fidgeting to clap my hand (without dropping Sam.) I touched the tree trunk. It formed a huge barrier as it morphed with other trees around it.

I ran, again, back into the forest towards the Rippers house.

I heard a loud booming voice as Ripper was approaching me. Followed by a scared lindzey, Ripper was to me in seconds, "What's going on," Ripper demanded. He took Sam into his arms.

"Scars here!" I pretty much yelled at him, not realizing I could give our position away and put Sam in more danger.

Adopting a puzzled look upon his rough face, he gave me a stern, "What in this Magical world are you talking about Edward." He looked toward lindzey for a moment and seeing the same look he was emitting he turned back to me.

"Where should I start…," I began.

"The part of who the hell is he!" Being interrupted by the mans great use of patience.

"He's an Ishballen, a killer, he's been killing State Alchemists and anyone else who's been getting in his way. No one knows his name so they call him Scar. Well after the giant scar on his forehead." I explained.

"Wait, you mean a Serial killer is here tracking you down, AND YOU WERE WITH MY DAUGHTER!"

"Well I didn't know he followed me here, I thought he was dead." I gave my version of a puzzled look and Ripper got angrier.

"What do you mean you thought he was dead?"

"Someone found his clothes covered in blood floating down the river about a month ago."

"But no body, wow, you guys in Central are geniuses, aren't ya. "Ripper turned and was walking back to his house. He stopped and in a calm voice, "I want you to leave, but… you have to make sure this Scar guy follows and leaves with ya." He lifted his foot and walked on.

Screaming in his direction, "I can't leave her," Again stopping, "Do you have some crush on my daughter now, Huh!" my mouth opened to speak but no words appeared. "This is just some stupid crush. And even if you do love her, for her safety just go and take that Scar guy with ya. She doesn't need you. Go back to your brother, you State Alchemist." He started again and disappeared in the foliage.

Do I love Sam? I mean I like her, but then again why was I so scared and worried when I heard the explosion. But wouldn't I be like that for most people. But I wasn't too worried about Lindzey. No I can't, I just met her. But for her safety I'll leave and take scar. If I was that worried about her then I don't want to find out how worried I'd be if Scar was back here with her.

I turned around, 'Man would I ever get to rest some day. I got my six pack abs what more do you want?' I decided to walk back in the direction I left Scar but to angle towards the train station.


(Sam's POV)

The darkness was everywhere, this wasn't a normal dream. I was crying but couldn't figure out why. This place was peaceful even though I couldn't see or hear anything. Drifting along in my thoughts, I was picturing Edward. His long blond hair how it waves in the wind. Oh… he had a ponytail that kept it in a braid. I remember now. His golden eyes that held secrets deep inside their bullet proof safe. How he smiled and still felt pain and sadness, I remember…

Tears fell down my face again as I wished to hug him. Tell him that everything was okay. To touch his delicate skin. And maybe… maybe tell him I want to be with him my entire life.

But wait now! Do I love him? What am I thinking, of course not, I just met him. His picture keeps floating in my mind. His look towards me, the rougher features yet the soft comforting aura about him. Why can't I get him out of my head.

Just think about grass and trees. The comforting green and brown with hues of yellow, as dead grass worms it's way into the picture. The tranquil sky blue background and a hand on my shoulder. Looking around and finding the familiar smile.

Shutting my eyes I screamed over and over in my mind for it to just go away " JUST STOP!" Tears making their way down my cheek. What if I do love him, it's not like he loves me back. What if this isn't love, just a teen crush. I mean everyone has them, this must be mine. I'll wake up and see him, tell him I have a crush on him, he'll laugh and I'll be normal again.

The sound of my father's voice started echoing in my ears, "What's going on?" I don't know, "what's going on?" STOP, please stop. "I want you to leave." Me, why? Dad, why? "I want you to leave, but you have to make sure this Scar guy follows." Who's Scar, was it that man who grabbed me. But why would I want him to follow me.

I was confused until I heard his voice, the soft voice -AN: of the wonderful Vic Mignogna, sorry I couldn't help myself- of my dear Edward shouting his say in this. "I can't leave her." But why would he leave her. Who is she? Is she me, am I her.

"Do you have a crush on my daughter now?" Wait father, so he does mean me. "I want you to leave." No I don't want you to leave. This is just a nightmare. Come back and hold me. Make the tears stop. "NO! DON'T LEAVE!"

"She just spoke," I heard Lindzey say, but it wasn't a misty echoed voice, it seemed nearer. My eyes didn't feel so heavy anymore and I could open them a little at a time. Light seeped into my dark world and a cheery Lindzey hovered above me.

"Don't tell me," Lindzey looked towards the door at my father, he nodded and left the entry towards the main base of our house, I guess we were in my room.

"Don't tell me," I scratched out again.

"Don't tell you what, hun?" It was her turn for the puzzled look.

"Is Edward gone?" Her face changed.

"Yes," the shock flooded my face.

"No," I whispered.


-AN: okay i know this chappter sucked, but please review, i'm getting a lil better at this writing stuff, so give me cridit for that. well dont' kill me for the long wait, i'll get chappy 7 up sooner. I promise.