Sorry for the wait, let's get this story rolling. Review if you can, after all hearing from others help bring new ideas to the story

Jaune was in a predicament he couldn't fight his way out of and that bothered him. The General returned the next day with a new scroll that he attached to jaunes wrist "this will insure you don't vanish on us". Jaune looked over his new attachment before turning to Ironwood "I'm guessing it tracks my movements and let's you listen to my conversations"? Ironwood didn't respond and that was all jaune needed to confirm his suspicions.

Ironwood let jaune out of the cell and led him over to a training room "here I'll be giving you a test to see where your level of skill is at before testing your educational level". Ironwood clicked on his scroll "send her in" the door on the opposite side opened and a white haired girl stepped into the training grounds. "I've decided that someone with a little more skill would be a fine opponent, so let me introduce you to Winter schnee" the girl bowed politely to Ironwood before doing the same to him.

Jaune turned to Ironwood "so all I gotta do is beat her before your other test"? The General smiled at him "only if you can" with that the General returned jaunes weapon and vacated the area. Once the blade was back in his hand, jaune went through a few practice moves with the small blade before settling in his fighting pose.

Winter couldn't help but think this was a joke, the boy was no older than her sister. The fact the General went so far as to adopt this boy for reasons unknown and have her of all people face him, it didn't make sense at all. Pulling her blade free, Winter settled into her own fighting pose.

The battle had begun with winter using her semblance to fire off various types of dust blasts to keep jaune at a distance. Each attack fired, missed there mark as jaune dodged them easily but made no effort to close the distance between him and winter. Ironwood watched the match and could tell that the boy was just bidding his time for the right opportunity to strike.

Jaunes movements began to get smaller as he focused on the timing each attack took to reach him. A few minutes in was all it took before he was practically dancing out of the way of Winter's assault. "You know this isn't much of a fight if you can't touch me" jaune yelled, Winter halted in her attack "I see, then I think I'll take this a little more seriously".

a glyph formed behind winter and jaune had a very bad feeling about what was going to happen. Winter was launched by her glyph at incredible speed straight into jaune with the force of a ursa. Jaune's aura flared to life as he was blasted back into a nearby wall, the force of jaune hitting the wall left crack marks.

Ironwood looked to the aura monitor and saw jaunes aura nose dive into the orange, before Ironwood could turn back to the fight he saw jaunes aura begin to refill quickly. Ironwood couldn't believe his eyes, turning to jaune in time to see his white aura was burning brighter than before. Once the white light vanish jaunes aura was completely restored, stretching lightly allowed jaunes back to stop hurting.

"I don't know if that was your best move winter but it's gonna take a lot more than that to take me down" winter gritted her teeth in anger at jaunes comment. Winter created another glyph behind her and launched at her target but jaune was already running to the left trying to escape winter's attack. Another glyph appeared in the air on winter's left allowing her to move through the air quickly, jaune realized he couldn't escaped but also saw the opportunity he needed.

Jaune spun around and mecashifted his blade to it's long sword form, taking a position to brace himself, their blades clashed. Winter was certain that jaune would falter, what she didn't expect was jaune to use her momentum against her. Jaune grabbed the underside of Winter's sleeve as he twisted his blade which caused a over the shoulder throw, winter smashed into the ground with enough force that she literally bounced off the ground.

After hitting the floor so hard, winter rolled to a stop, her aura crackled and popped but held strong. Jaune, not wanting to lose the advantage he gained, rushed a kneeling winter and delivered a devastating knee into winter's face before she could fully stand. Winter was dazed from the knee she received and couldn't avoid jaune when he wrestled her arm behind her back and forced her face first into the ground "you might want to give up winter" jaune said happily.

This kid wanted her to give up, that was the last straw, a glyph appeared under winter's stomach and launched them both into the air. Winter broke free from jaunes hold and created another glyph which lined her up with her target. Jaune had seen the technique multiple times now, taking aim at his target, jaune threw his blade. As winter flew through the air a flash of silver flew at her hand and knocked her saber free from her grasp.

Now that her weapon was left behind winter didn't have the dust to use her semblance plus she was still flying towards jaune. Winter reached jaune and dealt a right straight into jaunes face, jaune took the hit but as they both fell to the ground jaune took hold of Winter's right arm and repositioned himself behind winter. Winter tried to break free but it was to late, the combined weight of jaune and herself only added to the force she felt when jaune used her as a landing pad.

Winters aura shattered and she didn't get up even after jaune got off of her. Jaune let out a tired sigh as Ironwood call the match. Leaning forward allowed jaune to place a hand on winter's back. Focusing his semblance on winter, began the healing process at least until he heard a loud click near his head.

Jaune turned to see Ironwood's gun aimed at his head "I think you need to stand down now son". Jaune did as he was told and backed away from winter's body "Good, now on to your next test" James said.

Whew! My first action scene