Aight- I was hoping I wouldn't have to do this, but I've gotten a total of 7 guest reviews that are calling my story trash or a knock off copy of several others, and I'm not gonna take it lying down- to ZILLAFAN, 5 Anons, and 54, You don't HAVE to read my story. ZILLAFAN, if you want some space-marine guy that comes to earth from a distant planet or whatever, I'm sorry, but that's NOT what my story is- you have two perfectly functioning hands with ten equally functioning fingers, go write your own story if you want to read that, scratch your own itch! I am writing this story for M E. having people who enjoy it is an added bonus. I am not intentionally copying those other stories you mention, nor am I trying to make a Gary-Stu-Whatsitsface, but my writing style is my own, and where it needs work, I am trying to fix it. If you think my story is trash, guess what? YOU don't have to read it! OoO I know, right? SHOCKER! There are several other sites you can read fanfiction from and stories on this site you can go read that suit your tastes. 2 functioning hands and 10 functioning fingers give you the ability to go to them. I won't roll over and take these anons and guests heckling like a wounded pup; ZILLAFAN, I did read your review and I distinctly remember replying something like this at the beginning or end of a previous chapter and saying it wasn't my cup of tea to write DOOM Marine type stories that you wanted. So, suck it up and l keep reading to heckle me, getting progressively more irritated as I do NOT do as you personally wish, OR press that little left-facing button at the top of your search engine that can take you back to the story list you came from.
I am behind the screen with the keyboard writing this story, not Y O U.
As for everyone else, I apologize that this isn't the new chapter you thought it was, but when people decide to start heckling me and demand stuff from me, to a certain point, I tell them what's gonna happen. I'm sorry you had to read this crap, and I will take it down eventually to continue the flow of the story my way. Have a good Monday, everyone! Don't overwork yourselves or get too little sleep!
