Ok ppl! I wanted to do a tag team with my best friend in da whole wide world, so, in case you wanna know who i am, i am: Moonflower0Aquastar! I know sunny in real life, we both love hamsters and the book warrios, we all love fictions and rich creative ideas, so, that's why I am doing this! (Sorry this is long note) ON TO DA STORY
Goldenpaw blinked her eyes open sleepily, she got up yawning and stretching, looking around awkwardly she was suddenly reminded that she had met more hamsters, met LeafClan, and made a new friend: Aquapaw.
Goldenpaw breathed in deeply the fresh morning air and settled back down next to the sleeping form of Aquapaw. She was about to drift back into the cool fingers of slumber when..."GET UP HORNET HIDES!"
Aquapaw shot straight up and so did Goldenpaw. Shadowleaf stood infront of them muttering grumpily, "Go into the forest first, I'm going to wake Blackpaw." The two she-hamsters' hearts thumped madly,
"I was so scared!" Goldenpaw exclaimed. Aquapaw nodded weakly, "What's his problem?" Goldenpaw shrugged and carefully squeaked back, "Let's go now..." Both of them wandered out of the prickly fern entrance and into the woods.
000
Aquapaw blinked around, "Do you know where we're going?" Goldenpaw murmured to herself before telling her friend, "Well...I have been living here for a while, so I think...we're heading towards the North river."
Aquapaw followed Goldenpaw as they ambled here and there searching for Shadowleaf. Finally they dropped into sitting positions and Goldenpaw started groaning, "Why did Pearlstar have to put us with Shadowleaf?"
Aquapaw giggled back, "I-I d-d-don't know...b-but is it m-me, or is s-something tickling m-me?" Then she burst out into full laughter squealing like a piglet. Goldenpaw crawled into the bush they were leaning against.
Looking for any signs of a bird feather, each second she heard Aquapaw giggling madly. Goldenpaw tripped over somethin scaly and thin, it was green too. Her eyes met yellow slits and she screamed aloud as she realized what it was,
"Snake!" Aquapaw tried to escape her laughing moment but she couldn't, she was stuck in hysterics as its tongue flicked out at her, "G-goldenp-paw I c-can't-ha ha-go-ha ha ha! G-go get-ha ha-help-p."
Goldenpaw had heard loud and clear. She rushed through the thick grass and back to camp. Goldenpaw waved her pink forepaws wildly around, "There's a snake! And Aquapaw can't run!"
Pearlstar poked his head from his den mumbling two words, "Oh my..." Goldenpaw took a deep breath and continued, "Where's Shadowleaf? He was supposed to take us hunting and we were trying to search for him."
Pearlstar trudged towards her with a grave expression, "He left you two out there? Shadowleaf is already here, he said you two went hunting by yourselves, no matter, we must rescue her, come, you two."
"Treeheart, Firetail, follow Goldenpaw, I shall see to Shadowleaf." Pearlstar ambled off as the three scampered to the bush where Aquapaw shivered as the snake rose above her, swishing its tongue across her silver fur.
"Aquapaw!" Goldenpaw cried out in fear. Treeheart lunged at the snake and sank his teeth into the scaly beast's body. Firetail slashed his hamster claws over its eyes, yet the female snake slithered calmly away without much injury.
Aquapaw, thinking it was over, sighed and stumbled forward to her paws. She was quivering with nervousness. Goldenpaw grinned, her friend was safely next to her, with not so much as a tuft of fur missing.
But, as they walked back to LeafClan camp, the snake suddenly produced from the dark shadows of a fern and made a soft hiss that echoed in their minds. Goldenpaw felt her eyelids droop once or twice and fought to stay focused.
Aquapaw nudged her sharply in the side, "Don't fall for it Goldenpaw! Its lulling Treeheart and Firetail to sleep, what will we do?" Goldenpaw instantly snapped awake at Aquapaw's pleading voice.
Goldenpaw pondered worriedly and finally managed to let out a hoarse squeak, "Well...all we can do is fight back." Aquapaw squinted at the bright-furred apprentice, "Are you kidding me? Fight that monster?"
Goldenpaw nodded simply, "It's worth a try." Both of them crept behind the snake and waited for it to do something. Aquapaw kneaded the ground with her paws anxiously and impatiently, "Does it even know we're here?"
Goldenpaw shrugged, "I think we should attack..." Now the two apprentices hadn't even learned a thing about fighting, so you could almost immediatley tell the fact they might lose. Aquapaw boldly tugged on the snake's tail.
It whirled around staring down at the two puny hamsters with unblinking, piercing yellow eyes. Aquapaw backed away feeling a shiver run down her spine. Goldenpaw finally grasped what little courage she had.
Then Goldenpaw pounced on the beast and sank her keen fangs into what she thought was its neck. Aquapaw followed her lead and dug her claws deeply next to the bloody wound the monster had recieved.
The snake easily flung Aquapaw away and now conecntrated on Goldenpaw who dangled there hanging for dear life. It stretched down low and wiggled like a worm, shaking and making her dizzy to the point she nearly stumbled off.
But she did. Goldenpaw flew off of the snake, hitting her head clumsily upon a hard, jagged rock with such a strong impact she almost right away blacked out.
000
Goldenpaw looked up at the sky, there was a flash of orange, and a beautiful cream white hamster gazed down at her warmly. She held a kind and gentle scent and her voice sounded like a melody.
"I am Creampetal, of SkyClan, but that should not be important right now. Goldenpaw, you will kill the snake, for I will be helping you, now and forever guiding you through adventures yet to come: Awaken!"
000
Goldenpaw's eyes flew open, she scrambled to her paws with wonder lingering in her mind, but the cold, icy glance from the snake snapped her to reality and she jumped onto the monster again and tried to bite its neck.
Goldenpaw hung tightly with her strong jaws and cautiously approached the beast's front-side, she raked her long, slender claws over the snake's head and ran her teeth over the injury to make it wider.
Soon the bloody mark gaped open letting out gushes of crimson and thick, sticky liquid run through Goldenpaw's feet, she tumbled off with blood patched here and there, watching as Aquapaw arose to her feet.
"Did you kill it? Oh no, is Treeheart and Firetail OK?" Goldenpaw nodded and proudly-with fear jabbed into her emotions-watched the snake writhe around in agony. Aquapaw watched in bewilderment but only asked one question,
"How did you do it? We didn't even learn fighting yet..." Goldenpaw shook her head quivering, afraid she had just killed something, "I dunno...but I did hear a gentle voice next to my ear murmur the words: You will kill the snake, for I will be helping you."
Aquapaw glanced at Goldenpaw awkwardly, "Well...did you see...um, oh, nevermind." The two of them went home peacefully with a dazed Treeheart and Firetail leading the way. Next to the fresh-kill pile, Aquapaw mutterd one word,
"SkyClan."
R and r peeps! (sorry this is rushed)