Hey loyal readers(i have few --')! Here's Chapter...were are we now?

(random person yells from off stage) Chapter 4!

Oh...really? Ok. Well, heres chapter 4! I hope it doesn't confuse you!

Oh yeah, I really want to thank Ozai! THANK YOU. I give you credit for this chapter . . Your idea was really good, I only tweaked it slightly. Thank you for giving me the idea! Yeah and I forgot to tell you peeps what Ed looks like . I can be so dumb P Ok so, he's 14 and he has basically the same kind of hair as Nora's except he has red steaks instead of green. And he's like 5' 4" (two inches shorter than Nezu, six inches shorter than Nora) That's all I got to say. Now on to the show!

Skip to Two Weeks Later! Naruto and Nezu's 3rd date

(Like I said, I hope it don't confuzel any one . )

"Alright, so let go get some ramen!" Naruto yelled. He wasn't wearing his normal attire. He had on a simple black shirt on with darkblue jeans. He wore green covers sneakers and a silver chain necklace.

"Yeah!" Nezu agreed. She had on a dark purple V-neck shirt, black jacket and black jeans. A pair of black platform shoes and her hair was up in a loose pony-tail.

They both hurried off to the resteruant that, according to Naruto, had the best ramen (Damnit...i have this urge to capitalize the "r" in "ramen"...maybe that's because its just so good! . I could live off Ramen...oh yeah...back to the story . ) in Konoha.

---After the ramen---

"Hey Nezumi...you wanna go to my place to watch a movie?"

"Sure. Any particular movie you got in mind?"

They started walking in the direction of Naruto's place.

"How about a sacry movie? The Ring 2?"

"Please Naruto, that's not scary in the least...I was more scared when my little brother made me watch that stupid Veggietales shit when he was like two..."

Naruto laughed and suggested they watch Hostel.

"Sure, I've never seen that."

By the time they finished their conversation his house Is it a house? Or is it an apartment? Apartment right? Oh well...) was in sight.

They reached the door and continued to go in.

"You can sit on the couch while I go find the DVD, i'll be right back."

"Ok." Nezumi gazed aroung the room before sitting. It was exactly what you would think his 'house' would look. Messy. Clothes scatterd over everything. Unwashed dishes in the sink. And basicly no furniture. Pretty much just a couch, TV, a small table and two chairs and he probally had a bed and a dresser. She couldn't tell from in the living room.

"Ok, found it!" Naruto said, walking from his bedroom.

He put the DVD in the player and turned on the TV. He sat down on the couch next to Nezu. Less than half way through the movie Naruto scooted closer to Nezu. Nezu, being completly aware of what he was doing she turned and faced him. She leaned in and kissed him softly on the lips.

"Is that what you were getting to?"

"Uh...y-yeah." Naruto said, slightly surprized. A small blush spred across his face. She just smiled. Naruto leand in towards her and pressed his lips against her's passionately. She returned the kiss, lightly wraping her arms around his neck, his around her waist. They had kissed before on the 2nd date but not like this. Naruto slipped his tounge into her mouth. He started to slide his hands up her shirt.

"Naruto, no...this is only our 3rd date.." she said sligtly pushing him away.

"Come on, you can't honestly tell me you're still a virgin."

"...I...uh..Just because i'm not a virgin doesn't mean i'll sleep with every guy I go out with!" Her faced turned bright red.

Naruto sighed "Fine.." He moved closer to her.

"Ya know what Naruto, i'm just going to go home..." She stood up to leave when he pulled her back down by her wrist.

"Come on..we were having such a good time!" He pulled her closer and moved to kiss her again.

"No! I'm going home!" She yelled. Socrates jumped out from her purse and bit Naruto on the hand, causing him to let go of hers.

"OW! Damn rat!"

"I'm going home! And I don't wanna see you again Naruto! You're such a jackass!" Nezu quickly picked up her rat and left, slamming the door and left Naruto staring at his now bleeding hand.

With Nezu

She sat crying under the tree near the little stream she liked.

"AGH! That bastard! How could he try to keep me thaere when I was obviously not comfortable!"

"Nezu?...Nezumi, what happened?"

She quickly turned around to see Kiba with a worried expession o his face. He was wearing a tight red shirt with a black Jolly Roger on it (That's a Skull and cross bones in case you're wondering) , black jeans, black worn out sneakers and a lit cigarette in his hand.

Nezu tried to quickly compose herself.

"Nothing...i'm fine." She gave him a pathetic smile and rubed her eyes.

"Yeah, sure you are." He said sarcastically. He sat down next to her.

"So where's Akamaru?"

"I left him at home, don't try to change the subject...What's wrong?"

"'Sigh'...It's Naruto..we broke up.."

"What! Did he dump you?"

"No..I dumped him." She told kiba what happened.

"What an ass."

"It's ok...it's just I thought he was nice..I'm just a really bad judge of character I guess..."

"Don't go and make yourself feel bad...just forget about him.."

"You're right. I just need to find somone I know enough to ask.." She looked at Kiba "Heh, i'd ask you but i'm sure you already have a girlfriend . huh?"

"Uh..heh, actually no."

"Oh!" Nezu blushed "Then...would you like to go somwere somtime?"

"Sure!...I'm mean..uh are you sure your over Naruto already?"

Nezumi laughed and smiled "Yeah, I knew it wouldn't last anyway...Naruto's not my type. I was just so upset that I wasn't able to tell that he was like that... So then you wanna go do somthing this weekend?"

"Yeah." Kiba placed the cigarette in his mouth and inhailed. As he was exhaling Nezu snatched it away from him.

"Kiba! Do you have any idea how bad this stuff is for you?"

"Do you have any idea how much you sound like a anti-smoking ad?"

"Kiba, i'm being serious!" She threw the cig. into the stream

"If it makes you feel better I only smoke when I'm under some kind of stress, I don't smoke just to smoke."

"'sigh' Well it still bothers me but I don't think i'm going to get somone as stubborn as you to stop doing somthing."

"That's true" They both let out a small laugh. Nezu glanced at her watch.

"OH SHIT! It's 12:30, I was suposed to be home like two hours ago! NORA'S GONNA KILL ME!"

Kiba broke out laughing.

"Shut up! We're technically dating now, he's going to kill YOU!"

"...WHAT! Hurry up! Get home! I don't want to be killed by a deranged overprotective older brother!"

"Ok i'll see you tomarro at school."

"Ok."

Nezu gave Kiba a quick wave goodbye and ran off. As soon as Nezu was out of sight he pulled out another cig. and lit it.

"I should probally get home too...damnit" at this thought he took a long drag on his cig., stood up and started towards his house.

At Nezu's House

Nezu quietly opened, entered, and closed the door. She tiptoed through the living room, up the steps and to her room.

"Phew..i made it..."

"Whoa Nezzie, you're home late!"

"SHH, Ed! You're going to wake up Nora!"

"No way, he gave me 20 bucks to go get him if got in to late!" Ed stuck his tounge out in a childish way and laughed "I love easy money!"

"Ed you greedy bastard!...I'll give you 40 bucks if you don't tell him!"

"Hmmm...ok."

Ed took her money and ran off.

"Phew, that was tooo close. Its like 1 in the morning...Nora would of freaked."

"Yeah..I think "freaked" covers it." Nora said from the doorway, Ed standing next to him.

"ED! You told! I gave you $40 to keep your trap shut!"

"Yeah well, $40 from you and $20 from Nora. I just got $60 for rippping off two idiots. Nora all you had to do was stay up a few hours later and you, Nezu, you trusted me. I'm going to bed. Night!"

The two elder siblings were left feeling quite stupid.

"Damnit Nezu! Where the fuck were you? What did you to do all night?"

"Nothing! We just got ramen and went to his place to watch a movie."

"You went to his place? You idiot!"

"NOTHING happend...sides..i broke it off with him.."

"Ok, but I have one question."

"Yeah?"

"Why the hell do you smell like smoke?"

"I wasn't smoking if that's what you're thinking! I was just hanging out with somone that does."

"..Really?" ( --thats not a thought (just makin' sure u know))

"Really."

"Ok then...'sigh' ...i'm going to go to sleep...Good night Nezumi! . ." (he changes attitudes so quick..) He patted her on the head and left the room.

"Night." Nezu flopped down on her bed, her three rats curled up next to her. "Good night Socrates. Good night Flemel. Good night Spooky-Muffin.

END OF CHApTER 4

Ok ALL! sorry for any spelling/grammar errors. Chap 5 might take some time to get up...i have no idea what should happen . if you got any special ideas lemme know! I think this isn't as good as it could be...so ya know...just send 'em in. Or if you have any questions. And if you don't have an account on but u do have AIM...mines TruthTellerQoQ

I was hopin to fit Ed and Nora into the story more but it seems to be difficult...ok well i'm gonna cut off my rambleing and leave, BYES!