um...charecters arent mine...plot is...
Um...for those who read my story...which wasnt suppose to be out in the first place...and actually reviewed. Thanks for the genorosity. For those who don't understand what Im talking about, its a new story I put out, ((it has many typo's cuz..again...it wsant suppose to be out yet!)) You can call the plot a "nari-chan13" version of Alice in wonderland. A twisted version which as dramtic as it seems, came in a dream...a nightmare more like it.
Of course the furuba gang wasnt in it...I was...but...Anywho...ima stop babbling.
Back to THIS story.
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LAST CHAPETER
"Because…I love you…so much…if YOUR NOT MINE…YOUR NO ONES!" he screamed. His voice changing back to the same of the supposed dark figured man and his eyes grew wide and changed from soft jade green to crimson red as he let go of Tohru's neck-
--------------------------He he, I'm gonna get you------------------------------------------------
-------------------------I'm gonna get you…------------------------------------------------------
------------------------Got ya!---------------------------------------------------------------------
MEANWHILE
He slowly got up, rubbing his cheek and looked up at Kyo. His playful look rising on his soft pink lips.
"I can't believe it...out of all the people...you...how...why would you do such a thing...then again...what was I to expect...can't you admit you lost . . .you damn rat...You lost Tohru...and there's nothing you can do about Yuki..." Kyo muttered to himself in somewhat of a surprise.
From where he stood, he saw the dark caped man's true self.
Who he truly was, Tohru's suspicions were true.
Old...miserable...lonely...and jealous...YUKI!
Eyes of crimson red watched as Tohru slept out of hard grudged hands. Eyes of crimson red watched, full of happiness and relief, as she fell down.
He really didn't care to watch her die as she hit the rocks below, his job was done. Someone else will soon take care of her from there on.
Hatori turned around, covering himself with his black cloak again, and began to walk through the field and into the woods.
"Dumb-ass " he muttered as he victoriously saw Hatsuharu dangling dead off a tree. His face stayed shocked, just as when he died. His eyes were wide and mouth open wide and slanted to his right. Not to foreget the odd shade of blue that covered his skin.
Hatori himself had hanged him. Hatsuharu was creeping through the trees as Hatori stalked Tohru, that couldn't happen now could it. If Hatsuharu had gotten to her before he did, the whole plan would go down in flames.
While Haru was about to jump down from the tree and rescue Tohru, Hatori had already jumped up to the tree. The rope was ready. Since Haru had already jumped, Hatori simply threw the rope over Haru's head. Hatori stood holding down the weigh of his younger cousin as he kicked his legs around, apparently trying to grab hold of something with them. After a while, he grew tired of waiting for Haru to die, so he jumped off the other end of the tree. He tied the rope to the end of the branch so that Haru couldn't get off, and left him hanging, dead.
"Foolish cousin…you shouldn't have changed your mind and try to destroy our plan" he grumbled as he punched one of Haru's leg out of his way, and continued on walking. His deed for the lord and heaven had been done. It took long, but it was worth it. Now if Yuki had to complete his part, and the final step would be finished.
He slowly got up, rubbing his cheek and looked up at Kyo. His playful look rising on his soft pink lips.
"I can't believe it...out of all the people...you...how...why would you do such a thing...then again...what was I to expect...can't you admit you lost . . .you damn rat...You lost Tohru...and there's nothing you can do about Yuki..." Kyo muttered to himself in somewhat of a surprise.
Yuki grinned back at Kyo.
" Foolish cat…there's so much I can do…I was always loyal," he said raising his hands up to the sky and looking victoriously above.
Kyo raised an eyebrow at Yuki's actions.
"Oh…I get it…" he said putting his finger up to his lips.
"You're just nuts!" he spat at him.
"Hn…if anyone is the crazy one…its you. You're the one who prefers spitting words at me then helping the Yankee over there." He said pointing at Uotani who was now slowly and painfully slipping away.
Kyo snapped his head back, shocked. 'Shyt…I forgot…crap!' he said launching fully at her.
"Ah-ah-ah…too late" Yuki said. In one jump, he had already reached her. He quickly pulled her over his shoulder, and grinned at Kyo.
"Kyo…you are hopeless…poor Tohru had to fall for a fool. You can't help her, and you cant help her friend here." He yelled.
Kyo stood shocked. What he said was completely true. He snapped back into reality just in time to watch Yuki dart up into a tree, and leave. Luckily he had caught the direction Yuki was heading in, and quickly followed.
Before he had noticed, it was around midnight. The stars
shined bright and the sky was pitch black.
He had been jumping from tree to
tree following Yuki when he noticed someone else jump in. A blonde. Momiji.
They continued jumping until finally they stopped at a small black cabin. Kyo had decided to wait and see what they would do next. A man in a black cloak had already been waiting from the looks of it. He had been standing in front of the door, head bowed down.
Yuki and Momiji crashed upon some rocks, but retaliated soon, and stood back up. After a few moments of whispering, the cloaked figure stepped aside the door.
"What The Fck " kyo mumbled when he noticed the door was dripping of something. A dark liquid slid down the door and onto the ground.
Kyo's nose started twitching when an awkward scent made its way towards him. A familiar scent.
"Blood" Kyo whispered as he began recognizing the scent.
Meanwhile, down below on the ground, everyone began entering the small cabinet. Just as instructed.
"And now, we bring god back…" said the cloaked figure, revealing who he was to Kyo, Hatori of course.
"ha-to-ri…" Kyo said shocked while Hatori himself entered the cabin and closed it behind him.
Well...that's it...cliffie...if you thknk about it...not as long as the previous one..
srry for the wait...actually...NOT...
I LIKE PUTTING YOU PPL IN SUSPENSE!
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Burning love,
Nari-Chan13