DieChan - Yeah, he was. The wuestoin is by whom, why, and how. And here is my update. Thanks for reading!
CoffeeWithRiku - Thanks for reading and reveiwing! Yeah, i guess my first chapter was really rusty. But thanks for telling me that its getting better! I would hope that every chapter it seems more put together and better written! Thanks again!
foxy-comic-death - Ansem deos have a big part. But I'm not going to give away if it was him ornot. No Riku doesn't have a split personality but his emotions change very quickly and easily. Kairi did have a thing for Sora, but after a while she learned that it would never be returned. So she just gave up on it. She is happy to help other people out when dealing romantically with Sora as long as it makes Sora happy. Writing this fic rox my sox lol!
Crimson Chain - Yeah, Tidus likes him also. A lot of people fall for Sora at one time or another because, as you said, he is so cute when he acts so naive and childish. Which he does all the time! It is sad that Riku is even giving Sora the idea that he doesn't like him. But I think... Riku is trying to convince Sora of this so that he can convince himself. He is such a dumbass.Thanks for reading and liking my fic!
Hokay. Um, in this chapter Riku sings. I was wondering why Riku always has some musical talent. Or at least he does in my fics and a lot of others. It because he would look so hot up on stage (even though Sora would look much better!) and because... it just fits with him. I dunno. I alwyas make him write music. I don't know why. It just works so well with him. Also I brok this one into peices because a bunch of different people are diong a bunch of different things and I dunno, it needed to be broken up. And here is another short, mispelled, chapter. Sorry.
Kairi and Sora arrived at the fair. It came once a year. And since there were no amusement parks on Destiny Islands... it was a big event! Kairi took Sora's hand.
"SORA IT'S BEAUTIFUL!" she cried. Every year she was amazed at the beauty of the fair. It always seemed so, alive and magical. Like nothing she had ever seen before. Sora smiled and nodded.
"C'mon Kairi! We have to go on the coler coaster! It's amazing!"Sora loved roller coasters. They always made him laugh. Even if they did make him sick. Kairi smiled and nodded and they got in line. kairi payed (A/N: Sora doesn't carry money around with him ever. So if someeon pays. it won't be Sora) And they got in the car. Pushed the little over head seat belt things on. And away they went. Up... up... up... higher!
"GET READY SORA!" cried Kairi, but Sora had something else in mind. Riku. He felt bad that Riku couldnt be here. MAybe if he shouted Riku's named really loudly, Riku would hear him. The first car tilted over then, the second. Finally the third. In a rush of speed they sped down the hill.
"RRRIIIIKKKKUUUU!" cried Sora as loudly as he could. kairi stared at him strangely for the rest of the ride. What was going on in poor little Sora's mind?
Wakka and Tidus started putting on their team jerseys in the lock room. There were still a couple hours before the game but the coahc always made them go there early to warm up. Wakka staredat his wonderful blond teammate. He had liked the shorter boy for so long. Tidus had yet to realize his feelings. Of course, Selphie knew. She always knew. She also knew who Tidus liked. Sora. Sure, Wakka's heart had been crush upon hearing this, but he decided to not let it get to him. He was going to win Tidus over. Whatever the cost. He walked over to Tidus and clapped him on the back.
"You read man?" Tidus loolked up and grin.
"Today the Sword Fishes shall conquer!" cried Tidus. Wakka gave him a ittle shove.
"Not with that out of sape body!" Tidus pushed him back
"OH? And mine isn't as good as yours?" the game of pushing went longer and got more violent. Shoving each other into equipment, noogies on the head. Until finally Wakka had Tidus pinned against a wall. As planned. He looked deep, deep into Tidus's eyes. All zTidus could do was stare back. About to make his move...
"If you two love birds could stop for a second, maybe you could find time to practice!" cried the coach's voic from the door way. Wakka spun arund, slightly blushing. 'DAMN COACH! RUINING MY MOMENT!" Tidus put his hands on the wall. Blushing as red as a tomato wondering what just happened. He was Sora's man. Not Wakka's. Why was he so entranced. After a couple seconds he regained his compsure. Wakka didn't mean it like that. He was probablygetting ready to punch him or something. He turned around a smiled at Wakka.
"I've still got the better body!" and raced out the door. Leaving Wakka thre muttering ":Damn, damn, damn..." over and over to himself. Why did nothing ever go as planned as it did in Blitz Ball?
Riku sat in his room singing softly to himself. A song he had written long ago. When Sora was in the hospital.
Something going wrong down in hell
I need to get out of here
Going to the surface to catch some air
Not knowing how much more I can bear
Can you hear me down there?
Takes some time to heal
The scars that don't burn away
All my fault
Didn't have to be this way!
Did you ever know how much I cared?
Why did you have to stay down there?
Now your locked up for good
I don't know if you understood
Take some time to heal
The scars that don't burn away
All my fault
Didn't have to be this way!
I can't find the key
The door remains locked
in no hope
I just can't deal anymroe
Not being able to reach you
down there
Takes some times to heal
The scars that don't burn away
All my fault
Didn't have to be this way!
(Written by yours truly. Mainly because I don't knwo anything about music so I couldn fid a good song to express Riku's feelings)
Riku stopped humming and flopped on his bed. What was he doing to Sora? Was Sora even noticing? Riku remembered last night, how Sora had held Tidus's hand. No, Sora probably didn't even notice. Sora was probably fine. With out him. 'I wonder where Kairi took him? To the mall? Back to the movies? The Lookout?' wondered Riku absentmindedly.
"Riku!" he thought he heard a very, very faint voice yell. It sounded almost like... Sora...
"HEY MOM?" He yelled. "Did you hear someone yell my name?"
"NO RIKU!" came the reply. Riku lay back down again and sighed. Must have been his imaginatioin... how could he hear Sora from hear? Its not like they were telepathically conected. That they definetly weren't. He was probably just to sickly obsessed. It would pass. This wasn't the way things were supposed to be. So they weren't going to be like this. Things were going to change. Or else he would make them change.
"C'mon Sora! You can do it!" cried Kairi. Sora was at a booth attempting to win her a prize. The scene that was replaying over and over in his mind was how Riku won him a prize. A stuffed tiger. Sora loved it ad Riku... well ditched him shortly after. But he still won Sora the toy!
Sora threw the bal at the blocks. Missed. He tried again. Missed. Hee tried again, his last throw. It hit, but only knocked over one out of three balls. Sora looked down at the ground, pouting.
"I'm sorry Kairi. I really wanted to win it for you!" the young man running the booth grinned. The small boy looked so cute!
"You know what, we have so many toys and this booth is so.. unpopular you can have a toy for trying so hard!" he handed Sora a giant bunny, which he gave to Kairi. Sora gave him a big smile.
"THANKS! I'm Sora. That was really nice of you!" Kairi took Sora's hand.
"C'mon Sora.You know you shouldnt give your name out to strangers! Plus we have to get going to the game, so don't start up a conversatoin now!" She scoled, but then she turned back to the guy, "But thanks also!" and they started walking away.
"The names Hiro! I guess I'll be seeing you guys!" he yelled at them. Sora turned around and smiled and then continued walking. Kairi thought this was probably the strangest occurrance at the fair yet. Sure the people were nice, but thy didn't give away free stuff like this! Plus that Hiro guy looked so young, only a year or two older. And even stranger was what Sora yelled on the roller coaster. And why was Sora so friendly with this guy? She looked down at Sora whistling contently. Was something going on because of Riku?
Wakka and Tidus and their other team members gathered around after swimming about 500 laps. Their coach looked at each one of them individually.
"OK guys. It is going to be a tough game. We are against the Sand Sharks. They are the #1 ranking team. We ar only slightly behind. But make no mistake, they are masters of the sport!" the team nodded solemnly. Wakka glanced at Tidus and smiled. he looked so cute when his face was all seriouse like that! "That means no fooling around!" the coach glanced at Wakka and Tidus "Do I make myself clear?" The team nodded once again and Wakka gave a fake salute, "SIR YES SIRE MAN!" he cried and everybody laughed. The coahc walked away muttering something about how Wakka couldn't be seriouse for more than 5 seconds.
"RIKU! TIME TO GET UP IF YOU WANT TO MAKE IT TO THE BLITZBALL STADIUM ON TIME!" cried his mom. Riku slowl opened up his eyes and rubbed his temples. What the hell? He looked at his clock. 20 minutes. Shit. He got off of his bed, got dressed and ran out the door, but then slowed. If he went... he would see Sora... but... if he didn't go... everyone would be pissed off at him... so what... should... he... do...? He thought for a second. ZRisk getting an erection... risk getting every friend he has mad at himfor not seeing the championship game... hmmm... The game ranked higher. He should go. HE just wouldn't sit with Sora if he could help it. HE checked his watch again. 10 minutes to get there. "FUCK!" he cried and ran away. DAMNIT! Couldn't he do anything right? Even thinking gets him in trouble!
Kairi and Sora left the fair to go see Tidus' and Wakka's game. Along came Cloud, Leon, Selphie, and Namine. They talked and chatted. Eventually Sora stopped at the Lookout to use the bathroom, adn Kairi rounded up the others.
"Listen you guys. I don't know if you've noticed but Riku has been... kinda ditching Sora lately..." Leon rolled his eyes.
"You know Riku. He's like that. Everybody has their days where they just need to seel up like a caterpillar..." Cloud whispered something into his ear and Leon stopped talking, the faintest shade of red on his cheeks. Kairi sighed and continued.
"well... I took Sora to the fair today, and when we were on the roller coaster, he yelled out Riku's name when going down hill. I don't know what that mans but I'm worried..."this time Cloud interrupted her.
"Look Kairi. First of all, I KNOW, Riku isn't going to miss this game so Sora is going to see him there. PLus, Sora isn't the type of kid to get bent out of shape just because Riku won't say hi to him for a few days. And I hope your not suggesting... something else.. as the reason Sora yelled Riku's name. If there is one thing Sora isn't its perverted."
"Unlike someone I know..." muttered Leon. Cloud turned to face him.
"I heard that, and YOu know I'm only perverted around you! You just make me so horny!" Cloud wrapped an arm around his waist and kissed his neck. The others rolled their eyes. They were used to such odd shows of affection between the lovers. They turned when they heard the shwoosh of doors and Sora standing there.
"Well come one! Aren't we going!" He asked.He ran off down the sidewalk. The others laughed and followed him. But Kairi still couldn't get the idea that something was up with Sora out of her mind. How many times to people yell other peoples names when they are on a roller coaster and that person just ditched them? Not alot.
Tidus and Wakka entered the great orb that Blitz Ball wasplayed in. Tidus looked out at the stands. He caught a quick glance of Sora dn smiled. Good. He would play is best for Sora. Wakka glanced at Tidus smiling. Good.He would play his best for Tidus. And the game began.
SW: I know, short chapter. Ehh... Yeah I made the song up. I want to try and find real songs to use, but I really just can't find one to express my essential purpose. Anywhoz, I know nothing about Blitz Ball. So I'll probably just start the next chapter after the game ended. Seriously, all I know is that its played in a giant glass ball of water. And that its from FFX but thats it. If anyone would like to tell me how the game is played I would gladly accept that help! Also, as for that guy Hiro, I really wanted to add a oc just to stir things up. So should I keep him in the story? OR should I drop him like a hot coal?