Hey, Hey! How's life for you all? I hope it's good. I will finish this story, but it's just that school has started again and I didn't have as much time on the holidays as I expected to finish writing this. I might try to end this story in the next two chapters. Maybe. If I can squeeze everything in. Hey and I was wondering, how many of you are actually peterxsusan fans and how many are not? Please, let me know! OK, I'm gonna reply to some of the reviews from ch 13. Sorry to whoever I may have missed, these are the only ones I have read:

cream-cheese-girl
2006-06-27
ch 13, reply

OH MYGOD! that was SO so amazing! seriously, im gonna be refreshing this page every two minutes now just to check if you have updated! I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! If i could marry a story it would be this one (and if peter and susan can be together despite the fact that theyre siblings..then i can marry a story, LOL) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

My reply: Thanks cream-cheese-girl! I'm glad to hear that you love my story that much! Peter and Susan do make a great couple don't they! ;)

Pirate Inxs
2006-06-22
ch 13, reply

wow thats drama for ya
and man i just want to kick there mom right now shes such a pain
but its great i loved the cliff hanger really and i think i have an idea of who was by the witch but im not going to say anything just cuz lol but keep up the good work and update soon ok

My reply: Yeah, their mum's a real pain! I think you may know one of the two who was next to the witch, but the other one will be a big shock! Keep reading, there's more coming!

BrokenPorcelainDoll
2006-06-22
ch 13, reply

gah u are lucky that i love this story so much or i would have left a long time ago because of your bad grammar and spelling :P im kind of a spelling perfectionist, but not to a scary extreme level. anyway great chapter! i hate mothers who think they rule over everyones lives. If i were one of them, I would have ordered she be removed from my sight and have the guards carry her off hehe :P anyway update soon or i will scream and kick and cry and poke you in anger.

My reply: Ohhhh, I'm sorry about my spelling and grammer! I know, I'm terrible! My English teacher says that I have a fantastic imagination but my spelling holds me back! Please, please don't leave because of my untalented spelling! Anyways, I know a mum who likes to rule over her kids' lives! I kinda based Helen on her!

Rosemary and Thyme 13, anon.

You don't know how long I've waited for this chapter (well actually you do but that's beside the point)I love it and you better update within the next month or I'll, i'll.
Are you aussie?
Rosie

My reply: I am so sorry for the long wait! Please, please forgive me! Glad to hear you love it and actually I'm not aussie. I'd tell you what nationality I am but I'm guessing people might guess who I am, and I'd prefer to say anonymous! Sorry darling!

aminuleen
2006-06-20
ch 13, reply

Oh please you've got to hurry with next chapter! It was great, I loved how their dad was mostly ok with them being lovers, I right now despise their mother If this was real life and I was their I wouldve kicked her but for laying a hand on my William Moseley. Peter I mean I just love him so much I wish he was mine, or Anna Popplewell's. Anyway enough of my babbling and please keep up the good work!...

My reply: Yes aminuleen, I'm hurrin'! Yeah, I'm kinda making that there dad is every understanding and all! Please don't think that I'm trying to steal him by saying this but I think your William Moseley is hot, hot, hot! I think every girl who has seen the movie is in love with him (sigh) and I think that he and Anna Popplewell need to get together or at least have there characters (Peter and Susan) get together! You know I think we should write a letter to the writers and director of the next Narnia movie and tell them to make Peter and Susan get together and have everyone in favor of it to sign the letter! Sorry, I'm babbling on too, but I can't help it when it comes to a Peter and Susan pairing (or William and Anna pairing)! I could go on all day! But I won't cause I'm probably boring you and you might have stopped reading ages ago! But, just one more thing. I heard from another author on this site that William already has a girlfriend and it's not Anna:(

You know I reckon that me and you should find this girlfriend and tell her to keep her filthy hands off William because he's yours and Anna's!

This is the longest reply I'm ever written to any of my readers! You should feel blessed honey! Anyways glad you like my story, gotta go now!

spooky-phoenix
2006-06-20
ch 13, reply

yay! and update! haha! awesome! can't wait to see what happens! good job! sorry to hear though that you'll be leaving us:(

My reply: Thanks for the review! Yeah, I'm kinda running out of idea for fics and I'll be giving my keyboard a rest, not forever, but just think of it as a temporary retirement! To tell you the truth I don't know when I will be back, but I think I eventually will be. But after I finish my fics you won't hear from me in a while!

KibumiWong
2006-06-20
ch 13, anon.

I LOVE IT!
a really good one!
I love this chapter!
My god! I love your peterxsusan!
please update soon!
see ya
bye

My reply: Hi KibumiWong. Yeah, I'm loving this story as well! Like I was telling aminuleen I could go on about peter and susan all day! They are the best couple and the cutest (in my opition)! Anyways I hope you like chapter 14!

cherryblossomlittlewolf4eve...
2006-06-20
ch 13, reply

arg! i hate cliff hangers! but as a author, i know it feels good to be evil and leave one, lol, anyway, another nice chapter done! please don't loose inspiration, its too good!

My reply: I know what you mean about the cliff hangers. I find it weird that I hate it when an author writes in a cliff hanger but I do the cliff hanger thing myself. Weird huh? Anyway, I will finish this story, I promise!

shatafa
2006-06-20
ch 13, reply

Love the stroy so far! keep at it!

My reply: I glad your liking it shatafa! I will keep at it!

Now, onto the story! I am sorry again to anyone who I might have missed in the reply to the reviews! Please don't shot me for it!

Disclaimer: own nothing!

No, Peter thought, this is impossible! This is not happening!

Peter looked over at Lucy who looked back at him is horror and shock. On one side of the witch rode the Calormen King, Dominic with a very smug look on his face and on the other side was the one person they thought would never betray them! Never!

It was their mother, Helen Pevensie.

It took the eldest and youngest siblings a moment to register what they where seeing. There, unmissable to man's eyes was there mother, riding a black horse, wearing armor and holding a sword. Anger and hurt exploded in Peter and he unshielded his sword.

"Peter," said Lucy, her voice trembling, "What are we going to do?"

Peter looked over at his baby sister. Only nine years old she was and she was forced to fight against her mother. Their mother was now considered a foe.

"We must treat her as same as any creature on the witch's side," said Peter, his throat tight. He saw as tears sprung in Lucy's eyes. He went over to her and put a hand on her shoulder, "I'm sorry, Lu. I'm so sorry. But we have to be strong, it'll be alright. I promise."

He heard the youngest queen sniff and she nodded. Peter looked up as King Julo approached.

"We're ready, Peter," he said simply. Peter gave him a nod.

"You ready Lu?" he asked, concern masked his in voice. He didn't how if she would be able to fight. Actually Peter realized he didn't know if he was able to fight, either. This was their mother, their own flesh and blood…

"I'm okay" said Lucy. She sighed and closed her eyes. She felt Peter squeeze her shoulder and heard the hooves of his horse moved away a little from him. She looked up and saw him turn his white unicorn around slightly to see the Narnian army which was stationed at Cair Paravel's gates. Edmund and Susan could be made out sitting on horses.

I just won't attack her, Lucy thought, I'll leave mum alone. Yes! That's it. If I don't bother her then I won't have to fight her!

She heard King Julo un-shield his sword and thought it was best she do as well. She felt a nervous but exciting feeling rise in her. Her first real battle. She took a few deep breaths to calm herself and clear her head. She looked over at Peter and caught his gaze. She gave him her best smile and a small nod. Peter smiled back her and looked back at the approaching army. He turned his horse again to look behind him.

"What happens on this field cannot be undone. For those who give their blood for a country not their own will be remember for all time for their love and sacrifice," he called. He turned around to face the witch's army once more. Julo gave him a nod.

"For Narnia and for Aslan," he called and with that the warriors bolted forwards. Either running or galloping. Peter saw the witch expose her sword and Peter pushed the helmet down over his face. Within the matter of moments the two armies collided.

The middle Pevensie children watched as the red and gold ran into a large group of creatures.

"Dominic will be fighting with her," said Susan to Edmund. Edmund looked over at her. Her porcine skin was paler then usual and her eyes were a very bright hazel.

"Are you alright?" he asked her. She looked over at her little brother and smiled.

"Of course. I never liked him anyway," she reply

"Is that why he joined her, because you told him you wouldn't marry him?" Edmund asked

Susan looked over at Edmund, a small smile of satisfaction on her face, "I told him he was the ugliest creature I had ever met and if he ever tried to hurt you again he would be very sorry."

Edmund looked rather confused for a moment before smiling a laugh at the memory of last night and looking back at the armies fighting. He felt a little uneasy when he saw the Archenland army slowly decrease.

"They are going to need our help," said Susan, like she was read her younger brother's mind. Edmund nodded and saw as Mr. Fox (AN: you know the fox that was helping the Pevensies escape the wolves. I think that's his name) came running toward the raven-haired siblings.

"Your majesties," he panted, "The High King has sent word to prepare. They will retreat towards you and he asks that the archers step forward first."

Edmund nodded and said, "Find Orieus and tell him to prepare his troops."

Mr. Fox bowed and hurried to find the General.

Peter looked around and realized that they were fighting a losing battle. They didn't have enough men and as much of the enemy he killed, twice as much as their own army was being demolished. Peter hadn't seen the Witch, his mother or Dominic since the start of the battle.

He looked around and spotted Julo. He decided that they would need Edmund and Susan's help.

"Julo," he yelled, dogging an arrow that came flying at him. The Archenland King looked up at him, "We need to fall back. Call for your men to retreat towards the gates."

Julo nodded as he cut open a goblin and roared, "Retreat. Retreat to the gates."

Peter nudged his unicorn into a canter and looked around for Lucy, and spotted her following the Archenland army back towards Cair Paravel. He then pulled his horse around and followed them.

"Here they come," said Edmund and he pulled out his sword, just as Orieus appeared at his side. However he addressed Susan.

"My Lady," he said, "The archers are ready."

Susan nodded and placed an arrow into the sling and pulled it back and lifted it to the sky. The archers behind her did the same. She waited a few moments before releasing it and her archers followed suit a few seconds after her. Edmund felt amazed and proud when he saw every single arrow hit an enemy.

Susan and the archers prepared another attach and again every archer hit a creature from the witch's side. Just at that moment, Peter, Lucy, Julo and the remaining Archenland army joined the Narnian army. Susan called the order to fire at will and the sky was full of arrows.

"Ed," Peter gasped, "Mother, she's fighting with the witch."

"What!" said Edmund

"Mother," said Peter more urgently, "She's on the Witch's side. She is fighting along side her."

"But how-" said Edmund

"No time to explain now," said Peter, "but we'll get our answers."

"Watch it!" called Susan, who hadn't heard a word of their convocation. Arrows from the witch's army began to fly towards them now. They all blocked and ducked them.

"You ready?" asked Peter. Edmund and Susan nodded. The arrows were no more use because the witch's army began to charge at them. Peter nudged his horse into a canter, closely followed by Edmund, Julo, Susan and Lucy.

This is it, thought Peter, this is where it ends.

That was the last reasonable thought that went through his head before he charged his unicorn to the witch's army.

Shock and confusion was all that filed Edmund when he heard Peter's words.

'Mother, she's fighting with the witch.'

He must be mistaken, Edmund thought, mother would never do this. Unless…

Susan and Peter. Of course! Why hadn't he seen it coming! Mother wanted to stop them. This had nothing to do with her loyalty to the witch; it was all about Susan and Peter's relationship. However Edmund didn't really know what mother would end up achieving with siding with the witch. Just the loss of her children and the Narnian's trust.

But wasn't that me? Edmund though, hadn't I been the traitor, yet they were all able to forgive me?

Edmund thought it would be best if he left the matter alone for the time being because if he didn't concentrate on the battle he might get distracted by his thoughts and be killed…

She had been in this situation before. Susan chopped and sliced at her enemy. She tried to keep count but lost track after sixteen. Everything around her had happened in slow motion and she looked up at a man who dispatched a faun. She narrowed her eyes when she recognised the face.

"Dominic," she hissed through grinded teeth. She ran towards him as fast as she could and slashed his with her sword across his back. He turned but she dodged his eye line and ran in front of him and slashed a cut at his neck. Red liquid poured from the cut. He turned again and again she dodged his eyes. She grabbed him from behind and was about to slash his throat when he seized her and threw her over his shoulder and onto the ground in front of him. Her sword fell from her hand and she was about to jump up when he kicked her in the mouth to keep her down.

Breathing heavily she looked up at him and he smiled in triumph. But then he gave a cry of pain and he fell to his knees. Susan saw the silver of the blade glitter as it swung and dismembered Dominic's head completely from his body. She saw his head fall to the ground followed by this body and spraying Susan in blood.

She looked up and saw Lucy standing there, blade in her hand, which was covered in red liquid. Lucy came forward and helped Susan to her feet.

"Are you okay?" she called over all the battle noise. Susan nodded, but that was all the convocation they had time for because Calormen soldiers came towards them ready to kill.

Together the Narnian Queens fought and killed their foe and Susan realized for the first time in this battle that victory was leaning towards their favor. With this thought in her head she worked herself hard to kill anyone who was in league with the witch.

Okay. I am so sorry for the short chapter but I hope this will feed your cravings for the time being until I figure out what to write next. I'm really bad with the battle scenes, I never now how to write them. I have to think of what happens next. Hey you know I'm just making this story up as I go? I don't really have any pacific ideas for this story. My main obligation for his whole fic was Susan being captured by the witch and Peter saving her, but it turned out to continue into God knows what!

It kinda explains why I'm losing inspiration for this fic, its cause I'm running out of ideas!

HELP!

Anyways, enough of my boring jabber, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE REVIEW!

Chapter 15 will come soon…I promise…Once I have new ideas…Can't let you people down…