author note.

we near the end of act 1 of raven lovers of modern and old, after day five challenges I will do chapter on other characters because Lyday is a villain, what the saddle club think of Dominic disappearing, Luna journey, in later chapters Dominic is starting to realize that Daala need more love from himself and comfort her to feel less lonely. Brett and Hannah are also getting together at some point around act 2 or act 3. Jeash need more character development and Draco does have a small crush on Jeash but In this chapter it will get into that. King well I see him and Kenra are most likely to get together because at of the cast their act younger at of all of them. Gaale is a lesbian but it will not be around this chapter. Kenat is bisexual but it will be explained in act 2.

Hannah will get more character development and I plan to have her to get more involved with Daala at some point.

Padwy still developing her own body issue of sex. Grema is still in development but she will start to like Kenat and Gaale at some point. Beth and Kefra I feel it already done but Glema I have no plan for Glema because she just there so she have to go. now start of chapter 14.


chapter 14 Daala rise up part one

Brett. Daala how Dom doing.

Daala. he find.

Grema. look you need to have sex with him sooner or later because boys hate waiting.

Kenat. leave Daala alone and plus really after her being rape by Varna and I sorry to bring it up darling.

Daala. um ok.

Gaale. um yeah why are you calling my best friend darling any way Kenat.

Kenat. I like to any way.

Gaale. to tell you if you got ideas she not into girls because I know her for years.

Kenat. ok did you two do a sleep over.

Gaale. a year ago at our tree house.

Gaale flash back to a year ago of her sleep over with Daala.

Daala. what are you reading.

Gaale. it call lush and pussy.

Daala. um that not cool.

Gaale. why have you never seen a girl fuck another girl before.

Daala. no and as a woman of God I not going to have sex with you.

Gaale. really look we been best friends for years.

Daala. I know but I not into girls.

Gaale. have you ever kiss a guy.

Daala. no.

Gaale. kiss it no different.

Daala. woo no way Gaale.

Gaale. I have kiss a few boys back when I was 5 and some of them are still after me.

Daala. ok but this is only once.

Daala and Gaale kiss on the lips.

Daala. um your lips are fine.

Gaale. yours are good two better than boys.

Daala. please don't tell my mom.

Gaale. I won't and your mom would not like me for being a lesbian.

Daala. so your into girls.

Gaale. yeah.

Daala. do you love me.


Gaale. I do but I love you as a friend as well.


Daala. I good if we just stay friends anyway.

Gaale. I love you as a friend.

Daala. me too.

end of flash back.

Kenat. well Daala is good but I ask her to be mine and I more better than Dom and she will come over to me.

Daala. hey you two what are you talking about.

Kenat. nothing Daala and stay close to me and please if you feel lonely I comfort you.

Daala. can Dom be near me when it come to sleeping.

Gaale. um the last thing everybody wants is Grema having sex with everyone plus Padwy no offense you two.

Padwy. it fine I trying to find someone who has interest in me anyway.

Daala. um are you all right Padwy.

Padwy. I ok it just thinking of sex everyday is not good.

Daala. wow I like what I hearing.

Kenra. hey a girls night.

Hannah. good idea.

Hannah flash back to her girl night with Tara.

Hannah. Tara any five's.

Tara. goldfish.

Hannah. big day tomorrow.

Tara. what me and Martin 6th anniversary yeah.

Hannah. it not long until me and Brett become fifteen anyway.

Tara. that good big fifteen than another year from sweet sixteen.

Hannah. what are you doing for your sixteenth.

Tara. getting a driving license and a sweet sixteen birthday party and plus me and Martin can really have sex finally.

Hannah. also driving but I will have a sixteenth party also but I not sure on sex yet.

Tara. it feels long being in school.

Hannah. yeah it does because we been like friends for so long.

Tara. Hannah we must go to bed.

Hannah. OK.

End of flash back.

Dominic. Hey Kenat is Daala OK.

Kenat. Yes and I like you to stay away from her.

Dominic. Look you can't tell me to stay away from her and plus she my girl.

Kenat. Your cute but I am serious just leave Daala with me.

Dominic. I fuck you if you stop acting she yours.

Kenat. I think on it for now.

Dominic. OK but don't bring Daala into this.

Kenat. Dom it best you just stay out of her way.

Daala. Everything alright you two.

Kenat. Daala your boyfriend just being he's userly self.

Dominic. No Kenat siad that I have to stay away from you.

Daala. How about you two get along if I hold your hands.

Kenat. I can't say no to that.

Dominic. OK Daala.

Daala. OK Dominique.

Kenat. Thinking eww she mine.

King. What up with Kenat.

Kenra. I don't know but Daala and Dom is sure helping her out.

King. Yeah and can I ask you something.

Kenra. Go ahead.

King. Have you ever like anyone.

Kenra. I like everybody except for that Lyday and Varna.

King. Well let go out sometime.

Kenra. If your on about food yeah.

Raven. Well it seems we here.

Padwy. There a floating fireball.

Daala. OK.

Kenat. There a seat Daala just for the two of us.

Daala. Sorry Dom it look like Kenat want me to be with her.

Dominic. Before you go.

Daala. OK.

Dominic. Are you into girls.

Daala. Dom I not into girls and the only person I into is you and what is the problem.

Dominic. Look I worried that someone else would take you from me that all.

Daala. Dom I will never leave you.

Dominic. Thank and I would be careful of Kenat.

Kenat. Hey sexy Daala and Dom I can get a room with one of yous oh I meant Daala sorry if you took it a wrong way Dom.

Dominic. Look is she going in a room with you I better be in there.

Kenat. Good Idea.

Daala. Stop you two it embarrassing.

Kenat kiss Dom.

Daala. Ummm Kenat.

Kenat. Don't take it out of context.

Dominic. Daala I sorry.

Daala. No it was Kenat that is acting wired around us but I also worried that she may even like you.

Dominic. Or she into both.

Daala. No not possible but I hope she tell us what is on her mind about us two.

Dominic. Yeah she getting in between us.

Daala. I better go and sit with her or she may kiss you more.

Daala kiss Dom.