Reviewer Response
Shinji-Strife: Your asumptions about Neji is wrong. IIRC, Neji stopped being an ass to Hinata when Naruto beat him. Now, he's actually kind of overprotective. Lol, at least there's someone out there who knows what the Inu seal means.
Also, a warning to all future reviewers of this story. I DO NOT WRITE LEMONS/ ect. There may be some situations where it COULD happen. But trust me, it won't. You'll se what I mean later. This goes for my other fics as well.
Chapter 2: Meeting in the Park.
Lithak woke up early. Earlier than he would have liked to anyway. He gave a low growl and got up. His eyes were hurting him again. This was happening more recently. Though only he knew why.
After bathing and getting his outfit on, he headed downstairs. This place was fairly new, but it was by no means great. In fact, this was probably below average for most people. But considering the fact that he didn't have parents, it was the bet he could do.
Once he was downstars, he ordered a breakfast, and waited for it to arrive. After breakfast, he checked the time. 'Oh crap,' he thought, 'it's almost 9:00. I wanted to meet Hinata early so we could pick up Naruto and the others.' He rushed out of the door, heading for Hinata's house. Luckily for him, he had memorized all of the terrain yesterday. He could memorize stuff easily, a good advantage when your a ninja. I guess that's why he had become a Chuunin at 13.
When he arrived at Hinata's house, he knocked on the door. After a couple of seconds. Neji opened the door. He sneared, "What do you want." "Well," said Lithak, "I'm here to see Hinata. I was hoping maybe she would want to go out today." Another snear crossed Neji's lips, "No. You will not see my sister. Your just using her for something, or else you never would have even talked to her!" Now it was Lithak's turn to snear, "I'm afraid your mistaken. I like hanging out with Hinata because, unlike some of the people in this village...Let me put it this way, I've been alone my whole life. I know what Hinata's gonig through, and I know that the only thing that can change that is someone who wants to be around her who ISN'T in her family." Lithak saw Hinata enter the room behind Neji. I pushed Neji out of the way. "Hey Hinata, it's good to see you again," he said. "Hey, I was just wondering if, you know, you wanted to go for a walk or something," Lithak said with a smile. Hinata looked confused for a second. A single thought passed her mind, 'He really doesn't hate me.' "Sure," Hinata said, " Let me get some halfway decent clothes on." With that she walked back towards, what Lithak asumed, was her room. Lithak turned to Neji. "Don't worry, I'll make sure she comes home without a scratch," he said, that corny smile creaping back onto his lips.
Lithak left the house with Hinata at his shoulder. Hinata looked around, confused. "Where are we going?" she asked. "We're going over to Naruto's. I asked him if he wanted to hang out with us today." Hinata looked down, deppressing thoughts passing through her mind. When they arrived at Naruto's house, he was sitting on the couch talking. Naruto thought, 'Wow, some guy, he actually got her to come along.' Lithak stared at Naruto, a fierce glare piercing layers of reinforced ninja training. For a moment, Naruto was actually scared of that gaze. It was as if Lithak knew what he was thinking. "So, I take it you guys are still coming?" Lithak asked. Naruto and Sakura nodded, and Hinata looked up at Lithak.
Once they got to the park, there really wasn't much to do. They talked about each others past experiences, though Lithak had avoided all questions about anything other than missions, saying that, "It wasn't much of a story."
Around noon, the Naruto and Sakura took off, leaving only Hinata and Lithak. "So," Hinata said, "why didn't you decide to hate me like alot of the people in the village." Lithak looked around. "Hinata, can you meet me over at my apartment later tonight, I have something important I want to tell you. Something I've never told anyone," he said. Hinata nodded, "Alright."
NOw for the questions
1. Why do you think Lithak's eyes were hurting in the morning (it's not Sharingan or Byakugan)
2. Do you think what Lithak want's to talk to Hinata about will have something to do with the question above
3. What is your opinion of the character development.
4. How do you think I am going to play the romances in the story
any aditional opinions are nice too. until next time, live and let die.