Time for review replys
Hi... i'm only on your 2nd chapter, but i've seen few mistakes, like
"pregnet"... it's pregnant...but oh well, i've my few mistakes in my
story to, so with time you'll lern how to do it better! ;) going on to
next chapter...
Hey, yes I have done a few mistakes I have noticed trust me but thanks for telling me. Yes I do learn as I'm typing stories to get better. I think I already have! I read your story it's really good but as you said there were mistakes but your a first time writer like me we're all learning here. Thank you for reading!
That's so weird. They wouldn't kill one, they would just say that the
one that came out first would be the heir. If Mia had a brother or
sister from her father, they wouldn't kill them...That'd be horrible. There
are some mean people out there :(
Anyway, just a thought...
It is yes I know weird but that's Grandmere. But I mean it fits her character. Right? You know I'm not a going to spoil the story or anything but there is nothing bad happening...yet. Thanks for reading!
Hey again...
Just a thing, in twins, the first baby that comes out, is the younger
one... i don't know wich one you're pretending to be it... Well the
other thing of this fic, is that the character are OOC... but that's not
nothing you can't do about:P
The plot is nice, keep writing to get better and better!
Oh I didn't know that...hmm. Thanks I'll keep that in mind. And the characters are older now it would be so boring to keep them the same and people mature as they get older. Is OOC, out of character? I think that's what you mean. Thanks for the support awww your so kind you really think so? TY! I hope you read this chapter! Oh and by the way the younger one is Jennifer the older one is Katherine.
a/n: Thanks for the reviews you guys are so sweet totally mean it! Please review this chapter. So come on tell me I suck at naming right? If you have any better suggestions please tell but I'll keep the names now though.
The summer felt amazing. Mia already bought everything for the babies. Michael and Mia now have their own apartment. Now they're at their apartment watching TV snuggling to one another until...
RING RING RING RING RING
Michael: Hello?
Grandmere: Yes can I speak to Amelia please.
Michael: Ok hold on
"Oh, Amelia phone!"
Mia: Yes.
Grandmere: Amelia, thing is your Grandmother where have you been this past month?
Mia: Oh, just in New York spending some time with-
Grandmere: Yes yes Amelia but now it's important. You have to come to Genovia there is a very important event you have to attend to.
Mia: Grandmere, no I-
Grandmere: AMELIA! This is not like your to be this careless about Genovia.
Mia: Alright I'll come. But I'm staying for just 2 days.
Grandmere: All right I'll see you here tomorrow. Good bye. Oh and bring young Katherine along with you too.
hung up
"Who was that?" Michael asked. "Uh...Michael would you mind if I went to Genovia for a little while I'm not going to take that long it's just I have to be there I mean it is a country I will be ruling and well I'm taking to much right?" Michael just laughed such a typical Mia habbit. "Of course I'm fine with it. I mean it's not that long right? I'll be fine." Michael looked calm about it really was no big deal to him. "Oh and one more thing..." This was the hard part, "Yea?" Michael said. "I'm bringing Katherine."
"W-what?"
"Are you ok with it?"
"Um...I think she should stay here?"
"Why?" Mia had a feeling that Michael was hiding something.
"Well you know...she-"
"Oh Michael, she'll be fine with me."
"Ok, but just promise me one thing."
"What?"
"Please take care of her and don't let her out of your sight." It was hard for him to say ok cause after that insident in Genovia he began to worry.
Michael," He looked back at Mia,"What?" He said. "She'll be fine." And she meant every word.
"Well my flight is leaving so...bye." Mia said in a low voice. "But you'll be back right?" Michaael said trying to cheer her up. "Yea," She said. Then she waved back at Michael and Jennifer.
As he was driving all he could think about was that person who was trying to kill them. Was he the same person who almost tried to kill him in the limo accident? And all he could think about was Katherine. 'She'll be fine' He told himself. But the truth is, he didn't trust Genovia anymore. He just didn't.
"Aw, Amelia she looks just like you!" One of her cousins said after seeing Katherine. "Yes very true. But we're not sure yet she's just a new born it's quitte hard to tell." A man said walking towards Mia. He gave her a creepy grin. "It's nice to meet you your highness, I had no idea you would be bringing...her.
Mia responded,"Her name is Katherine." He nodded and walked away he seemed kind of angry. Grandmere appeared in the picture out of no where,"Amelia, it's time for you to introduce the new royal to the Renaldo family. Mia took a deep breathe 'Oh boy thisis going to be a long night" she thought.
"What do you want to do?" Michael said looking at Jennifer. She was crying. "I know you miss mommy but she'll be here tomorrow. She promised." Jennifer stopped crying and looked at him strangly. "WHAT? You don't think she will?" It was weird talking to a baby but he had no one to talk to. Jenjust kept her mouth shut and turned away.
Michael went to work. He told his mom if she would take care of her. He told her the whole story she waas more than pleased to take care of her Grandaughter. Michael had resently had a new job that he liked.It haad been a week since he started his new job.
As he went to his office he took out a picture of Mia and the twins. Dean a worker there (A.k.a Michael's pain in the butt) came and poked his head in his office. "Hey who's that?" He asked pointing at the picture of Mia.
Michael looked annoyed and said nothing. "Girlfriend? Wife? Friend? Sister? Mom? Aunt? Cousin?" He went on and on. "Hmm," He looked at the twins sqinting,"Wife?" He said. "She will be soon we're engaged. Now can you pleaase leave." He left.
Mia headed to her bedroom. She was so tired that was the longest dinner/family reunion she have ever been. Grandmere told her the next morning that there was a ball for the thressne family that she must attend.
Mia said no but Grandmere found Mia's weekness wich was her guiltyness. She reminded her that she is the princess and for her not being there not representing the Genovians is awaful.
She didn't argue and said fine. But she felt really bad. It's so hard to choose betweenher country and her family that made Mia stress. She had to call him now. She did. There was no one there.
"Amelia there is no time for calling now. We must prepare for the ball. Come I'll show them how better you are then that Leanna girl." Mia went. It's not too bad right just for a couple of days more. No big deal.
Well Michael made a dope of himself. He was waiting in the airport for like 4 hours. She was suposed to be here. Oh no what if they murdered her and they're having a funeral and they didn't even bother to invite me or not even tell me. Calm down Moscovitz. She's fine. She probably had something else planned that came last minute.
He headed back thinking maybe she would call home or something. No call. He just watched TV by himself wishing Mia would be here to put his arms around when she was cold. No she wasn't here. She will soon it's not like Mia for her not to be calling.
Instead he had Jennifer in his arms. She looked at him "She will come you'll see." Jen was sad it seemed like everyday she got worse. "Don't be sad. You got me." He said and he tickled her just to make her laugh. She was gigling. "See I'm just as fun as your mom."
A few days later...
"Hello? Hello? Michael? Is anybody here?" She was back in NY she saaw how the apartmet has changed he has done some changes. She went in Jennifer's room there she saw Michael on a rocking chair sleeping with Jen in his arms.
She came closer and she gently brush his hair. and her face was nearly an ich or two away from Michaels. He opened his eyes "Mia? Your in my dream...again." Mia laughed a bit,"Your not dreaming Michael I'm real." Michael squinted, "Your not real. Mia is back in Genovia." She thought he was crazy, "Well if I wern't real would I do this." She kissed him.
"Hmmm I miss that." He opened his eyes wider now. "MIA!" Mia covered his mouth. "Shh! You'll wake up the Jen." She said sofly. Michael but her in her crib and followed Mia to the living room. Michael just kissed her like crazy. Mia pulled back, "I can tell you missed me then." She laughed.
"Where's Katherine?" He asked her. "Right here." She had her sleeping. He was more relaxed. Mia noticed that. Though she wasn't quite so sure why.
She was here a few days. She had dinner with Michael. They had a great time, "Thanks for Dinner." Mia said looking into Michael's deep brown eyes. "No problem." They were about to kiss until...
RING RING RING
Mia: Hello?
Grandmere: Hello Amelia. How are you today?
Mia: Fine. Just fine. What?
Grandmere: Amelia! Haven't I tought you not to be rude. That is very bad manners. I just called to tell you that an international feast is coming and I'd like to prepare you to meat the ferriles they have been our very good friends of ours and they want to meet you. And don't worry I have everything planned out for you. Just don't be late tomorrow. Do you want someone to send a jet for you?
Mia: GRANDMERE! I have other plans please can I just skip this I'm sure they'll understand.
Grandmere: Fine. If your not coming I can understand. Ohhhh what a shame soon you'll be cancling yourplans and everyone will call you the most careless princess of all.
Mia: Fine...fine. Just stop ok? I'll be there and yea send a jet please. Bye.
Grandmere: Good your finally coming to you senses. Keep it up. Good bye.
hangs up
"Michael..."
"Go."
"But-"
"GO! Just go! It's no problem I understand your a princess and these stuff are very important. I'll be fine."
"All right. But are you sure?"
"Yea."
Mia left the next morning. You know the truth was he was a little pissed that she left. He didn't really like Grandmere. This time Mia left Katherine with him. This time they were both starring at him. "WHAT? I mean she is a princess right? It was she does. I'm not pissed. I'm not!" Ok maybe a little.
The next day when he left for work. His boss came right up to him and said,"You know your a great worker Moscovitz. Your one of my best." Michael raised his eyebrows, "Really?" The boss nodded, "Yea. I mean your hard working and your determined. Wich is why I'm giving you an offer." Michael never herd his boss be so nice to him before, except when he was hired but that's different."Sir, I couldn't."
"Nonsense! How would you like to be manager of the best head company. It's traveling though but it's the best job anyone could have." Michael looked serious, "Traveling?" His boss just punched his shoulder lightly, "Yea son isn't that great? You'll be seeing the different parts of the US."
There was a long pause. "Well I'll give you some time. I'll geet back to you on that one. Michael nodded and stood there silent. What to do? I can't leave. Mia. Katherine. Jennifer. I'd be leaving them behind.
7 days no sign of Mia.
10 days still no sign of Mia.
20 days no sign of Mia at all.
1 month nothing.
Michael started seeing the twins grow. And started knowing their personalities better. Like Jen would seek for trouble and make Michael scared everytime she crawls somewhere when Michael is sleeping. And Katherine would always be the good one and never do anything wrong. Or Katherine loves watching the scary movies with Michael and Jennifer does too. Jen loves strawberries Katherine hates them. And Jen likes the warm blanket and Katherine likes the fuzzy one.
Days like this would be just the three of them. He felt sometimes lonely in his room. No Mia beside him. Not that he was lonely he had Kathy and Jen. But still it was hard.
The next day Mia came to town. She wasin front of the apartment she got her key and opened the door. There she found Michael eating dinner by himself. She ran to Michael about to kiss Michael on the cheek. But he turned his head. Not even exited to see her. "Why didn't you call?" He asked coldly.
"Sorry it's just there was so much coming up. I was busy sorry but my country is counting on me I simply can't let them down. But I'm here now." She put a hand on his arm. He got up and said, "Great." In a very harsh manner so cold so careless. He didn't even look at her in the eyes. And then he went to his room.
The next morning during breakfast Mia got a phone call. And yes you guessed it. Grandmere. Michael herd her conversation with her Grandmother. Mia hung up. "Michael I have to go it's an emergency. You'll be fine with the twins right?" Then she got her jacket and opened the door. "Bye I love you."
"You did." He said after she left.
Well the months passed.
And weeks.
And days.
Mia never came. It would be soon the twin's first birthday. Tomorrow to be exact. March 8th. Mia however NEVER came that day. She didn't even call to say "Happy Birthday".
Michael wasn't happy he soon forgot about Mia. He was angry, so he called. Mia didn't answer her cell phone. But Michael sure left a nasty message on her answering machine.
It became obvioous to him that she didn't even care about him. One day it all changed between them.
Mia came on December she came to the apartment. And to her suprise she sawMichael and another girl having SEX! Yea that's right both naked in his bed caught. She began crying and ran out the door leaving her engagment ring behind. Tears ran through her eyes and she had a very hurt feeling in her hart.
Mia desided to come to the apartment one day to have a talk. She knocked this time she didn't even bother opening the door. Michael opened the door. "Hi."
"Hi."
"Michael I need to talk to you."
They sat on the couch, "Mia I'm sorry...I-I was drunk." Mia had anger built inside of her until she let it out, "Oh so that's why you were fucking someother woman! COMPLETELY CHEATING ON ME?" Michael yelled back, "I WAS DRUNK! THE REASON I WAS DRUNK WAS BECAUSE YOU KEPT LEAVING ME. YOU LEFT. AGAIN AGAIN AND AGAIN. YOU DIDN'T CARE ABOUT ME ANYMORE OR OUR DAUGHTERS!"
"I had to. I was needed. I can't just be a bad person and leave my country." Michael looked at her, "Oh so your country is more important. Isn't it?"
"It is."
"Then why are we even together in the first place."
"Because we love eachother."
"I loved Mia. She's gone."
"I'm not."
"Yea...you are."
"What are you talking about?"
"I hate you."
"W-what?"
"I said I hate you."
"Oh yea well you know what I feel the same way. I DON'T LIKE MEN WHO HAVE SEX WITH OTHER WOMAN!"
"You know what go ahead and rule your stupid country."
"MICHAEL? Ok you know what that's it I'm leaving."
"Fine go!"
Mia went upstairs. And came down with Katherine.
"Wait what are you doing?"
"I taking Katherine."
"NO!YOUR NOT!"
"Yes. I am." She opened the door.
"Michael! What are you doing? GET OFF ME!"
"YOUR NOT TAKING HER!"
"Yes I am. She's next in line for the throne. She's my daughter too!"
"Mia give me her she doesn't want to go with you."
"STOP! GET OFF ME! STOP MICHAEL!." And that's when he did the most un-Michael thing he ever done. He hit her.
She fell to the ground and she said softly, "Who are you?" And she left with Katherine along.
This has to be the longest chapter I have ever done. REVIEW PLEASE. I make me really happy! Ok, so you read this chapter now get ready to travel into the future next chapter.