Chapter 279
In collaboration with avenger44 and Vasmasdas1.
(The Loud House.)
The Loud Family all have everything ready and they all exit the house. Lynn Sr places all the picnic things into Vanzilla. "Ah! Nothing like a good day to have a nice and peaceful family picnic."
"This won't feel much like a family picnic, more like a family friend's picnic" said Rita. She then sees Michelle Lewis with them helping put Lily into her baby chair and boops the baby's nose making Lily giggle.
"Okay, I'm gonna go and see if the others need any help." Michelle goes back inside and she helps get the other picnic basket from the kitchen.
Rita smiles. "Kinda nice to have her helping us out, she's more like a good friend than a person serving her time in community service."
"Some part of me thinks she should be let go from this and be given a choice if she wants to be in Royal Woods or not. Also, she seems really happy to spend time with all of us, like a good neighbor" replied Lynn Sr.
"What about me Loud?" They both see Mr. Grouse checking his mail.
"Mr. Grouse, you're an okay neighbors, so that's about it" replied Rita.
Mr. Grouse closes his mailbox and thinks about it. "Huh, I guess I can work with that one. You folks have fun at your picnic."
"Oh wait!" Lynn Sr then grabs something out of the picnic basket. "This is for helping with one of the elderly customers at my restaurant, you did a nice thing helping her back to her wheel chair."
Mr. Grouse takes the container with some lasagna. "Well, she needed help and she her helper was busy getting her things. It was the least I could do, and thanks for this." Mr. Grouse then walks back into his house.
Then the rest of the loud kids come out with all the things they need for their day. "We got all the picnic baskets and we made sure none of the food has been missing" said Michelle as she comes out with two baskets and Lily's diaper bag. "Also, this was left on the couch."
"Thank you so much Michelle" replied Rita as she takes the bag from her. "We almost had a near diaper mishap there. And we are not repeating what happened last time." the others also recall the last time they had a picnic and they forgot about Lily's diaper bag.
"I literally feel bad that we had to do that to the old picnic blanket" said Lori as she recalls that one.
"We had no choice, it was that or have Lily with no diaper at all" said Luan. "Now that was more than just being a Party Pooper!" They all groan from the pun.
Michelle looks at all of them. "I don't think I wanna know what happened on that day last year." She then helps them load the rest of the picnic things.
They then hop into Vanzilla, though Luna and Lincoln are taking her car along with Michelle onboard. Lincoln then sees Patriot on the roof. "Are you, Valkyrie and the chicks okay staying home?"
The eagle nods towards Lincoln. "Okay then, take care of the house and if something is wrong then come to us." The vehicle group then takes off to their picnic destination.
Patriot watches them leave and then he flies back to the Tree House while the rest of the pets are busy taking a nap in the living room, and to ensure they have peace and quiet they put on some ear muffs.
But none of them know that someone is watching the house. "Looks like their gone son" said Stan. "You ready for this?"
"Heck yeah I am, Time to do some damage!" said Steak. The Stankcos come out of the bushes and they sneak around the house and they begin to do some damage inside and outside of the house, and they brought a large black bag with them. They came prepared.
"By the way, who the heck was that hot lady with them?" asked Steak as he picks the lock to the house.
"No clue, but she sure was cute" replied Stan as he looks out for anyone watching. "Maybe when we get our revenge we can take her too!" They then break the door open and they head into the house.
(Tall Timbers Park.)
The louds have arrived and they meet up with the Sharp and the Rosato family. Lincoln and Jordan hug each other and share a small kiss. "Nice yo see you too handsome" said Jordan.
"Always a bright day when you're in my life beautiful" chuckled Lincoln as they share another quick kiss.
They then get confronted by Simon. "Sup man, glad you came."
"Good to see you too dude." Lincoln and Simon fist bump each other. "Stella not showing up today?"
"Stella said she had some family stuff to attend to, but she did say that the next time we have another big family picnic then she can come along with her family" replied Simon. "Now come on, Sam and I helped our parents make some fried chicken for this picnic, most are spicy."
Lynn Jr overhears this. "Woo! Awesome!" She then goes over with the cooler of soda over her head.
Lynn Sr notices this. "How come she's not this fast when doing the hardest chores?" He struggles with five picnic baskets.
"Oh I got that one Mr. Loud." Michelle takes 3 of the baskets and walks off.
Lynn Sr is confused. "Okay, either everyone else worked out or I am not as fit as I used to be."
Lola walks by with the picnic blanket. "You should see her carry all fifty of my emergency dresses along with my makeup kit and ribbons. She is a strong natural."
"That's because Michelle's been carrying lots of heavy things since she started her career." Leni takes the three other baskets out of the van and follows them.
Rita pats her husband's back. "At least you can watch as they all enjoy you're cooking." That was enough to make him smile at least.
Soon they all gather and enjoy themselves on this nice and peaceful day with no trouble at all. Lincoln, Jordan and Simon are all talking about their next hang out with the heroes.
Luna and Sam are both talking about a new song they could come up with for the next gig.
Luan and Lynn are tossing the Frisbee and of course Ajax joins in, Lucy does catch the Frisbee and toss it back as she writes down a new poem about her family.
The twins are playing by the creek and skipping stones, though Lana dives into the creek to check on her salmon friends and their babies with Lisa observing them and helping keep track of the health to the fish.
Lori and Leni are discussing some things' to Michelle. Like getting her some more clothes for her wardrobe, they don't seem like much for her to wear for the rest of her life.
While the parents are all having some nice conversations, including what they plan when school begins and some early plans for Halloween, which that one does not make Lynn Sr feel comfortable at all.
Simon then shows Lincoln and Jordan the old Pokemon cards he has when he was young and they were impressed. "Wow. Talk about a deck, I like the looks of Torchic in this one. She is so cute" said Jordan.
"My ace card here has to be Keyogre, I did play some of this against other kids" said Simon. "Man those memories were awesome with just me and some random kid with cards and either of us would win." He then looks to Lincoln. "What about you man? Any cards here you think are cool?"
But then he sees Lincoln just looking at the distance. Jordan also sees this. "Umm, Lincoln? You okay Linc?"
Lincoln has this worried look on him. "Sorry guys, I just had this really bad feeling that something is gonna happen. It feels like … Like it happened minutes ago."
"So I guess I'm not the only one feeling the freaky vibe huh?" Luna and Sam go to them and sit close by. "I've been getting the same bad feeling too bro and I do not like it."
"Where did we leave Lucifer and Protector?" asked Lincoln.
"My car, they have never left there since then" replied Luna. "Also, I made sure they were with me just in case for emergency situations for when we all come someplace together."
Simon then packs his cards back into the deck. "So, you both have this feeling something bad is gonna happen?"
"That's the same thing I asked Luna earlier" said Sam. She then looks to her lover. "Whatever it is, I don't think it's good."
"Should we head on home?" asked Jordan.
"Yes! Yes we should!" They all see Lisa race to them. The whole family notices this. "Everyone, the Loud House has been attacked, all the alarms on my phone are going off!"
"What?!" They all go to her and they see from her phone all the cameras have gone blank and they see it looked like someone spray painted on them.
Luna and Lincoln look at what was happening. They then hear some screeches and barking and then some laughs. Lisa then shows them all the alarms from the house has gone off in all the rooms. "Someone has broken into the house and is attacking all the rooms!" said Lisa.
"We have to head back home!" said Rita.
They all get back to their rides and they have to make it back home. The Sharp parents decide to go back to their house just in case their home wasn't attacked and the same goes for Rick and Jesse Rosato.
Sam and Simon hop into her car and they follow Luna's car and Vanzilla. Michelle helps them pack up and is a bit scared of this. This is her first time to be on their side and have to go through an attack onto the family.
They all make their way back to the Loud House.
(Minutes later.)
All three vehicles make a screeching halt and they also see Mr. Grouse on the phone and calling the police, he then hangs up and goes to them. "Louds! You're house has been ransacked and two big hooligans came out with bags!"
"Our cars!" said Lori and Leni. They're cars have been banged up with lots of dents the tires have been popped and spray painted black all over. But that was the least of their problems.
The family heads into the house and are horrified to see the mess. The couch has been torn apart, the TV has been smashed and all of their pictures have been broken, the living room computer has also been destroyed and their trophy's stolen. The dining room table and chairs have been toppled over, but the fish tank remained untouched and thank goodness.
"How come the fish tank wasn't broken?" asked Lucy.
"That is because I placed my prototype force filled generator in case Cliff has any ideas, and it works" said Lisa. Then the device breaks down. "Well, still a working progress. Also, it seems the floor is wet."
"My kitchen!" Lynn Sr races in there with Lori and they turn off the sink and oven as well. They see the fridge has been ransacked and the whole place has been vandalized by black spray paint. Lynn Sr faints seeing all of this.
Lori checks the basement is untouched. "They didn't bother to go into the basement, so I guess that's a good thing."
They see the parent's room has been ruined as well. The pillows and blankets have been torn apart and the clothes have also been ruined. Rita then sees that the fireproof lock box was still intact and their savings are also alright and the private scrap book and family albums were kept in a well hidden place, the attic, and a good thing Rita brought her laptop with her.
Rita decides not to show Lynn that all of his ties have been ripped apart and also stolen, he might get a heart attack from this.
They all head upstairs and they see all the rooms have been ransacked and all the cameras have been spray painted black.
The Bathroom has been taken a heavy duty beating, the bath tub is smashed and so has the shower and toilet and the sink and water is spilling out, in which Lana has to stop the flowing water.
They're clothes and other things have been either torn apart and or stolen, but Lori and Leni are enraged that they're swim suits and underwear have been taken.
Lola's many, many pictures of herself have been vandalized and her tiaras all messed up, Lana's things have been ruined and the terrariums of her three pets have been smashed.
Lisa's work has been destroyed and so has her laptop and Lily's toys have been broken and the walls also blackened by spray paint.
Luan checks her room and sees that all of her comedy gear has been destroyed and her bed ruined, luckily she brought Mr. Coconuts with her.
Lynn and Lucy are in deep shock at what has happened to their bedroom. Both beds are ruined, Lucy's coffin has been badly damaged, Lynn's sports things have been broken as well as her clothes.
Then Lincoln and Luna go to their room and they go wide eyed. All of Luna and Lincoln's instruments have been destroyed, their beds have been messed up, the walls painted from top to bottom in black, the beanbag chairs ripped apart, the pictures also torn and some of their clothes ruined.
Lincoln then notices the computer was still intact, though his laptop and school things are gone. Lincoln then looks around and he sees Luna picking up her acoustic guitar and then her drums. She then tosses them to the ground and goes down to her knees and grits her teeth in anger.
Sam, Lincoln and Jordan go to Sam and hug her. Luna is in deep anger and also sadness.
"Everyone! Get out here!" they all heard it was Simon. They all head out of the house and they see Simon trying to break the garage door open. "Someone is in here and I can't get the door open!"
Luna pushes him away and she kicks the door wide open and they see Lulu chained up and badly damaged. "Lulu!" They go over and help the damaged little car.
"Stankcos ….. Th-They came …. They … They broke so-so many and the ….. The pets … Eagles … Taken." She then goes offline. She used up all her energy and fuel to tell them this.
"I can be able to repair her, but we did hear what she said and this is not good!" said Lisa as she gets to work on Lulu.
Jordan and Lincoln race to the tree house and soon both kids come back down. "We got them!" said Jordan. They have the three eagle chicks with them and all of them are panicking and look like they witnessed what had happened.
"This is bad! This is bad!" said Lincoln in panic. "They have Patriot and Valkyrie!"
"And the other pets and my reptiles!" said Lana with tears. Lola goes over and hugs her, though deep down she is enraged at what happened to the room she shares with her twin.
Lucy then pries open all the openings to the bat sanctuary and all the bats fly off. "Looks like Fangs and his mate are still here, they didn't take the bats and instead sealed them in. Jerks!"
Lynn Sr is shocked by all of this. "The …. The Stankcos are back! Why? How? What the heck is going on?!"
"Those jerks are literally getting their butts whooped when I see them!" said Lori in anger.
"Save some for the rest of us!" said Lynn Jr. The others also wanted in on this, they attacked their home and ruined all of their things.
"I found this on Lulu." Lisa hands Michelle the note and she reads it.
"Dear dork louds, we have your pets and a lot of your stupid things. If you ever wanna see your stuff and stupid pets again meet us by the same warehouse where you messed us up, because nobody messes with the Stankcos, we only want the white-haired dork to come and no one else. If cops are involved then the pets get it. Come to the Old Warehouse at 4."
Michelle looks to Luna who is in anger and so is Lincoln and Jordan and the rest of the family. "This is bad, this is really, really bad!" Michelle drops the note and looks to the rest of the house, even the outside has been vandalized by spray paint.
"No kidding, those idiots are back! I thought Lincoln crippled them!" said Sam.
"Looks like they did get out and they did a lot of damage too." Simon shows them from his phone the news.
"San Llorona Psychiatric Hospital. Albuquerque, New Mexico. Massive breakout of all patients within the hospital. Cause of this? Escape from Stan and Steak Stankco, both of them are responsible for releasing all of the patients and making havoc reign around the place. Amidst this turmoil, 8 staff and 10 patients are dead, including the woman in charge has been found brutally raped and then hanged by the window of the hospital. Be warned! These two are dubbed dangerous even crippled."
They were shocked to know this, Stan and Steak who are both crippled are out and are causing this mayhem. "We have to stop them! Before they do more damage!" said Lincoln.
"That may also be a problem." Lisa shows them an empty box which looks leg and arm size.
"Lisa, what the heck is that?" asked Leni.
"In here are my prototype prosthetic limbs" replied Lisa. "They were meant to be used for people who need them the most and they are prototypes and they can also enhance the strength of the person."
"Wow. That's just great!" said Luan. "Way to give them the upper arm and leg at this Lisa."
Lisa sighs. "But there could be a way to take them down with their own limbs, I can be able to hack into the system and control their prosthetic limbs, but sadly I cannot do that, my computer has been destroyed."
Lincoln then hands Lisa a note, the note that has the password from his computer. "Use mine, and do it now. Also I will change the password to my computer."
Lisa takes the note and smiles. "Much appreciated!" Lisa then heads back inside and gets to work.
"Lincoln, what do we do?" asked Lola. Lincoln looks to all of them who are concerned. Then Luna goes to Lincoln and she has her Protector shotgun and she tosses Lincoln Lucifer.
"Let's hunt them down, together and keep them occupied so Lisa can have all the time she needs to hack them!" said Luna as she cocks her gun,
Lincoln nods and looks to the others. "Lori, give Jordan a ride to the outpost and tell them to have some backup ready, the rest of you remain here and do what you can to fix what's left of our house." They all nod.
Lincoln then walks to Luna. "Let's go and get em!"
"I'm coming too" said Michelle. They look to her confused. "It's just the two of you and I am not letting anyone get the better of the two people who showed me a chance to redemption. I wanna help out."
"Okay, I think we can work with you alongside us" said Lincoln. They then hop into Luna's car and they drive off. The rest of the louds get into the house.
Rita and Lynn Sr look to the house and then to each other, they then think about this. "Lynn, I think it's time" said Rita.
Lynn Sr sighs, he never thought they would have to resort to this emergency plan. He then makes the call to Rick and Jesse. "I think it's time our home got a big change."
(The Old Abandoned Warehouse.)
The Stankcos pace back and forth as they wait for the arrival of Lincoln Loud.
Both of them also admire their shiny metallic prosthetic limbs. "Wow. This is way better than my old right leg. I can't wait for that dumb kid to get here so I can kick him to death!" Steak then kicks away some metal cans and they punch through the window.
Stan punches the wall and it makes a hole, big enough for him to fit. "Oh yeah! When he gets here, he is going to lose his lunch! And then I'm coming for his dad!"
"At least we got some of their stuff, and I got me some girl underwear to play with!" Steak grabs the bag and is about to grab what's in there.
"Hey!" They both see Lincoln Loud has arrived and he has his bat with him. "Put the things down and free my pets you stinkers!"
Steak chuckles. "Oh yeah. About time you came, no one is with you right?"
"I made sure of it" replied Lincoln. "Now release the pets and give me back my family's stuff, now!"
"Ha! Your little bat don't scare us kid" said Stan. "We got robot limbs, making us better than you! Let's get him!" Stan and Steak rush towards Lincoln.
"Okay, so I guess it's just the hard way then." Lincoln cracks his neck and he ducks and he strikes onto the back of Stan and then he kicks Steak in his left leg and he rolls out of the way.
"Ouch! That hurt you punk!" Stan goes after him, but Lincoln steps to the side and he trips and hits a bunch of barrels.
Steak tries to kick Lincoln, but he dodges and he hits the shoulder of Steak. "You little twerp!" Steak then tries to kick him again, but Lincoln manages to dodge and he knocks over some boxes and one lands onto Steaks' head. "What the? Why is it so dark now?!"
Lincoln yells. "Now!" Luna from the window of the warehouse shoots some sleeping darts, but when Stan gets up he uses his arm to deflect the shot. "Dang it!"
"Let's see you shoot now punk!" Stan takes one of the barrels and he throws it towards Luna. Luna moves out of the way, but she loses her balance and she lands onto some boxes.
"Luna!" Steak then grabs Lincoln and he takes the bat and throws it aside. "Gotcha kid!" Steak punches him in the face and then kicks him in the gut. Lincoln feels so much pain from that kick that he's tossed to the wall next to Luna.
Luna gets up and sees this. "Lincoln!" She rushes to her brother, she sees he starts to wake up and then he vomits and coughs up some blood. "We have to get you outta here now!"
But then Stan grabs Luna by her hair. "Not so fast girl!" said Stan. He then slams her onto the wall next to Lincoln. She then slides down and she collapses next to her brother. Lincoln goes to Luna, but then his left leg is stomped on by Steak.
Luna tries to get up and reaches for her weapon, but her left arm is grabbed by Stan and he dislocates her arm making her scream in pain.
Stan and Steak then grab the loud siblings and they throw them onto some steel pipes. Lincoln and Luna slowly open their eyes and groan in pain, they then look to the two Stankcos laughing at them.
"Finally, time to end you and your stupid sister, once and for all!" said Stan and Steak. They both ready their prosthetic arm and leg to punch and kick them hard.
Luna looks to her weak and bleeding brother and she holds his hand, Lincoln holds her hand and both of them shed tears, both of them awaiting the inevitable.
But then the two men stop and hear squawking. "What the heck? They both turn around and see Michelle getting the bag of things and releasing the pets, Patriot and Valkyrie are confused and Michelle is carrying Geo and the reptiles.
"Get out of here now!" Michelle then sees the Stankcos looking at her. "Uh oh."
"Uh oh indeed!" said Stan. "Look what we got here kiddo!"
They both grin and chuckle as they approach Michelle. "Looks like we got us a pretty lady who wants to be the hero!" said Steak. "Let's take her down dad!"
"Oh yeah, I am so going to enjoy this!" said Stan. He grabs Michelle by her throat. Michelle struggles to free herself and the pets all scramble and hide. Patriot and Valkyrie try to attack, but Steak fends them off.
"Any last words before I have to put your pretty face into the floor?" said Stan. Michelle then sees the Prosthetic limbs no longer in the green, they were now in the white light color.
Michelle smirks. "Why are you hitting yourself?"
"What?" Stan then let's go of her. "What the?" then his prosthetic arm punches him repeatedly.
"Dad? What the heck are you doing?" asked Steak. "This is no time to make jokes, even though that is kinda funny." Just then, Steak's prosthetic leg starts to kick wildly. "What the heck is this? Hey! Stop!"
The prosthetic limbs then speak like Lisa. "Never. This is for ruining our home!" The prosthetic limbs force the Stankcos to kick and punch each other.
Michelle catches her breath and she rushes over to Lincoln and Luna. "Oh god! Hang on, I'm getting you two out of here!" The pets also come over to help her bring them out.
Patriot and Valkyrie swoop in and attack the Stankcos as they are being assaulted by their own limbs.
Michelle puts Luna's hand over her shoulder and she carries Lincoln with both her arms, the pets open the main doors and also help support Luna. "We gotta make it out of here!" Cliff and Della come back after bringing the bag of things outside.
Stan sees this and with his other arm he grabs onto a steel pipe and he throws it, the pipe hits Luna in the back of her head and she falls to the ground. "No! Luna!"
Michelle sees some blood at the back of her head, she then gets her sweater off and she applies some pressure. She then looks to the eagles. "Help me, please!"
Patriot and Valkyrie see this and they help drag Lincoln out of the place. Lincoln sees Michelle tending to Luna and then carrying her out of the place with her two arms. "L-Luna …. Luna." Lincoln then falls unconscious.
Michelle is now outside with Lincoln and Luna and they see ambulances and Jordan and the cops and every troop arrive. "Lincoln! Luna!" Jordan rushes over and is horrified at what has happened. "Oh god! No, not again!"
"T-they need help, now!" Michelle hands Luna to Peter Harris.
"Get them to the Dropship now!" said Peter Harris as he carries Luna away and Jordan carries her boyfriend to the dropship and Jordan with some paramedics take off to the Royal Woods Hospital.
Peter Harris then assembles all the strike troops to get ready. The cops are all getting ready to close in to the warehouse, then Michelle recalls something. "The weapons." She races back into the warehouse.
"Michelle Lewis, what the heck are you doing?" said Officer Schoffner.
She heads into the place and she sees the shotgun and she puts it around her and then she sees the bat and she grabs it. She then sees that both Stankcos are down and groan in pain from the beating they inflicted onto each other.
Michelle is about to walk away, but then she recalls what these two did to Lincoln and Luna. The two people who wanted to show her another shot to redemption, the two people who showed her some actually kindness and the two people who want her as their friend.
Something inside of Michelle triggers, the side of her that is truly vengeful. Vengeful for her friends.
Stan opens his eyes and he sees Michelle looming over him. "Wh-What the heck?" Michelle then puts her foot onto his face and she grabs the Prosthetic left arm and she pulls, the joint wires are still connected and Stan screams in pain from this.
"This …. This is for Luna!" Michelle makes one last pull and the arm comes off and Stan is now bleeding heavily and he holds his now bleeding stump.
Steak tries to get up, but he's hit in the back of the head by the bat. Michelle then puts her foot onto the back of Steak. Michelle then pulls onto the prosthetic right leg, like Stan the wires and clamps haven't come off yet, and this makes Steak scream in pain.
"This, this is for Lincoln!" Michelle makes one last pull and the Prosthetic leg comes off and Steak holds his bleeding stump.
Michelle then fixes her hair. "Look at me you heathens! Look at me!"
The two men sit up and they look onto the angry and fiery eyes of Michelle Lewis. It was almost like the rage of Lincoln, Luna, Jordan, Sam and all of the louds, Rosato's and Sharps are in her eyes.
Michelle tightens her grip on the bat. "This ….. This is for the people who showed me true redemption."
With one mighty swing she hits both of them with the razor sharp edges of Lucifer. Stan and Steak have now been mortally wounded on their face, similar to when Patriot and Valkyrie clawed onto Doug's face.
Michelle then goes to the two Stankcos in pain, she sees the faces bleeding. "You two aren't going to die, I want you both to suffer." She arms the shotgun with a dart to stop their bleeding. She shoots them in their necks and then she grabs them both by their leg and drags them.
Some blood is on Michelle's arms, but she doesn't give a shit. The two eagles see this and are impressed, she shares the protective will as they do. The then fly down and sit onto her shoulders.
Unknown to them the Prosthetic limbs are sparking and they are near some empty gas cans and gas is more volatile when there is no fuel, just the gaseous form within.
The police are about to approach the warehouse, but then Michelle comes out dragging the Stankcos, and as she gets some distance the whole warehouse explodes. "Holy shit!" said Peter Harris.
They then watch as if in slow motion. Michelle Lewis walking towards them with an angered look, bad and shotgun on her back and two eagles on her shoulder while dragging the criminals.
"That is ….. The coolest thing I have ever seen" said Officer Schoffner, she fist bumps with Peter Harris.
Officer Schoffner and Peter Harris are shocked by this. "What the hell did you do Lewis?"
Michelle drops the two men in front of the cops and they are all shocked at the injuries they have sustained. Just like Doug. Michelle is about to go to Luna's car. But then she stops. "You guys wanna arrest me? Then do it, but right now I need to see how Lincoln and Luna are doing. So go ahead and try to stop me."
They had no words on what to say, or if they should stop her.
Michelle looks to the eagles. "Go on home and check on your kids." Patriot and Valkyrie nod and they fly back to the Loud House, but they do grab the pets and things and bring them back home.
Michelle sighs and she gets into Luna's car. Luna left her keys in the ignition and she drives off, some cop cars and Multi-gunner IFV's follow her.
Peter Harris and Officer Schoffner look to the badly wounded Stankcos. "That Michelle Lewis is one bad ass over protective friend."
A/N: Thank you to avenger44 for the idea and to Vasmasdas1 for the concept, but I did do some heavy changes to make it a bit more interesting. Leave a review and tell me what you all think.
Also, did I go too far into making Michelle into a danger zone?
Date made: 7/9/20.