This is to let you all know that I'm killing the Approaching storm and rewriting it. I've put too many plot holes in it and they need to be fixed. The damage is too great for just editing the chapters.
So, basically, after I'm at the chapter 10 mark on They grow up so fast, I'm rewriting the first chapter and will be posting a newer chapter as soon as it's finished. After all, I'm going to have a $$ load of time on my hands if I've planned right.
YCP out.