I got a review saying that seeing that I'm having problems with the muse for this story, and the mood to write, I should rewrite this story. And to be honest I am really thinking about it, it has been years since I started this story and over that time the muse left me, and I forgot about the plot. This isn't the first time either, as there have been a few stories that this happened to me: Harry Tennyson, Her Black Rose and Harry Potter and the Sekirei Plan, and as of right now these four stories are on-hold/abandoned. Not that I want to, but the muse have left me for them. :'(
o if any of you want to take them up and use them yourself, just PM and ask - although I might take them up once again in the future should my muse for them ever returns.
But Animagus Mishap was my first, or at least my earliest stories and so I want to try and rescue it, and so thinking about rewriting it a bit. I have listened to all of your thoughts, and I think I have came about a way to rewrite the story. And so I would like your thoughts, first should I write it or not? If so, could you help me to fix it.
The new version would be called Animagus Mishap: The Return of the Drakonid King, uness you can come up with a better name. Got the idea for this new version after writing Chapter 39 of Animagus Mishap, where I explained about the Dragonophs and Drakonids. In this new version I'm hoping to explain more about them, and in doing so give a better plot to the story.
I'm hoping to make a few changes to the story, the main ones are with Harry's Animagus Forms, instead of getting five, he'll only be getting three: Royal Shadow Wolf, Kneazle and the Dragon. After some thought, and realizing that he doesn't use them, I'm leaving out his Battle Unicorn and an Owl forms.
Whilst there'll still be lemons within the story, I'm hoping to slowly build up his harem his time, and not rush it - but I want your help to do this. Hermione, Minerva McGonagall, Daphne and Astoria Greengrass, will happen as like the last time, as other than Hermione, Harry didn't know who Minerva, Daphne and Astoria was when he mated them.
The problem though is how can I spread Luna Lovegood, the Basilisk Medusa, and the Centaurs Sara and Remedy, over time. With Sara and Remedy, I think I can wait until end of the fourth year before Harry rescues them, build up the tension between him and Sara's father over the year, would like ideas for that. But I think that Luna and Medusa will need to happen the same time as before.
I'm planning to have at least six others before the summer of Harry's fifth year, to be his: Blaise Zabini who was a female trapped in a male's body, Hedwig who turned from owl to human thanks to Harry, Tonks, and Tracey Davis , Su and Wen Li. Although I could have Harry take Tracey sometime after his fourth year and not learning about Blaise until during the summer. As I said in the summary, Harry will have a huge harem and these females are just a start of it. I know that at some point I wanted to make Ginny as a Pet, but as I wrote the story, I couldn't find a way to do so. So unless I can think of a way in the new version, she might not appear in the harem.
Now I know some of you thought that Harry was being evil, but he wasn't really,in fact in Animagus Mishap, it was one of the few stories where he wasn't going to be evil. It might be considered Dark, but he wasn't evil. He would do what was necessary to protect himself, what is his and his allies.
But I would like your help to build up the new version, what stories would you suggest to help me with ideas. I want to add some politics to it, so that during the summer before his fifth year he would lose it and need to run. I know some people would think Harry would attack the Purebloods if they did that, but Harry doesn't care about Pureblood politics, as it would only get in his way in the end. So if he lose it, Harry would be bothered by it. So any stories that'll help me with the political side of the story, and how to spread the harem along or how to add them will be welcome.
So here is what I got so far, not much I know, but I'm hoping that you can help me add more to this story, their beliefs, customs and such, any and all ideas are welcome. But from what I have written so far, if you can think of anything that could to make it better, I hope you let me know. So far I'm stuck as to where to go.
Prologue…
Our story begins in a time long forgotten, in an alternate world where a race of dragons known as Drakonids ruled the world, and humans known as Dragonophs. The world was one we could only dream of, full of magic which allowed the islands in that world to float miles in the air. There were some islands that were a forest land, an ice land and many different lands in the air.
Each of the islands were huge, and was ruled by a powerful elemental island, depending on the element of the dragon. Say if the dragon was an Ice Dragon, they would rule of one of the ice lands in the world, whilst another dragon if they were a fire type would rule of a fire island and so on. Whilst each dragon ruled over the islands, and over the Dragonophs and less powerful Drakonids, they were ruled by the King of the Drakonids, the Skylord.
For years the Dragon World, (I hope you can give me a better name for the world,) was a peaceful place for them.