Chapter Six…
(Closure.)
10th of November 782 - Netherworld Tower, Natsu's Private Quarters:
It has been over two months since Natsu's experiment at Eisenwald to show Gnarl that Mages are more power than they used to be. But if he was honest with himself, whilst he was becoming darker every day, there was still part of him who hated the idea of letting people die needlessly. He was still the kind of person who would fight for his friends and allies, even if it meant it would kill him.
Surprisingly it was Gnarl's words that calmed him down a bit, Minions were more than happy to die for him if it meant that he got what he needed. Not only that, but if the Minions were useful when they died, they had the power to bring them back. While this did help, he would make sure that he wouldn't risk his allies lives recklessly, but knew that when fighting in a life or death battle, which his life was now involved in, death would be part of it.
Either way though, in the last two months, with the help of Gnarl, they begun to design a new breed of Minions. These Minions would resemble dragons, it had been Natsu's idea for this new form. Seeing that no one believed in dragons any more, he liked the idea of the Minions looking like dragons to put fear into them and make people to believe in dragons once again. The main problem with this is that to gain powers of a dragon, they need dragon souls to alter the Minion's like this. Whilst it would be difficult, Gnarl knew that there were a few dragon souls in existence, but hidden so that Dark Mages couldn't find them and use them for ill reasons. Not only would they need dragon souls, but they needed the other Minion Hive, as they would need what's inside the hives to create new ones.
Another thing was that Natsu's and Happy's training got a bit more intense, so that whatever might be guarding the Dragon Souls, they could handle it with ease. For Happy, the training involved getting a human body and the ability to use Wind Magic. So far Happy was able to gain a human body, which allowed him to look like a human, with blue hair, but he also had cat ears and a tail.
It had happened quite by accident. Happy had been working on summoning his wings when he decided to experiment. Instead of using stopping his magic after he summoned his wings he poured magic into them to see what would happen. To their surprise he changed, looking like a human of about fifteen with his ears and tail still attached to him.
As for Natsu, his training with Inferna had gotten more intense, her training was intense so that Natsu could take down giants if he had to. Sure Inferna was tough, but unlike dealing with Erza, Inferna explained things and helped him out. He also begun some new fire magic, Requip Magic, Fire Make Magic and Flame Demon Slayer Magic, so that he had other skills to back him up. Fire Make was because Natsu loved the idea of fire, and wanted to keep with what he was good at.
But Requip and Fire Demon Slayer Magic came from Gnarl and Inferna, Requip was so that he could call upon his Overlord Armour when he needed it, and any weapons he might have. He wasn't as good as Erza yet, it took ten seconds to change, but he only started so it would take some time before he got as good as Erza. As for Demon Slayer Magic, because he was now a demon dragon and found it useful to learn but he was surprised that he was having a bit of a problem. Maybe it was because he needed to eat a soul demon first, as Inferna thought that the soul triggered something within a person for Demon Slayer Magic to work for a person.
He also trained with the Golden Zodiac, Virgo, who was with Natsu most of the time unless she had to go back to her world recharge her powers for a short while. In fact Gnarl suggested that he should try the Black Golden Zodiac Keys, seeing that he was the Overlord, but the now Demon Dragon Overlord shot that down. As he didn't like the Keys, as he wouldn't be doing most of the fighting but having someone else do it was something he didn't like.
During the last two months, Natsu came up with the idea of becoming an Independent Mage. This was something Gnarl was a bit surprised about, and was unhappy about seeing that it would take time away from doing Overlord business. But as Natsu pointed out, they had no idea where the other Minion Hives were, and so becoming an Independent Mage would allow him gain information that may lead to the hives, and if not, they would at least get the money they would need. So Gnarl was displaced to admit that the new Overlord was right, and so helped him with his plans to become an Independent Mage.
It was easier than they suspected, all Natsu had to do was to go to Fiore's Branch of the Magic Council, and for a small fee was able to get his Independent Mage Licence. In fact just a few days ago Natsu went to Fiore's Branch of the Magic Council to take his S-Class Licence too, so that he could take on S-Class Missions. Natsu had to admit it, but it was a close call, he nearly failed his test for S-Class Licence, but in the end he was able to get his Licence which made things way much easier.
Either way, Natsu was within his Private Quarters getting ready to leave Netherworld Tower, something Lisanna wasn't happy about, seeing that there was a risk someone could spot her and think she was this world Lisanna and report it back to the Fairy Tail Guild. Something neither she nor Natsu wanted. But just the other week, Natsu suggested that she could change her name and some of her looks so that she could go out too, but the thing was she wasn't sure about it.
Sure she could go out, but her name and her looks was what made her, her, she didn't think she could change it. Although Gnarl kept reminding her that she was was Natsu's now, and should do what would help him and not her. Because she reminded him of this world Lisanna, but Natsu didn't force her about this.
Anyway, Natsu had just finished getting ready and left his Private Quarters to meet Gnarl and Happy in the Throne Room, so he and Happy could leave the Tower. But as he was doing so, he passed Lisanna's bedroom door and found the door open a little bit, so wondering if she was in, he took a peek and got a shock of his life.
Lisanna came out her personal bathroom, wearing nothing but a bath towel. As she came into her room, not knowing she was being watched, she dropped her bath towel and reached for her panties and dressing gown.
Within those few moments, while she put on her panties and stepped into her dressing gown, giving Natsu a view of her amazing, round, gravity defying ass. Lisanna then turned towards the door, giving Natsu full view of her tits, just when she pulled her gown on to cover her breasts. Natsu was lucky enough that he had stepped back enough so that Lisanna didn't see him. They might not be the biggest that he had seen, but they were the first he had seen naked. After seeing them he was wondering if his Lisanna had the same breasts.
As Natsu got back into place, he saw that Lisanna had moved over to her dressing table and sat down and began brushing her white hair. After a few minutes of watching her brush through her hair, she put her brush down and sighed.
Natsu thought that she was about to get up and get dressed, and so he was planning to leave. But to his shock though, she didn't, instead she put her right hand into her dressing gown and started to play with her left breast. After a few moments she stopped, and removed her gown and moved to her bed.
Natsu saw that Lisanna's bed was opposite to the mirror, where he saw her seating against the bed board, pinching her nipple hard and grabbing her breast. She was playing with them for a few moments, before she ran her palms over her nipples and rolling them between her fingers.
Natsu couldn't believe what he saw seeing, the scent of her arousal was driving him mad. It took everything that he had not go into Lisanna's room and have his way with her, all of his instincts was telling him to do so, but one thing kept from doing so, one thought, 'She's not my Lisanna.'
That one thought was what stopped him from going into Lisanna's room, but as he keep on watching Lisanna massaging her breasts, a look of pleasure on her face. She was using one hand to pinch and pull at her nipples while the other started to rub through the front of her panties.
Her head lolled back and Natsu could see her lips were parted. Natsu heard her moaning as she stroked her pussy, her fingers slick from the pussy juices seeping through her panties. Although he knew that this wasn't his Lisanna, he would have given anything for her to take those panties off, but instead she slipped her hand inside them, rubbing her bare pussy vigorously!
Natsu couldn't help but to moan loudly, luckily Lisanna didn't hear anything, thinking of her fingers slipping into that virgin cunny, rubbing her throbbing clit. He saw her lift her feet up onto the bed and spread her legs, her hand working like crazy inside her panties.
Natsu turned his head to control his ragged breath so he didn't make to much sound, not making a move to let her know he was there, and at the same time wishing she would let him see her pussy.
Natsu watched as he saw Lisanna's hips started pumping up in the air, pushing her cunny against her hand as she reached behind her and grabbed her pillow. She pulled it down over her face, and Natsu could hear her in his mind, screaming in pleasure as her body shook with orgasm. (He would have to thank Inferna for giving him The Talk and teaching him about women. The Talk that Igneel was much more different, not surprising when Natsu thought about it. Something else Natsu blamed Igneel for not warn him about, as humans and dragons were two different species. Although, seeing that Igneel was a dragon, it wasn't that much of a surprise that he didn't know about humans sex, but he could have found another human to explain it to him. As in dragon terms, either as a dragon or Dragon Slayer, you find a Mate and mate/fuck them, and for a male dragon, the stronger you were, more Mates you body would want to mate/fuck with. And for a female, she would look for the strongest male to become a Mate with, as it would mean stronger children. But there was more to it as a human, and Inferna done her best to explain it.)
The scents coming from the room was driving him crazy, and the only thing that was stopping him from doing anything was the thought he wanted his first time with his Lisanna. But it was hard as he saw Lisanna's hips keep on bucking, her hand working faster than ever. Then all at once she stopped, her legs pressed tightly together as her bottom squirmed around on the bed.
Natsu had to close his eyes and took a few deep breaths as he leaned on the doorframe to keep himself from doing something he would regret.
When he opened his eyes again, Lisanna had gotten off the bed but he couldn't see her. He feared that she noticed her, but after a moment he saw her coming out of the bathroom again, her bare breasts looking so beautiful. Natsu watched her for a moment, as she took a drink from a glass of water on her nightstand, then she walked to her bedroom door. Seeing this, Natsu knew he had to leave before he was caught, and did just that.
And Then…
Netherworld Tower, Throne Room:
Taking a few deep breaths to calm himself so that neither Happy nor Gnarl realized something was up, he entered the Throne Room. As he did, he kicked Quaver before he could start one of his songs, he had no idea why he didn't kill the damn minion, he was of no use and very annoying to him. Maybe it was fun watching Happy kicking the Minion that he kept him around, he had no idea.
"Master," greeted Gnarl before he went on to say, "are you sure it is wise for you to return to Magnolia Town?"
"Wise? Maybe not," Natsu admitted with a sigh, "but this is more important than doing what is wise, it's about closure. I want those from Fairy Tail to see what I'm capable of doing should they have taught me the way they should, and learn what they are missing out on now, a powerful ally and friend."
"I understand Master." Gnarl bowed and Happy nodded, they both knew that what happened at Fairy Tail was always on Natsu's mind, so this was something he needed to do to get past it all.
"Happy," Natsu turned to his best friend, "remember whilst we're out there, I want you to stay in your Exceed form."
"Why!?" whined Happy, not happy at the idea. He loved his human form, he thought it would take longer to get a form like this, or any form. But to do this in a few months, he wanted to stay like this as long as he could, as he wouldn't be so small. That was what he hated the most, being so small whilst everyone else was so tall, not only that, but he found that he was limited to the little amount of magic he could do. So he was forced to rely on his Lacrima Bombs.
"I told you, it is to make them underestimate you," Natsu told Happy, "so that should things get too bad, you would have a trump card to get out of trouble."
Whilst Happy wasn't too pleased at hiding his new form, he could understand Natsu's reason for it. If the people didn't know what he could do, they couldn't do anything to stop it. He just wished there was another way, so gloomily he admitted, "You're right Natsu, doesn't mean that I like it."
"I know you don't," acknowledged Natsu, "but it needs to be done for now." Then turning to Gnarl he said, "Gnarl, Happy and I will be back in a few days or so, depending on if we can get a job or not."
"Of course Sire," bowed Gnarl, "I wish you luck."
And with that Happy transformed into his Exceed form, and then he and Natsu went to the centre of the room. If you looked around there were tattered red flags adorning the posts, which looked like messy rock formations. The rocky ground was littered in cracks and crevices, where you could see magma flowing through. When they were in the centre of the room a claw like device descend from the ceiling and a blue beam engulfed them, and then they were gone, teleported outside of Magnolia.
And Then…
Magnolia Town:
Although it has only been five months since leaving Fairy Tail, it seemed like it was so long ago and it felt strange being back in Magnolia. So much had changed, three big things has happened that changed in his life. Firstly, he had become an Independent Mage, something he never thought would happen in his life, as he always thought he would be part of the Fairy Tail family. Secondly, he had been become a S-Class Mage, something whilst he had hoped to become one day, he thought it would be some time before he would become one. Lastly he had become the new Overlord of Evil, something he never believed he would become. As he always fought for good, and never thought he would change sides so starkly, especially for a role that was meant to lead other evil doers.
As he made his way to the far end of town where Fairy Tail was found, he wondered how things were back at his old guild. He wonder if they had changed since he left, but after a few moments thought, he realized it was highly unlikely. They were too head strong to change in only a few months.
Either way it didn't take Natsu and Happy long to get to their old guild. As they entered the guild, Natsu saw he was right, not much had changed. He saw Nab Lasaro at the Request Board, he was a tall, muscular young man, towering over most of his guild mates. His straight dark hair was styled in a bob cut, with a light-colored band circling it near the top, and two curved bangs emerged from under it, framing the upper part of his face, which has a somewhat rectangular shape. Nab has prominent thick lips, and a pair of wide, horizontal white stripes, each covering one of his cheeks, somehow reminiscent of tribal war paint.
Reedus Jonah, a Mage who was a tall man sporting curly, light orange hair, with a large torso, was painting in a conner. Whilst Vijeeter Ecor, was dancing in another conner. Vijeeter was a slim, young man of average height with long brown hair, which he kept tied in a ponytail at the back of his head, and had two long, curved shoulder-length bangs. He had dark eyes and was mostly, if not always, frowning. Vijeteer's initial outfit consisted of a dark, close-fitting dancing suit that covered his body aside from his head. The suit came with small, outlined round areas over the shoulders, elbows and knees, linked together by thin, metal-colored stripes.
It was as suspected, nothing had changed, the three them, mainly Nab, hardly go on any requests, Nab would stay over at the Request Board looking like he was looking for work, when in fact he hardly did anything. Not for the first time Natsu wondered how these three made money to live, although with Reedus, Natsu thought that he made his money selling his paintings, as they were that good.
Now as he looked around to see if he could see his Old Master, when a familiar called out, "I knew you would be back flame-brain. Although you were away longer than most thought you would be away."
There he saw Gray Fullbuster, one of the better Ice Mages in Fairy Tail coming at him, about to punch him. But thanks to Inferna's training over the last few months, he was ready for this, and when the punch was near he grabbed it and threw the Ice Mage into the walk. As he did this, he said, "I don't have time for you Ice Striper, I'm here to see the Master."
"Natsu!" everyone called out in shock and cheer upon seeing who threw Gray into the wall.
"I don't have time for you lot," Natsu sneered at his former Team Mates who came up to him as nothing happened, acting as nothing was wrong, "is the Master here or not?"
Just then the Old Man came out of his office, and when he saw Natsu, Makarov said, "Natsu my boy you're back."
"No old man, I'm not," Natsu told his old Guild Master, "I'm just here for two reasons, one is to let you know I have left Fairy Tail. I'm now a registered Independent Mage." This shocked the whole guild, as none of them would have thought that the Dragon Slayer would do a thing, they thought that Natsu thought Fairy Tail as his family. And they never thought that he would become an Independent Mage, they thought if the impossible came about and he did leave, he would join another guild not become an Independent Mage. And he had the paperwork to show he was telling the truth.
As the whispers of shock about him leaving Fairy Tail were making their round, Natsu went on to give them another shock, "And the second reason is that I came here to get my first S-Class."
"That's impossible, even if you're Independent Mage, you're not a S-Class Mage." Makarov informed Natsu.
"Says who?" Natsu said with a smirk as he held up his right hand to show a sliver ring with a ruby in it with a S in the centre of it.
"That's an Independent Mage S-Class RIng, when did you get it?"" Makarov asked in shock. As an Independent Mage, Natsu could go to any guild and show his paperwork and get any job. But he was limited to what work he could do, like doing S-Class Requests, which was where the Independent Mage S-Class RIng came into play. As the Ring proves that he is a S-Class Mage and could do their S-Class Requests.
"What's a S-Class Ring?" asked one of the Fairy Tail member.
"It is as it sounds like, it shows that the wearer is a S-Class Mage." explained the Guild Master, shocking everyone there.
"Impossible!" shouted out Fullbuster, as he got up off the floor, "He hasn't got the skills to become one. He is weak and destructive, whoever made him one was crazy to make him one."
"I'm only weak and destructive as you called me, because no one here would teach me to control my magic or help me train when I asked. Not even you Master." Natsu snidely remarked, "But not long after I left here I bumped into someone who not only helped me to control my magic, but they found someone to train me, and teach me things that I should know without being hurt or forced, and took the time to explain to me when I get things wrong. I might not be as strong as the other S-Class Mages like Ezra and the other here yet, but that's where training and experience comes into play, as it'll take some time before I get as strong as them."
Makarov was sad and happy for Natsu, sad at what the guild had done to him that made it so he left the guild. But happy that he was able to find someone who was able to teach the young Dragon Slayer the things he needed, and over the last few months he was able to do a lot so that he could become a S-Class Mage. Something that was amazing, to train someone in a few months so that they could become a S-Class in such a short time. But he was sad that he and the rest of the guild let the young man down. Than to back up the Dragon Slayer, he said, "You can only get the Ring if the Magic Council sees you are fit for it."
"They must be losing their touch if they are making mitch stick here a S-Class, he is too weak to become a S-Class Mage" said the Ice Mage, and to prove his point, he attacked Natsu. "Ice-Make, Hammer!" he yelled as he made a fist and slammed it into his hand to create a huge hammer and swung his newly made ice weapon at Natsu.
Natsu looked at it as if it was nothing, and with one hand he made a simple hand gestures and said, "Fire-Make Ape!" And to the shock of the guild, a huge ape made of fire appeared behind Natsu and protected him from the ice hammer, melting it away.
Out of everyone, it was Gray who came out of shock first at seeing the Dragon Slayer use something other than his usual powers. But Gray was shocked for another reason, he was a skilled Mold Mage, and he was taught that the user should always use both hands when using Mold Magic. As if you didn't, the magic would become unstable and easy to beat. To have someone who was new to Mold Magic beat him, a skilled Ice-Make User, was a shock and unforgivable.
"How is that possible?" asked a very angry Ice-Mage, "I was taught that Mold Magic Users should always use two hands to fight."
"And I was taught that too," Natsu admitted before adding, "that is if I'm facing someone who's equal or more powerful than me, if I'm facing someone weaker than me, I would have no problems using one hand. Let me show you, Fire-Make Knuckles." and with one hand he did a different set of hand gestures and sent several fists made out of fire at Gray witch struck him from below, knocking the Ice Mage out.
Smirking Natsu said, "Now if you don't mind, I have to get my first S-Class Request." and with that Natsu went up to the second floor to get his first S-Class Request, leaving behind a shocked guild behind him.
And Then…
As Natsu went up to the second floor, it appeared to have a few, small round tables and chairs seated around the tables. In addition, there were also barrels, crates, and bags scattered in some of the corners of the room. The S-Class Request Board was located on this floor. It was a brown, elegantly decorative board that was displayed in its own area of the hall. It was adorned by velvet curtains, which were tied with golden tassels. In the centre of the board were five ornate papers, the S-Class requests.
The requests on the board had rewards ranging from seven million jewels to ten million jewels. Most of the jobs were to defeat some sort of powerful monster. Normally Natsu would have been more than happy to do such a task, but the thing was that these were all S-Class monsters, and if he wasn't careful he could be killed. So he decided to go for the low paying job, and see what the S-Class jobs were really like, and if it was too hard he would train more before doing another. The low paying job was to break a curse on Galuna Island, and for more information he would have to go to the island.
This was an ideal job, but at the same time he might not be able to do it alone. If it was some sort of monster behind it, he might be able to do it but at the same time though, there could be some sort of seal, something he had no knowledge about. So he would have to hire a researcher, one who could break the seal if he found one, or point out what needed to be done to break it. After some thought, Natsu knew of the perfect person, and she was downstairs.
So picking up the Request, he went down stairs where he found a few people caring for Gray. Not bothering with him, Natsu walked up to Makarov and said, "I'll be taking this Request."
"Hmm, the Galuna Island Request, that is a new one that came out last week," explained the Fairy Tail's Guild Master, "I'm surprised that you didn't take a Monster Hunting Request."
"I thought about it, but seeing that they were all S-Class ones, I decided to take this one to see what S-Class Jobs are really like." explained Natsu, "And if I have difficulties, I'll train more before taking on more jobs."
"That's a wise decision my boy." Makarov acknowledged with a smile. It would seem that the young Dragon Slayer grew up over the last few months, before now the young man would have run off without thinking doing a Monster Request.
"Now I would like to hire Levy McGarden as a researcher for this job." Natsu explained to the Guild Master.
"I'm sorry my boy, but I can't, seeing as this is an S-Class Request." the old man told Natsu.
"I'm not asking her to join me for the S-Class Job itself," explained Natsu, "I need her incase I need a researcher to research a seal or read a language that I don't know about. The Magic Council told me what I can or cannot do, and hiring a researcher as long as they don't do the main job is something I can do."
"You're right, I was hoping not to put her into danger," explained the Guild Master, "as I don't think she is ready for a S-Class jobs yet."
"Well this isn't a S-Class Job now is it, just a basic research job." Natsu smirked at the old man.
"That is true," Makarov sighed at this, "you can talk to her, please just keep her safe. And before you go, please talk to me before you leave, as there's a few things we need to talk about, if you are quitting the guild."
"You mean the three rules? Don't think about it," Natsu sneered at the old man, "I don't know about any sensitive information about Fairy Tail, so I can't tell anyone anything. As for not using former contacts that I met through the guild for personal gain, I can't do, as a new Independent Mage, I need all the contacts that I can use to get jobs. And as for the last rule, I don't have any friends here now that Lisanna is gone, so I won't think about them at all. As for living every day as my last, that's the plan."
And with that Natsu left the old man alone, who was sad at what the Dragon Slayer said to him. Makarov was sad at this, but with everything that the guild put him through, treating him badly and not like one of their own, he couldn't say he was surprised at this. He just hope that Levy would be safe at the island with Natsu.
Once Natsu got to Levy, he talked to her about the request that he wanted her for, sadly the two fools that were normally with her, Jet and Droy, were there. And once they heard about the request, and the reward, five hundred thousand jewels, they wanted to come with her. But Natsu told them he didn't want them, as normally they would ruin the jobs that they go on with Levy, and Levy was the one who would have to fix their mistakes. Natsu also told them that this was just a researcher job, and he did not need them.
Levy thought long and hard about this, before she decided against her teammates arguments, to go on this quest. As although it was just a research job, she would be helping out in a S-Class Job, something not many people could say they have done. And so she and Natsu left the guild to go to Galuna Island, little did Natsu know, but going there would be the best decision he ever made, as he would find something he needed.
To be Continued!
Author's Note - PLEASE READ TO THE END: Here ends Chapter 6 of The Dragon Overlord, and I want you to thank you all for reading and I hope you enjoyed the chapter. This chapter was much easier to write than the last one, I was able to concentrate way much better. I'm going to be working on the next chapter of Magical Fallout next.
I hope you enjoy how I'm making Happy and Natsu stronger, as I hate how 'weak' they were. Sure Natsu was strong in the anime, but the thing is that most of Natsu's wins are done to luck or gaining some power before losing said power up. You would have thought that over time, he would train and get more powerful, and learn to use the Dragon Force at will, but yet the writers don't let it. Like I recently rewatched Fairy Tail episode Titania Falls, and saw how powerful Natsu could become, but the thing is the damn writers made him weak once again. Why the fuck do they keep him from becoming powerful, only to make him strong for an instant, and then weak again? Why not make him stronger over time so that Natsu could defeat Zeref.
Now for Happy, out of the three Exceeds in Fairy Tail he is the weakest and the dumbest of them. (Although Natsu is dumb too, but after someone like Erza teaching him, it is no surprise he dislikes learning. :P)
Pantherlily knows how to fight even in his small size, and able to transform into a Battle Form of his cat form. Carla has the ability to see into the future, although it shit thanks to the time skip, but she also able to fight better than Happy and have a 'human' form. Happy though, he has nothing at all, the writer doesn't seemed to be bothered in doing anything to make him stronger or smarter.
So I hope you liked what I have done with Happy and Natsu, and I hope that you might have ideas of what other magic Happy and Natsu could learn.
The plot around Erza's past didn't make any real sense to me, she had friends who she considered as family and she just left them. Sure Jellal might have threatened her at the start, but as she got older and knowing what she did about the R-System, she did NOTHING to rescue her 'family' that was in serious danger for all she could have known. Not only that, knowing how many lives could be lost should the R-System be finished and used. So why didn't she do something, it made no sense at all, where she could have stopped so much before hand.
Another plot that doesn't make sense, how the hell Irene could be Erza's mother of all people, look at the timeline of all things, that don't make sense. It says that Erza was born in X765, but from what I can remember, Irene was born over 400 years ago, and before she became a dragon, she give birth to Erza and some time afterwards become a dragon. And so seeing that no one seen a dragon in hundred of years, the birth was about 400 years ago too. So how the hell could Irene give birth to Erza, Erza would be over 400 years old and seeing how in the one episode call Battle of Fairy Tail, anyone over 80 years old couldn't pass a magical barrier, which later on Erza could but Natsu couldn't - although it was pointed out to me that Natsu's foster father was within him and so that's why. But still, how the hell is Irene Erza's mother?
I'm in need of help, I need an idea on how to change Edolas Lisanna's looks a bit, and give her a new name. The reason for this is simple, Edolas Lisanna looks like the Lisanna from Earthland who many thing was dead. So should she appear in Earthland as she is now, should she come across someone who knew the old Lisanna, they would go and inform her siblings and questions would be asked that Natsu wasn't ready for. Which is why I want a new name and look for Edolas Lisanna, so I would like to hear your thoughts about it.
Possible Harem Members:
Edolas:
Edolas Levy.
Edolas Erza Knightwalker.
Edolas Lucy Ashley.
Edolas Lisanna.
Edolas Jellal. (I'm thinking about turning him female, who'll pretend to be a male to hide from her father. As in the show I find it hard to see that Edolas Jellal's father didn't send people to stop his son from closing the Anima portals. But in this story, I might send a few to Earthland to do so. Please let me know what you think of the idea.)
Earthland:
Gajeel Redfox (Still looking for a good female name, please give ideas.)
Laxus Dreyar. (Female name: Lexis Dreyar.)
Lucy Heartfilia.
Lisanna Strauss.
Mirajane Strauss.
Cana Alberona.
Juvia Lockser.
Erza Scarlet. (In two minds about this one, too much of a stick in the mud for my liking. The main problem is how to turn her, as after everything she has been through, she wouldn't submit to anyone, especially Natsu. So if you really want her, give me good believable ideas how I could do this. Some people suggested that I should make her into a slave, what do you think.)
Wendy Marvell.
Mirajane Strauss.
Bisca Connell. (Before she joins Fairy Tail, instead of Erza finding her, it would be Natsu.)
Kinana.
Zeref.
Millianna.
Flare Corona.
Ultear Milkovich.
Meredy.
Angel.
If there's others you might want in Natsu's Harem, please let me know and I'll think about adding them. I'm not adding Levy McGarden, as unlike her Edolas counterpart, she was too soft and kind hearted, and so most likely not going to add her.
After talking to the Beta Reader I'm using, I've decided not to share girls with Happy, instead give him his own harem. Which lead me to this question, who should Millianna be with, Natsu or Happy? Please vote, the winning votes will decide what path I'll take with the story. A few things you should know about as you vote, no matter who Millianna ends up with, because of her fixation on cats, Natsu will make her into a Cat Monster of sorts.
Millianna with Happy
Millianna with Natsu
Don't care what happens to Millianna
Please know that any flames will be ignored, any guests reviews that aren't useful to make the story better, will be deleted! I am a dyslexic, and had a bad schooling so without a Co-Writer/Beta Reader, my spelling, grammar and the way things are written will not be as good as the rest of the work here. So please don't moan about this, as it can't be helped.
And lastly, I would like to ask if you like this story to read The Magical Academy of Fiore by James Schaeche, it is an interesting read. It is an AU story, where there's no guilds, but they learn magic from a High School. It is a good read and I recommend you to read the story.
Either way, thank you for reading this story, and I hope you'll leave a review letting me know what you think, and any ideas you might have, as I'm looking for some. As I would like your thoughts about my first ever Fairy Tail story, be it bad or good, so please leave a good length review. One thing I'm looking for are ideas for new Overlord Items, and how to add them. I hope you can help me out.
Overlord Log!
Overlord Items:
Eye of Evil: An Orb to allow the Overlord to spy on people.
Coffin of Regeneration: A Coffin that can heal anyone from near death.
Spell Stones: Got a few spell from Overlord that I'll use, but I would like ideas for more spells that I can use. So ideas are welcomed here.
Mana Pillars: Going to be called something like Power Pillars or something like that, which give the person as the name suggests, gives power to the Overlord.
Health Pillars: Not going to appear, as I can't see how I could use them.
Minion Totems: Not going to appear in the story, as I don't like the idea of limiting how many minions Natsu can use at a time. Not only that, I had no idea how to add them into the story. Unless you have an idea how to alter them to fit into a story.
Tower Heart: To follow the Followship of Evil, the Heart will now be called Nether Heart.
Tower Smelters: Unlike the games, the first Smelter will still be at the tower.
Minion Hives:
Brown Hive: Like in the game it'll be in the tower.
Red Hive: Like the game not in the tower, in this story the Red Minions will be found near Sun Village.
Green Hive: Like the game not in the tower, but I am unsure where it'll be found, so ideas would be welcomed as to where to find it. Was thinking of some kind of swamp or something.
Blue Hive: Like the game not in the tower, in this story I was thinking they could be found on Galuna Island, unless you can think of another place for them to be found.