Chapter Fourteen…
(Lucy Heartfilia - Part 2.)
17th of November 782 - Heartfilia Residence, Jude's Study:
"Nice to meet you Mr. Heartfilia," Natsu greeted back to the man, "I was told that you want to find your runaway daughter."
"That is right, Mr. Dragneel," Jude acknowledged, "her name is Lucy, and she ran away about three months ago. I didn't inform anyone as I thought she would return on her own, but three months later and she hasn't."
"Why did she run away for?" asked Natsu, "By the looks of things, she could have whatever she wanted. Was she spoilt, and you said no to something she wanted?"
"No it wasn't anything like that," Heartfilia informed the Mage, "it was down to me to be honest. I haven't been a good father since her mother dead about five years ago, I didn't do well with her death and since then I neglected her, wasn't there for her. So I want you to look for and bring her back so I could make it up to her."
Natsu could tell that there was more than Jude was letting on, whilst he seemed to be telling the truth, Natsu sensed that there was more to it other than finding his daughter. Not that he cared really, he just didn't like not knowing the full story, but as long he is getting paid, he didn't care. And talking about getting paid, it was Happy who asked, "What's in it for us? Don't get us wrong, we're sorry that your daughter ran away, but we just started out as Independent Mages. And not to sound rude or anything, but we have better things to do than look for a runaway girl."
"I understand," the older man acknowledged the strange blue talking cat, "I'm willing to give you one million jewel now, and another two million when you find my daughter. Not only that, but seeing that you might not do many jobs as you'll be looking for my daughter, I'm willing to pay any experiences whilst you're looking for her, hotel, food, drink and anything else you'll need to find her."
Natsu couldn't deny that was good money, and one look at Happy, saw that he agreed too, as for him he could buy a lot of fish that that kind of money. So Natsu said, "Okay, we'll try and find her, but do you have any ideas as to where she might have run off to?"
"No," Heartfilia denied, "but if you look around her room, you might be able to find something that I might have missed."
"That's fine," Natsu told the man, "have you got anything that might have her scent on it? As I have an ability to pick up the scent of others. So if I have her scent, and she is in a town I'm looking in, it'll be much easier to find her."
Jude had to admit, that kind of ability would make it so much easier to find someone, but still, "I'm sorry to say I don't know if there's anything that might have her scent on, as all her clothes and bedding have been cleaned. You can look around her room to see if there's of her dolls with her scent on, other than that I don't know."
"That's fine, but do you have a recent photo of her? At least I would know what she looks like." Natsu told the man.
"Hmm, I think I got one here." Jude told the Mage, as he looked in his drew as he found one and give it to Natsu and Happy.
As they looked at the photo, in it was a fifteen year old girl in a bell in her small ball gown. It was about three different shades of pink and adorned with ruffles around her waist, at the elbows of her short sleeves, and across the off-the-shoulder neckline. More ruffles lined the overlay on her skirt, parting down the centre and draping from her hips to her knees. A large white bow done with four petals was pinned on her left hip, holding up a large white sash that draped down and around her right leg; nearly hitting the hem of the skirt overlay. She was standing in front of a huge bookcase.
Natsu has to admit that although the whole thing look silly and over the top, she did look cute in the outfit, but at the same time, she seemed to look scared for some reason. The exaggerated details of the gown seemed fitting and even a bit subdued when matched with the woman's poise. Even the ruffled pink choker that matched the gown seemed appropriate, and accentuated her bare shoulders in perfect sync with her hair tied up in a bun high on her head; pinned in place with a ring of rosebuds. Two thing locks of hair framed the sides of her face, along with the fringe of her bangs swept towards her left eye.
"Thank you Mr. Heartfilia," Natsu thanked the man, "could you take me and Happy to her room so we could look around and see if we can find anything."
"No problems Mr. Dragneel, if you would follow me, I'll take you to her room." Mr. Heartfilia informed Natsu and Happy, he was taking them to his daughter's room himself so that his staff won't say anything to them. As if they did, they could ruin everything he was planning for his daughter.
And Then…
Heartfilia Residence - Lucy's Bedroom:
Lucy's room was a huge white bedroom, with a huge bookshelf on one side of the room, with a white glass cabinet next to it. Within the cabinet, was full of dolls of all kinds of looks. On the other wall there was a bed against it, the curtains were white with blue plant life on it. Next to her bed was white bedside cabinet, which had a doll on it. It had wavy dark blonde hair and blue eyes complete with fair skin. Her attire was of an upper-class woman, consisting of a blue dress with a white trim and a dark blue ribbon attached to it in which the top portion of the dress is a slightly lighter blue while the area below her waist has a darker shade of blue. She wore a blue bonnet with a white trim is on her head, including a pink corsage on the left side. She also wears white stockings and little dark blue shoes. Against the rest of the wall, were pictures which Happy and Natsu thought were pictures of her when she was younger, with her mother and father.
As Happy was flying around, he sent to check on the doll on the bedside cabinet, where he smelt a strong female scent on it. So he called out to Natsu who was looking around the room, "Natsu, I think I found something over here with the doll, it has a strong female scent on it."
Looking at the doll, Natsu asked Lucy's father, "Was that doll important to your daughter."
Looking at the doll, Jude looked shocked at it, "Why yes, that's Michelle," explained the father sadly, "she the doll that Layla, my wife and Lucy's mother, give her as a birthday present. I remember the day Lucy got her, she announced that her gift was to be her new little sister." a small tear went down his eye as he remembered the past, "And ever since she got it, Lucy and Michelle were always together, and Lucy became more and more fond of the doll, to the point that she even designed outfits and garments for her 'younger sister.' But then Layla passed on, and I thought Lucy abandoned her as she said it gave her painful memories of her mother. But it looks like she kept it there, for what reason I don't know."
"It could be that when times were bed, and you won't there for her, she could have hugged it in your place." Natsu told the father, as she smelt it, "It would explain why there's a strong female scent on it. This could be what I need to search for your daughter in towns. Now I need to know where to start looking." And with that, Natsu looked through the bedside cabinet, where he found a few journals, as he read one of them, there was some entrances about where she would like to go. Natsu thought these journals could show some light on where Lucy was.
Thinking about something, Natsu asked, "Does she have any money on her?"
"I don't know," admitted the father, "I did put a hold on her accounts, hoping that if she had money, when she ran out or tried to get some money, she would be forced to return home. Why do you ask?"
"Was thinking that if she didn't have much money, she would have to stop for some time in one of these towns to earn money for food, drink bed and broad and other things she might need." Natsu explained thoughtfully, "So I was thinking that she might stop at a town for a while to earn money before moving out again."
"I never thought of that," Jude admitted, "so you think that she might be staying in one of the towns to earn money, but watch town?"
"Don't know," admitted Natsu, "but it made searching for her easier. As it would mean that she would have to stay in one place for a while. I hope these journals might give me some leads where she might have gone, or is now. One last thing, does she a Mage? As if she is, knowing her kind of magic could make finding her even easier."
"Oh, she's Celestial Spirit Mage," Jude informed Natsu, "I can't remember how many she has, but I do know that she has two Gold Keys, both once belonged to her mother."
"Thank you Mr. Heartfilia, that should make it even easier to find her as Celestial Spirit Mage are rare to find these days."
"You're welcome Mr. Dragneel," thanked Jude, "if there's anything I can do to help, please just let me know."
"Thank you Mr. Heartfilia, I'll let you know if there's anything." the Dragon Slayer told the man, "For now I'll leave, I have a nightmare journey back to Magnolia Town, before going back to where I'm staying for now."
"That's fine, but please keep me updated on your progress." the older man told him.
"I'll do my best," Natsu told the man, "but please remember that it could be a while before I find anything."
"I understand." Jude informed the Mage, and with that he called one of his servants to take Natsu back to the train once they dealt with the money, where it took him back to Magnolia Town, where he left to return to Netherworld Tower.
And Then…
Netherworld Tower - Command Centre:
It was a few hours later since Happy and Natsu meet Jude Heartfilia, Happy went to the caves where the fish were to eat some, whilst Natsu went to the newly formed Command Centre. The new Command Centre came from an idea Happy when they got the Eye of Evil, he joked about having one for the Eye. But Natsu thought it was a great idea, as once the Eye was fully fixed and work right, and they got the War Table taking over the world would be one step closer in his grasp. The War Table has the map of the whole world, and has meant to have great detail enabling to plan assaults better. With the Eye fully fixed, they could scry any area and the Table could gain the detail from it and so making mission much easier.
But that's for the future, at the moment, the Command Centre was built in one of the floating rocks around the tower, so it would be harder to take control of. Within the rock was a huge room, with the Eye of Evil in the centre of it, at around the room was around ten Communications Lacrima Crystals, so that they could keep in contact with those on mission and send back up if needed. There were a small area with two bookshelves so they can do some research if they needed, and it was kept by Mortis for now. Sure it wasn't much, but at the moment that's the best they got for now.
Upon entered the Command Centre, the few minions that were there, started to cry out, "Master is back, Master is back." One of the minions there was the Minion Master, and when the other minions announced he was there said, "Welcome back Master, how was your meeting?"
"Not too bad, a bit boring though," Natsu informed the Minion Master, "need to find a missing daughter of a rich man, who ran away because the father neglected her since her mother's death."
"So you're going to look for her Master?" asked Inferna, who entered the Centre.
"Yeah I agreed to look for her," Natsu informed the Netherghul, "we need the money. He agreed to give me one million jewel now, and another two million when you find his daughter. Not only that, he is willing to pay any experiences I would need to find her. But I did get the feeling that he was hiding something though, something dark, that he has planned for his daughter."
"Do you know what Master?" asked Inferna.
"No," Natsu informed her, "I don't think it is to kill her, but something else."
"Do you have any plans for him Sire?" asked Gnarl.
"As of right now?" asked Natsu, "I have nothing planned at the moment. At the moment I need his money more than anything, to help us around her to build up our base."
"Understandable Master," acknowledged Gnarl, "but I hope you're going to be taking more active role too."
"I will once we get the other minions and alter them as I plan to," Natsu reminded the Minion Master, "as I proved to you months ago, they are weak against the Mages of today. This is where I'm getting money and being and Independent Mage, so I can find the others and get the weapons and armour for us so we can become active when the time is right. It is also why I'm starting up an Independent Guild, not only to help find clues of the whereabouts of the other minions, but also to find more allies and followers."
Whilst Gnarl wasn't happy about the Overlord not being more active, he could understand why. They had the same talks a lot over the last few months, as he tried to get his new Lord to be more active. But the young Dragon Slayer wouldn't barge on this, keeping his conviction, something Gnarl had to admire about. It showed how strong willed he was, and would not allow anyone to convince him otherwise.
"About this new guild you want to create, have you found a place to set it at?" asked Inferna.
"No, well sort of, I know a basic idea of how I want it now thanks to meeting up with Heartfilia." Natsu informed Inferna and Gnarl, as he went on to explain about the land he saw and how much there was.
When he finished, it was Gnarl who said, "Then why not just kill the man and take it from him."
"Not that easy," Natsu informed the Minion Master, "whilst I'm not against the idea, if he dies, his daughter would be next in line to inherit it, if not willed to someone else. And if not and I killed the daughter and not passed down to someone else, the banks would most likely have the rights to it. And seeing I'm trying to keep a low profile for now, and not having the money to buy so a land I don't know how I could get it."
Gnarl once again wished that the new Overlord would take a more active role in becoming the Overlord of Evil, as he wouldn't have such problems. He could take what he wants, and not worry about such things. But it was Inferna who came up with an idea, "Than why not become friends with the daughter, and kill the father and those working for him. If you are friends with the daughter, she might allow you to use the place."
"Hmm, not a bad idea, needs work, but that just might work." admitted Natsu, liking the idea, "But the main problem is that we can't kill the father ourselves, as if anyone was able to live after the attack and sees you or the minions sneaking about, they could inform her, and everything would be ruined."
"In that case, we just have hire one of the Dark Guild to kill him," Inferna told him with a smirk behind the mask, "that way we can lay the blame on them. In fact, it would be better this way, as we could use her need of revenge killing those she cares about against her. We can turn her hatred and anger against her, and make it so she becomes a Dark Mage."
"I like," Natsu informed the Netherghul with a smirk, "I'll let you iron out the idea seeing that you seem to have a handle on it. But first we need to find her, and for that, "Now! O Spirit, answer my call and pass through the Gate." Natsu begun as he pulled a golden key from his packet, "Gate of the Maiden, I open thee! Virgo!" And as he said that, he twirled the Key around, before giving it stab in the air. In doing so, the earth broke apart and Virgo appeared out of the ground.
Other than her shackles around her wrists, she was naked other than her white, frilled-trim apron. "You summoned me Master." Virgo stated as she appeared, who didn't seem care that without the apron she was naked.
"Yes I did, but first why are you naked under the apron?" asked Natus.
"So that if you want to, you can punish me or fuck me without worrying about my clothes getting in the way." Virgo informed her Master.
Natsu should have seen this coming, with the type of Spirit she was, this was bound to happen to her after he fucked her. Not that he cared, it did make things easier, but what if she appeared around people that he didn't want others knowing about this. So with a sigh he said, "Whilst I don't mind this, but in future, unless I'm alone, with my slaves or know about us and who I really am, I want you to be fully clothed with underwear on." Natsu added, just in case she decided to forget them.
"As you wish Master." the Spirit said sadly. She understood her Master's reasons, but that didn't mean she had to like them.
"Now the reason I called you is that I wanted to know if you find out some information for me." Natsu informed her.
"Oh, what information do you want to know about Master?" asked Virgo, eager to help her Master.
"I'm trying to find another Celestial Spirit Mage, and I was wondering about if you can find them for me?" Natsu inquired.
"I'm sorry Master I cannot," Virgo informed her Master unhappy, "as Celestial Spirits cannot dissolve information about other Celestial Spirits. Oh we can tell you who their owner is, but other than that, we can't dissolve anything else. Please punish me for not being able to help." the kinky begged eagerly.
"Maybe later," Natsu with a shake of his head, as Inferna and Gnarl both smirked at this, "I have work to do first." turning to Gnarl, he asked, "How much is the Eye of Evil fixed?"
"About thirty percent Sire," Gnarl informed his Master, "it'll take a while to be fully fixed."
Natsu sighed, this meant that there was a chance that should he use it, it won't show what he wanted. Whilst he didn't mind it showing him something that can be useful, he wanted to finish this job as soon as possible. As he wanted to get on with more important stuff, like training and find the other Minion Hives. Natsu sighed, so it was either reading though the girl's journals or risk using the Eye of Evil and risk being sent who knows where. In the end, Natsu decided to read the journals, whilst not happy about reading, as he preferred action instead of reading, he didn't want to be running around who knows where. As he wanted to finish this job fast.
So he left with Virgo to his Chambers, where after he 'punished' her, went on to read Lucy Heartfilia's journals, to see if there was anything in them that could help him to find the girl.
And Then…
17th of November 782 - Oak Town, Phantom Lord Guild, Oak Town's Guild Branch.
Located in the northeast part of Fiore, there was an old castle town called Oak Town. The town was situated on a hill, surrounded by forests and mountains, with the river flowing nearby. The city was historic, with numerous turrets and battlements. It is located spherical and completely covered hill on which it is located. The town was abandoned, other than those who lived there seeing that it had one of their branch of operation located there. These people were from Phantom Lord, and their base was in the centre of the town, towering above the town - there base was a castle,
The castle's entrance gave access to a large and tall room furnished like a club or pub of sort, possessing several tables paired with benches. The floor was composed of wood, bearing a distinctive square pattern in which every square was composed by four planks, and the ceiling sported a complicate system of massive, horizontal and vertical wooden beams hanging from it on top of the hall, just below the passageway leading to the second floor, which was complete with a small mezzanine the lower horizontal beams had round lamps hanging from them. The inner side of the double door granting access to the building had thin reinforcements in the shape of "X"s, and bore two light banners with Phantom Lord's emblem in its middle part, one on each leaf.
The second floor housed a smaller, more elegant room: at its sides were a pair of stone balustrades ending in ornately decorated pillars shaped like a pair of goblets; the stone ceiling, sustained by a multitude of square pillars protruding from the walls, bore a pattern consisting of many squares, and from it hanged a massive chandelier. To the entrance's right, in the central part of the room, was a carved stone table bearing the guild's symbol on it, on which sat a jar full of flowers and a set to play chess; to the left was a small, decorated sofa. The room was given access to by an arched, intricately decorated door, and in front of it, on the other edge of the room, was a throne, on which the Master seats on, on the wall behind the throne stood a dark banner with Phantom Lord's light symbol on it.
Now within this room was in fact the Master of the guild, Jose Porla, who was waiting for his most trust member of his guild, Gabrielle Redfox. Now Jose is a tall, slim man with long, with straight, black hair reaching down to his shoulders and a thin dark reddish moustache. He was wearing a flamboyant coat with a high collar that sported a jagged mantle and jagged lower edges, as well as intricately decorated borders and inners, featuring two prominent wings similar to a bat's, with a matching witch-like hat bearing Phantom Lord's symbol, complete with an extremely long, bent top hanging down on Jose's left; a plain shirt which sported a medallion around the neck, with two light ribbons falling down from it, loose striped culottes paired with long socks, and a pair of pointed shoes each bearing two furry balls, one on the front and one on the back of the foot. While donning this attire, his left hand's fingers were adorned by a pair of rings, with one of them sporting a spherical gem.
Now Jose was one of the Ten Wizard Saints, meaning he was one of extremely powerful and skilled Mages of the Ishgar continent. He was ranked seventh. To his subordinates and other people, he is considered as a gentleman, and appeared to be very respectful of his subordinates. But when he gets angry, or someone he considers an enemy or someone that pisses him off, or someone who in his way, his true colours appears, Jose's true personality tends to surface. In such state, he shows himself as he truly is: an evil, reckless and sadistic man, willing to cause extreme suffering to his enemies and to commit evil deeds only to prove the superiority of his own Guild, which seemed to get his full attention and care. Not only that, whilst he doesn't show it to others, he is also greedy, and willing to blackmail others to finance Phantom Lord's activities.
There was another side of him that he doesn't often show, he seems to have a jealous streak and a lot of pride, as well as a distinct, boundless hate for Fairy Tail. Now he always loved his Guild, and would do anything to see it become the best, and some time Phantom Lord was considered as the strongest and the best in the Kingdom of Fiore. That was until Fairy Tail's sudden rise in power a few years back. This to Jose was an insult to his pride, as it took years to make his Guild the strongest and the best in the Kingdom of Fiore. But then out of nowhere, Fairy Tail raised in power and was now considered equals Phantom Lord. This almost made Jose go ballistic, it was only because of his and his Guild's reputation, he done nothing about it. That was until four years ago, where Jose's true hatred for Fairy Tail began, during the Annual Guild Master's Meeting.
The meeting itself was fine, they talked about new rules, about the Dark Guilds and about each other Guilds, the normal stuff. But the problem began when they started to drink, as before they knew it, the Masters found themselves having a bit too much to drink. And so the Masters began to brag about their Guilds, it started off alright until Fairy Tail's Master started off. Makarov brag about how his Guild was equal to Phantom Lord, and how powerful his Mages were. He went on with how he allowed his Mages to do as they want. This caused Jose to get mad at the Fairy Tail's Master, seeing that he and his guild done a lot of hard work to get where they were. Eventually, Jose began to bad-mouth Fairy Tail, saying how unruly and destructive they were, which angered Makarov, and the both of them began to fight. The battle ended with Makarov the victor and Jose beaten badly, resulting in Jose's last regular meeting, and began his never-ending hatred towards Fairy Tail. And over the last few years the two guilds often got into fights, and tried to outdo the other.
Then a few months ago Jose thought he got a chance to give Makarov a big fuck you, when he heard that Fairy Tail's Dragon Slayer, Natsu Dragneel, left the Fairy Tail. He didn't know the full reasons as to why the Fire Dragon Slay left, but from what he could find out, he left because someone close to the Slayer dead, and people called him weak and destructive.
Jose could only laugh at this, of course the Dragon Slayer was destructive, it was the nature of their magic, as they meant to kill dragons and other power creatures. And so, unless they were trained otherwise, their magic will have destructive outcome. And for Natsu being weak, Jose could only laugh again at this, seeing that they were trained to kill dragons, of course they won't weak at all.
He knew that for reasons he nor Gabrielle could understand, doing research on Natsu seem to confirm it, Dragon Slayers seemed to have problems with reading and writing common Earthland language. Gabrielle did inform him that their parent dragons did teach them read and write, but for from strange reason after their parents disappeared, they couldn't seem to read or write Earthland language. And so, had to relearn how to read and write the Earthland language, and so if they didn't have someone to help them, relearning what everyone already knew, would be hard.
Whilst it seemed that Gabrielle was smarter than Natsu, if the rumours were true, it wasn't surprising. As from what he learned, whilst Natsu wasn't bothered about learning it Erza Scarlet bullied Natsu in learning it. And this made it so Natsu didn't want to learn anything else. If Erza give Natsu time, and helped him with kindness, Natsu could be a lot smarter than he was when the Dragon Slayer left Fairy Tail.
So when he heard that Natsu had left, he planned for going to Natsu with the intention of offering help with reading and writing, and learning to control his magic. But he first he was going to give the Dragon Slayer time to calm down for two reasons, first the two Guilds had bad blood and him going to him straight away could do more harm than good. The other reason is that all he knew, when he calms down, the Fire Dragon Slayer would go back to Fairy Tail, and he didn't want to let Makarov know what he was planning. However, before he could set his plans into action, Jose learnt that Natsu just disappeared after having a fight with Fairy Tail. A fight where he points out a few home truths that none of them liked.
But now a few days ago, after months god knows where, the Dragon Slayer had returned, but to his luck wasn't returning to Fairy Tail. But what shocked him was that during his time back, from what his informant was able to find out, Natsu was a bit smarter than when he left. Not only that, but he was now an Independent Mage and had gotten strong enough over the last few months to become a S-Class Mage. Something that before his disappearance wouldn't be possible, as the Slayer didn't have the mindset to become one at the time.
So with how powerful Natsu had become, Jose wanted even more to have the Dragon Slayer in his Guild, as it would not only be a fuck you to Makarov, but to have another strong Mage in his Guild. Which he hoped would make his Guild to be the best once again. So in this case, Jose believed that the best person to get Natsu to Phantom Lord was Gabrielle, as he was hoping she could lure him there by seducing the male Dragon Slayer. But he had to wait until she returned from her latest mission.
As Jose was thinking about the plans to get Natsu to join him, the main person who Jose was going to use to do so, entered the room. As Gabrielle Redfox entered the room, she gave a respectful bow as she said, "You asked to see me Master when I returned."
"Ah Gabrielle good to see you back dear, how was the mission?" asked Jose.
"Boring," Gabrielle informed her Master, "the monster was not worth me going it was so weak."
"For you my dear maybe, but not everyone is as strong as you are." Jose informed the female Dragon Slayer, "Anyway, I have another mission for you, and sadly you won't like this one either, but you're the best one for the job."
"And what is this job?" Gabrielle asked in disgust.
"I want you to seduce and recruit your fellow Dragon Slayer, Natsu Dragneel." Jose informed her.
"What that fool, why?" Gabrielle asked in shock.
"I know what you might think of him Gabrielle," acknowledged Jose, "but from what I have heard he is stronger and smarter than a few months ago. It would seem that he meet someone who helped him more than Fairy Tail ever did." Gabrielle had a look of disgust at the mention of the Guild's name, as she had the same thoughts as her Master about them. "I know you might not think much of him, but if what I heard about him is right, he would be a great addition to our Guild. This mission non-question, I'm ordering you to do this, as I want him, and I want you to get him." Jose told her darkly.
"Fine Master I'll get him," Gabrielle informed her Master, "but you'll owe me one."
"I know dear, but I really want him." Jose told him.
"So where can I find him?" asked Gabrielle.
"At the moment I have our other branches looking for him, as he seemed to be on another mission right now." Jose explained to his subordinate, "Until we find him, I want you to go to Magnolia Town and find out what you can about him, past and present events to see what you can use to seduce and recruit to our guild."
"Ok Master, is there anything else I need to know, or you want me to do?" asked Gabrielle.
"No there isn't," Jose informed the Dragon Slayer, "get ready and head out once you are done."
And with that Gabrielle left to get ready for her new reason, whilst Jose seat back and thought about Natsu, wondering what happened to him over the last few months. He also thought about how to use him once he joined Phantom Lord. But little did he knew at the time, but sending Gabrielle to get the new Dragon Slayer, would not only lose his first Dragon Slayer, but would be the start of his own downfall.
To be Continued!
Author's Note - PLEASE READ TO THE END: Here ends Chapter 14 of The Dragon Overlord, and I want you to thank you all for reading and I hope you enjoyed the chapter. If you believe that some of the descriptions sound like they come the Fairy Tail Wiki, it's because they are. I'm awful when writing descriptions, so I often ask people on Facebook to help, or those I talk to on Skype, or talk on fanfiction.
Like before, I like to ask that when you review, you say why you love or like the story, or why you hate it, as it'll help me with writing this story better. I don't mind one liners, as I often do them myself when I can't think of anything to say about the story, but I do like to know why you love, like or hate it and would like a few lines to tell me why. So if possible, I would like to hear why you like or hate (or both) this story, and what you would like to happen next.
I'm still after ideas as to what you would like to see to happen next, anything can go, as I would like to hear your input. But at the moment, I mainly want ideas as to where Natsu could search for Lucy and what could happen in the towns. As I want a few more chapters before Natsu find her. So far I got how Natsu is going to meet up with Gabrielle, and will be seeing it over the next few chapters. But no idea as to how he'll meet up with Lucy, as it won't be the same as the comics and anime.
Now in the next few chapters, whilst he is looking for Lucy, I'm trying to have him meet up with Wendy and Bisca Mulan a.k.a Mulan Rouge. I have an idea how Natsu'll will meet up with Mulan a.k.a Mulan Rouge, which I'm thinking about doing so in the next chapter. But the problem is where he'll meet her, as I have no idea where. So I would like to ask for a original town, the name and the description as to what the town looks like, because as I said, I'm awful at descriptions.
After that I want a place to find Wendy and Carla, and as to the reason they are there and some kind of problem they were in. Afterwards, saving them from whatever problem they were in, I'm going to have Natsu and Happy take them back to their village. And I'm thinking about Happy taking Carla down a peg or two, so I would like a few ideas as to how that can happen. Want Happy to take Carla as his own over time.
For Natsu's girls, I'm going to try and turn them in such different ways as possible, breaking them in some way, twisting what they believe or twisting them in some way, and using magic on them. I don't want to use the same method too often, so I would like your thoughts as to how I can do so. The most important one is Wendy, as I'm planning to add her during Natsu's search for Lucy, but I want ideas as to how to split her from the village she comes from. Got a few ideas, but I would like your thoughts about it.
