Author's Note: Before we start this chapter, if you don't like chapters with a lot of detail in the story, or long backstories for a character or what is going on, than this story isn't for you. For me, detail and backstories to the main characters that'll be in the story is important. And whilst most of the details and backstory so far is known by most who follow Naruto, there's a few of my readers who haven't read them so you need to bare with me.

Now a few people have said that Banishment Jutsu is useless pointless, whilst I might agree with you, it was the only thing I could think of to get rid off Kazuo for a while. One of you say that Kazuo could get Naruto back by political means, the thing is how? He has no government, or people (those who are alive are around the world hiding) or allies right now, so no real political power at all to use.

Some might ask why did the Hidden Leaf Village need the fox so badly, when had gone through three wars and not once did they use the fox to win the wars? For me, whilst they went to war without them, it is a sign of power. They are one of the Great Five Nations, and without having one they would look weak, and so need one to show their strength or show as being weak.

Now as you read this, could you please think about this, I would like a few ideas for some elemental chakra control exercises. I'm after a few stages, beginners, advanced, expert and master, or something like that. I read in one story for wind chakra control exercise, they had started Naruto to split a leaf, cut a stone and so on, so that he gets better in wind chakra. And so I want a few of these exercises for the other elements.

I'm planning to give Naruko Earth, Lightning and Fire Release, whilst I'm planning to give Naruto, Wind, Earth and Water. And over time I'm planning for them to combine them to learn new skills. So I would like elemental chakra control exercise for each element as you can think of.

About those with an affinity could do more than what we seen with it, something along the lines of bending, like in the last airbender. As I find it strange that after so much training, they could do so little with it other than a few things. Why train so hard, if you only need hand signs to cast a jutsu? Learning your affinity, just shows you what elemental jutsu you are meant to be good at and that they would be more powerful than other elements. It made no real sense to do the training that Naruto did, at least to me.

So I was thinking that as you trained in your affinity, you learn to use your chakra and do more things and bend them to do things. Like if you have earth affinity, with training, you can use earth wall without a jutsu, same with fire, you can throw a fireball whenever you want without hand signs, just make it appear in your hand and throw it. But before I go through with it, I would like to hear your thoughts about it. Should I do it or not?

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Chapter Five.

Naruko Uzumaki - Part 1.

(Goodbye Land of Fire.)

20th of November 1900 - Land of Fire, Kaho Village:

It has been about a month later since the Kyūbi incident at the Hidden Leaf Village, we find Kazuo Uzumaki in a small village known as Kaho Village. The village was known for bandits and thieves living here, but Kazuo came here to think what to do from now on. He was in this village for two reason, first he knew that the Third Hokage would send people in search for him and his granddaughter, to keep track of them and this would be the last place they would think of looking for him. For now, he knew he had time to think about what to do. The other reason he was there, was that he had a few old allies here, who owed him a few favours. So he called them in to stay in the village for a while, and keep his granddaughter save.

But over the last month, Kazuo thoughts were slowly going down a darker path more than normal. Up 'til now, the only thing that kept him going was his family, and now another two of them had been taken from him, and only his granddaughter was left. But now, all he could think about was paying those who hurt him and his family.

It all started when three of the of the Great Five Elemental Nations, along with a few of the smaller villages helping them, destroyed his Clan and homeland. He even suspected someone in the Land of Fire, mainly someone in the Hidden Leaf Village, he suspected Danzō. He lost everything from that night, not only his Clan and homeland, but his wife and two of his children, and he wanted nothing more than take revenge on those who was responsible for it.

The only thing that stopped him from doing anything back than, was his daughter Kushina and his grandchild. He didn't want to leave her without a father, and then over time she got married to Minato and had Naruko and life was good for a while. But than last month, when his daughter was giving birth to his second grandchild Naruto. But that's when everything went to hell, his daughter was attacked by a masked man, who wanted to release Kyūbi from her. He was able to do this and controlled it.

He didn't know who it was, but he did know that it was someone with the Mangekyō Sharingan, as that was the only way to control a Tailed Beast. Now most would think that it was someone within the Uchiha Clan, as they were the only known Clan within the Elemental Nations that had the Sharingan. But he knew differently, as far as he knew no one in the Uchiha Clan had the evolved version of the Sharingan.

Not only that, but there was an Uchiha Clan outside of the Elemental Nations, one that moved out of the Elemental Nations when Madara Uchiha tried to destroy the Hidden Leaf Village all those years ago. They now go by some name, to hide their relations with the Uchiha Clan in the Elemental Nations, and don't use their Sharingan. Whilst unlikely, it was possible that one of them was behind the attack, he would have to look into that.

But with the attack of the Nine Tails, he lost almost everything, all he got left was Naruko. The damn Leaf Village now took almost everything that he had was taken from him, thanks to Minato and Hiruzen. Both of them for keeping him from his daughter and his new born grandson. All because they didn't want to use a Forbidden Jutsu to save his daughter, as it would kill someone. It wasn't like he was going to kill anyone healthy, but those who were dying from the attack, so that their death would have some meaning.

Not only that, but his asshole of son in law, told the Third Hokage to stop him from taking his grandson so that he couldn't take him away from the village. The reason for this was the sole reason so that one of the Great Five Hidden Villages didn't look weak to the rest of the Great Hidden Village, and to the rest of the Elemental Nations. As having a Tailed Beast was sign of power and respect, and it was something that those who have the Tailed Beasts would fight to keep them.

Whilst there might have been two great wars where the Tailed Beasts, or their containers Jinchūriki, could be used, they won't used out of fear. As Jinchūriki were so powerful, that it was decided they wouldn't use their full power unless they had to, like one of the other Jinchūriki used their powers first. As if they did, it could mean the end of their people, as a fully trained Jinchūriki could take out armies upon armies. So they were used for defence of their village, and was forbidden to use their Tailed Beast powers unless they were defending their village. Like when Killer Bee defend his village from Minato and enemy force but was limited to half his power.

In a way, a Jinchūriki was a deterrent to stop others from attacking them, like some kind of animal, waiting to be broken and tamed. Now normally he would go back in a few days once he regained his strength and show them the old rule in the old days before his homeland and Clan was destroyed: Don't Fuck With A Uzumaki.

But they got him when he was weak and used a Banishment Jutsu that he helped Minato to create, which later got classified as a Forbidden Jutsu. It was something he cursed himself for doing now, as Minato was able to design it so that not even he could undo. Not only would it make it impossible for him from re-entering the Village, but only the caster could undo it because each person chakra was different.

And this was why the Jutsu became a Forbidden Jutsu, as if anyone other than the caster removes the Jutsu, the person would die within six months to a year. The only reason why he couldn't do anything to help his grandson, was that he had no one to look after his grandchildren if he did, nor could trust anyone to get his grandson for him. So for now it would be better to leave him at the Hidden Leaf Village, and hope that the Third Hokage would protect Naruto. For now, all he could do was take care of his granddaughter, and train her.

That didn't mean that he wouldn't stop thinking about his grandson, oh no, the old Uzukage won't stand for this. No, he was a man who had lost everything, he homeland, his family, his Clan, and now his daughter and new born grandson. 'No more…' was his thought these days, he wasn't going to allow no one to take more from him, no he'll make those who took from him pay… no matter what.

But Kazuo knew that paying those who wronged him would take a while, as he needed to rebuild everything he lost, his allies and base of operations. But it would take time, but first he would need to wait until Naruko was older and well trained, before he could so that his granddaughter could protect herself. But once she was old enough, and she had become strong enough, he would have her help him rebuild the Uzumaki Clan.

They would find the remaining Uzumaki within the Elemental Nations, and then they would regain their island and rebuild their village and island. But this time, they would be more careful as to who'll know how to get onto the island, and those who want to hire them would be brought to the village by one of their ninja. Once Kazuo knew they had a safe place to stay, and people that could look after Naruto and Kushina, he would get them back. And whilst should he be able to get his Clan back together, Kazuo believed that it should be either he and his granddaughter should get them back. To show them that they really cared and give them the true reason why it took so long and answer any questions they might have.

But those were plans for the future, for now he had to look after the four year old Naruko, who was sleeping in her bed right now, something that Kazuo was happy about. It had been hard for the young girl over the last month, she lost her father, mother and her new born brother.

Kazuo felt somewhat awful, but he was going to use this to make her help him take revenge on those who hurt him and her. He knew it was wrong to use his granddaughter in such a way, but part of him, the dark part of him that has awoken, knew that it was needed. As he couldn't do this by himself, and it was something both he and Naruko needed, to have some closer to what happened and done to them. But he will make sure that she'll be happy, and treated will and go for nothing, also no one or nothing will hurt her or use her like he was doing.

As he thought about it, Kazuo realized that he and his granddaughter had to leave the Land of Fire. Whilst they were fine in Kaho for now, it would be only matter of time before the shinobi and kunoichi of the Hidden Leaf Village would find them. And in doing so, would keep an eye AKA spy on them, and as long as they were in the Land of Fire, they would have nowhere to fully hide.

As he looked into Naruko's room to make sure she was still asleep, Kazuo knew they would have to leave the Land. But at the same time, he knew that they couldn't go to far, as he wanted to keep an ear out about Naruto. He wanted to make sure that he was okay. As he watch his granddaughter sleep, he knew that he would have to look at moving to one of the other Lands close to Land of Fire.

As whilst it would mean the unless they had a job, the Leaf Ninja would have no jurisdiction to be in the other Lands. As it was highly frowned upon on for a ninja to enter another Land unless they had to. Not only that, but being close to Land of Fire, would make it easier for him to sneak into Land of Fire to check on his grandson - as he knew a few people who owed him favours.

He had a few places in mind for where he and Naruko could go to. These places Kazuo believed that no one in the Hidden Leaf Village would think of looking for there, as they had Hidden Villages that helped to destroy his homeland and Clan. So he hoped the Leaf Ninja wouldn't suspect him of all people to go there. And they better pray that they should never they find him, as it might be the last thing that they might ever do. Whilst they might not done anything to them, the village did. And he'll make the Village pay, and nothing and no one will get in his way, he'll make the Leaf Village hurt as it hurt him. The only person who'll not get hurt should they find him was Naruto.

For now Kazuo to prepare to leave the Land of Fire, and had little time to do so. As within the next few weeks, he and Naruko will no longer be there.

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31st of December 1900 - Land of Fire, Kaho Village:

It has been over a month since Kazuo decided to leave Land of Fire, and travel to find a place to call home. When he told Naruko that they were leaving, she wasn't happy about it, as it would mean leaving her mother and new born brother. But he tried to explain that he was doing this for them, so that they could get stronger and able to rescue their family later on. Whilst Naruko didn't like it, she begrudgingly agreed, seeing she wanted to help and protect her family. But over the last month, she argued with her grandfather in staying in Land of Fire, but with no luck.

Now whilst her grandfather was making plans to move from Land of Fire, he left her with a few people whilst away. He told Naruko that he didn't want to leave her alone, but to find the right place without been caught, he had to go alone. Those who looked after was bandits, where taught her how to pick locks and pickpockets, skills they thought would be useful in the future. Not only did she learn about pick locks and pickpockets, but the bandit taught her about how to weapon knowledge and how to maintain them, how to cover tracks, hunting animals, how to make fires and how to tracking animals and people.

At the same time, apart for looking for somewhere to stay, he was getting new identity for the two of them. As going by the names they had, would make it easier for them to be found. Kazuo knew a few people who could give him fake paperwork for their new identities, Kazuo was now going to go by Masato Kyūshū and Naruto would now be called Akane Kyūshū.

Now it was Monday after now, the day before the new year, and Kazuo and Naruko was saying goodbye to those who helped during the last two months. But as they were leaving, Kazuo looked down at Naruko who was crying and said, "Now remember Naruko, from now on I'm Masato Kyūshū, and you are my granddaughter Akane Kyūshū. We can't use our real names for a while, so to make it harder for the ninja in this Land to find us."

"I understand grandfather," said a sobbing Naruko, before asking, "are you sure we can't stay here? We can hide and use the new names here."

"We've been through this dear," Kazuo told his granddaughter as he knelt down and hugged her, "we can't risk it. They won't want us trying to get your mother and brother and might stop us from doing so somehow. So it would be better if we leave Land of Fire and train you up, and get allies to help us before we get your mother and brother."

"I know, I just wished we didn't have to." sobbed the young girl.

"So I dear, so do I." Kazuo admitted, as he hugged his granddaughter once more, before he pulled back and said, "Listen dear, we have to leave now and one day when you are strong enough and we have a few more allies, we'll return and get your mother and brother."

"Okay grandfather." Naurko said sadly as she let one last sob, before picking her her things as the two of them left the village.

To be Continued!

Author's Note - PLEASE READ TO THE END: Here ends the next chapter of The Ninja Overlord, I hope you enjoyed the chapter and that you'll take a few minutes to leave some feedback to what you thought of it. I'm hoping that there'll be only one or two more chapters, three at most if I'm unlucky, about Naruko before I start writing about Naruto.

I am after ideas for pranks that Naruto could pull on the Hidden Leaf Village, for the way that they treated him. Not only would I would like ideas for the pranks, but I would like you to tell me how they would be pulled off. I ask because whilst I love to write, the one thing I'm awful at is description, I try and keep it to the basics. So when pulling of a prank, or more advance, I ask for help.

As I told you in the last chapter, I'm somewhat bashing the villagers and ninja in the Hidden Leaf Village, not really bashing but highlighting on their worse qualities more. In the last chapter I also said I'll be going to bash three possible four people that more than the others, but in the following chapters I'll be giving you my reasons why I'm doing so. In the last chapter, I give you my reasons why I was planning to print the Third Hokage in a bad light, if you haven't read it please go back and do and let me know what you think, in this chapter it'll be Kakashi. (Remember, they aren't going to become bad guy or evil, just their worse qualities are going to be highlighted more.)

First off he's the worse sensei in the show, I don't care what you think, the truth is he was the worst. As he was always late, even for missions. And from what we have seen, he didn't even teach Naruto and Co anything useful unless their lives were at risk.

Now for him being late, I believe it was stated that the reason for this was that he lost his friends at a young age and he never got over it. I'm sorry, but that's the worst excuse ever, I have to say he has to grow some balls and get over it. First off it has been YEARS since the death of his friends, and yet he hasn't gotten over it.

I know what you're going to say, for some people, they can never get ever what happened. But two things, first they are in a lifestyle that gives them a short lifespan if you're unlucky, and that you could die at any time if a mission goes wrong. So death is expected at any time, especially on a high risk mission. If he couldn't deal with that, Kakashi shouldn't have become a ninja in the first place.

Second, going by the wiki about Naruto, it has been nearly twenty years since his friend's death, and he still hasn't gotten over it. Sure he might not get over it, and may never do, but I don't think most people, or I hope not, would allow it affect their lives as Kakashi allow it to. I would hope that when person has a job to do, they would do it properly, be on time and do what is needed of them and when done grieve in their own time. Because of what happened to him in the past, Kakashi goes on more about teamwork and trusting each other, than train his students.

Now some would say that being a Jōnin sensei isn't a job of teaching jutsu, but to instruct the genin in the ninja way, the behaviour of a ninja, teach them principles, teamwork, how to actually accomplish all sorts of ninja missions, etc. So who's job is it to teach them new jutsu? Sure part of it is down to the students, but it is also down to the Jōnin sensei, as where else would the students learn things?

To me, a Jōnin sensei is there to teach them how to fight better and teach their students new jutsu that could help them in missions and battles. Not for the student to be searching for someone else to teach them. Why should they when they got a Jōnin sensei who could help them?

Now Kakashi knew that Naruto's father was Minato, but yet before the time skip he done NOTHING to train him. All he did in the show was give Naruto and his team missions, and only taught them walking up a tree and teamwork. Which many of you might think that's enough, as that's what's being a ninja meant to be. What about if you have one on one battles, how does teamwork and walking up a tree help them than? Naruto got lucky because of his out of the box thinking, and the foxes chakra. If it wasn't for Naruto or the emo Sasuke, or someone else, Sakura would have ended up dead because Kakashi didn't train them.

Not only that, he didn't train Sakura, nor help Naruto when he asked for training, he passed Naruto off to someone else. Now before you go on about Ebisu, neither him or Naruto liked each other and so I don't think that Naruto would learnt anything.

Ebisu thinks that Naruto is a brat, and lossless, and so wouldn't try hard to teach Naruto anything. Naruto thought that Ebisu was a pervert and didn't think he could teach him anything, not only that, but he didn't respect him. So Naruto wouldn't have listened to Ebisu that much. Some say that, it doesn't matter that during the Chūnin Exams, seeing that Jiraiya took over Naruto's training everything was fine. But the thing is, Kakashi didn't know that Jiraiya was around, and so left everything down to Ebisu. And Jiraiya only went to Kakashi AFTER Naruto found him, if that wasn't the case, Naruto would have left with Ebisu and might not learn much.

And talking about the Chūnin Exams, why place them in it in the first place? He gave no real training, that we seen, that would allow them to become a Chūnin, like how to gather information, last a few days in wild without much items, or are to lead a team and whatever one can think of. Kakashi knew what the exams were looking for, but yet he done nothing to train them in the areas Team Seven would need to pass the exams. In fact, none of the teachers seemed to do so, at least what we have seen, but could have.

Not only that, but Kakashi handed Naruto over to Ebisu because Naruto needed a lot of work on the basics. They make it as if Kakashi cared for Naruto, but in my option he didn't. As if he did, knowing that Naruto needed to know the basics, he would have taught him the basics long time ago instead of handing Naruto to Ebisu learn them. All they done so far was going on missions, and no real training.

As it had been a few months before the Chūnin Exams, and from what we can tell only had eight missions. So if that's the case, what were they doing in their spare time? If it was training, then how come he was still so bad? If it was time, he knew the Shadow Clone Jutsu and so could have used that to train him. And talking about the Shadow Clone Jutsu, Kakashi KNEW about the secret about the clones giving their user their memories. So he could train Naruto with that, but didn't. (Although I believe that the Shadow Clone memory was a last second plot device to learn what Kakashi had to teach him, otherwise why not bring it in earlier. They didn't even give a good reason why Naruto didn't learn about it sooner.)

Now some think this is ok, and that Kakashi didn't exactly play favs. He only gave training to Sasuke and Naruto were facing great danger, Naruto with Akatsuki and Sasuke with Gaara. I call bull shit. He should have taught them all something, no matter what, not let others do it for him. Naruto with Jiraiya and Sakura with Tsunade.

Some might say that Kakashi did focus on Sasuke a bit more because of the Cursed Seal, and he was facing Gaara and so had to teach him not to rely on the Cursed Seal. But yet Naruto was facing Neji, who was the rookie of the year from the year before and more skilled than Naruto, so Naruto needed help from Kakashi too. Not only that, but some would say that Kakashi could offer the emo more, as they had the same nature, and both had the Sharingan. But during this time, the fool taught Sasuke a deadly power, something that he shouldn't seeing that Sasuke has a broken mind who only wants revenge.

Instead, he should have given Sasuke help to pull him away from the path of revenge. The only time he helps Naruto is after the time skip, and only because there was no other option, as the Akatsuki was after the Nine Tails and the village couldn't allow Naruto to be taken. During which time, he forgets the others in his team.

Now the way I see it, he could be more like Guy, who whilst trained Rock Lee more than the others, did so in their own time. Guy would train his team together during the day when they won't on missions, and during their free time train Rock Lee. Something Kakashi could have done. Not only that, but Kakashi was able to use the advanced Shadow Clones, so he could have used them whilst he trained Sasuke. Sure he couldn't do as many as Naruto, but could make enough that he could have used it to teach the other two.