Ohirume: Before we start, there's something I can't help but talk about.
As of 03/20/2020, "Pokémon Trix: Tales of Soot and Ash" is officially a part of Royal-Canadian-Flame's Community 'Ash ketchum is a pokemon!' and I literally could not be more grateful and excited.
And I don't even mean for the increased publicity that this may bring the story.
Seishin: Although, that is a nice perk. ;)
Ohirume: *chuckles with an eye roll* Yeah, yeah.
I've wanted to have Trix in a community for a long time. I even thought about creating a "Pokémon x Ben 10" or an "Omnitrix in another world" community just to make it happen. *rubs back of head nervously* Although, I thought that seemed a little desperate. *sweat drops* That and I have no idea how to do that or what kind of commitment founding a community will require.
To whoever on the staff included Pokémon Trix (I'm assuming that's how that works), if you're reading this, I cannot thank you enough for including my story. 'Ash ketchum is a pokemon!' is even one of my favorite Pokémon communities and has introduced me to so many stories over the years.
This feels like a huge milestone and I literally couldn't be happier about it.
Thank you SO much!
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From Johnathen Youngs (Trix chapter 42):
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Omega: Oh. That makes a little more sense.
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Ohirume: *blinks in surprise* Gotta admit, that's a new angle.
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What do you mean huh Ohirume
Ohirume: *flinches and waves hands defensively* No no no no no! I didn't mean it like that!
*nervous chuckle while scratching cheek* I- I just haven't really seen that concept put into effect. Mostly because, I don't really look up stories like that. *bows* I really meant no disrespect.
Omega: If you were referring to me, I just had no ******* idea who Anna and Strawberry were.
Your parenthesis explanation at the end helped A LOT.
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Anywho thanks for answering my questions
Yugo: You're welcome.
if you want to you can include my ocs in your story
Ohirume: I'm uh- not too sure about that. It's nothing against you! I just- I think you know your characters better than I do.
*Sweat drops and chuckles nervously* If I suddenly took them, I'd probably mess up their personalities like crazy.
Seishin: Still, we'd be happy to 'chat' with them in these responses.
OR in a chain of private messages. :D
Omega: The latter, of which, you would need an account for.
as for your questions
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Chuggaaconroy is a youtuber who's done plenty of Pokémon let's plays as well as others I recommend looking him up and watching his video all though best way is with head phones all the way up and have them bleed from his screaming
Seishin: o_o Noted.
he once in Pokémon emerald caught a groudon in a ness ball
Illavera: Ness ball?! There's a pokéball named after main character of Earthbound?!
Ohirume: I think that was just autocorrect being a glitch. Literally.
Faux: *sweat drops* Yeah. I think they meant to put Nest Ball. It works well against Pokémon that don't have that much experience.
Illavera: … Oh. *nervous chuckle* Sorry.
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Pokesweets are alternate versions of designed as sweet treats and with new typing and attacks for example bulbasaur is a brownie charmer is a strawberry and squirtle is a pie I also recommended looking it up
Seishin: :) Okay, that sounds like fun! Maybe I can use some of those on my League Team. What do you say, Rob?
Ohirume: I say … It's already on the list.
Seishin: WOO!
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I do hope you continue I find this story enjoyable and fun
Ohirume: Oh, I am definitely continuing.
though I do hope your characters don't Interrupt it too much nothing against them just it can make a story hard to read sometimes
Seishin: Awww. :(
Omega: *raised brow* Wait. When you say 'interrupt,' do you mean the thing where Yukiro literally jumps into a chapter? Or our mid-chapter chats?
Yugo: I'm gonna guess both.
Seishin: :I
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Deadpool: please continue
Seishin: ;P Can do DP!
Pinkie pie: you guys are amazing
Omega: *deadpanned* How people can say that non-sarcastically is still beyond me.
Ohirume: *glares at Omega* Will you give it a rest already?!
Anna: we really enjoy it
Gem: Thanks Anna!
Strawberry: you deserve a tv tropes page or a wiki
Ohirume: I actually have been considering that. Still, I suck at art.
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I do hope to see more and could the aliem be a vreedle or is it mabey eon species cant wait to find out
Seishin: *game show announcer voice* Not a bad GoGo, JoYo! But, I'm afraid that's incorrect!
Ohirume: Still, those are pretty good guesses.
Yugo: Decagon Vreedle -the canon vreedle form in Ben Tennyson Prime's Omnitrix- does match the hint we gave in the last comment response. It was never used and has been verified to exist.
Seishin: It was given the official name by Derrick James Wyatt; Omniverse's art director.
Yugo: However, Ash did say he used the form before it was deleted. I think he would have noticed the gray skin and lack of nose.
Ohirume: Chronians -Eon's retconned species- could literally be one decision change away from being correct. They perfectly resemble humans -namely at a younger age-, did exist in the "Race Against Time" Omnitrix, and has a more than fair chance of being included in the story on account of the multiverse concept.
But I can neither guarantee, nor deny, that I'll include chronians in the story. I'll think it over.
Omega: Also, there is one problem. But, not with your guesses.
Revealing the deleted form in the story won't be as easy as you may think.
It's long gone and the only person who would know what the form was would have to be someone who fully knows what the Omnitrix is and who knows that the 'non-Pokémon' are aliens from another dimension. In other words, nobody from Trix's Pokémon world.
Ohirume: Still, it won't be impossible. Just … near impossible without pulling a Yukiro-level Deus Ex Machina.
Seishin: *GIR voice* Yaaaaaaaaay!
Omega: No, freak. That's bad.
Seishin: *GIR voice; pouting* Awwwwwwww.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 42):
I'm Gonna guess it's Ash's Human form isn't it.
Klipper
Seishin: *game show announcer voice* OOO! So sorry, Klipper the ripper! That's strike two of … infinity. There's no limit to how many times you're allowed to guess.
Omega: *glances at Seishin; sweat dropping* Uh … right.
Yugo: While human DNA has been verified to be in the Omnitrix -or more specifically the Argitrix-, it's never been verified that an Omnitrix user can access their own birth species.
Ohirume: Still, you're close.
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From Supertoe (Trix chapter 42):
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Was that an Austin Powers reference?
Seishin: Probably, although we have no idea what you're referring to. :P
Ohirume: To clarify, I haven't actually seen any Austin Powers movies.
Mizuro: *horrified gasp*
Ohirume: I know. I know.
Still, I have looked up scenes on YouTube. Freaking Hilarious.
Yugo: If you meant the 'Ten Billion percent' thing, that was meant to be a Dr. Stone reference.
Omega: The Virtualization Chambers were Code Lyoko.
Seishin: Franz's personality – nothing specific. Rob was just havin' fun. :)
*Over a freaking month later*
Ohirume: Austin Powers update - I found the movies on Netflix and already watched them all.
Seishin: WOO! Ill-tempered, mutated Sea Bass!
Ohirume: *snickers* Yeah. I have to admit, they're even better than I expected. But I did not expect that many adult jokes … granted, I didn't check the rating before watching.
I also didn't expect Dr. Evil to be that hilariously inept as a villain.
Omega: Speaking of, Scott Evil is by far my favorite character.
Mizuro: Really?
Omega: Well duh. He's a smart aleck, sarcastic, ******* who condescendingly points out holes in everything Evil does and regularly insults him. Why would I not like him?
Seishin: What about in the last movie? (· ᴗ·)
Omega: *glares at Seishin* Shut up.
Also, should probably catch Misty and Brock while theyre transformed so someone else doesn't.
Omega: Like we told GoldenGirlGalaxy, it's on the list.
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From DemonicCat88 (Trix chapter 42):
Keep me updated on a new chapter it's amazing and I love that you made it a crossover
Ohirume: Thank you.
Omega: Still, not much of a crossover. All Ohi-rumor did was take an Omnitrix, throw it onto an Ash Ketchum's wrist, and give him a dog for a daughter. Ben Tennyson's nowhere to be seen.
Ohirume: *glares at Omega* HEY! It's still enough of a crossover to be appropriately found on the "Pokémon + Ben 10 crossovers" page! And I am far from the first person to do the 'someone in another world gets the watch' concept!
*perks up and blinks in surprise* Wait, Ohi-rumor?
Omega: It's not easy to turn your username into a K-rated insult.
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From Guest (Trix chapter 5):
I actually liked the part Yukiro explained about the puppet trick explains what the heck Soot was doing and what it was.
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Klipper
Seishin: *Looks at Ohirume; sneering* HA!
Ohirume: *sigh*
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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 43):
Good chap
Ohirume: Thank-
D.A. Kermit: Lit.
D.A. Mr. Perfect Cell: **** it Kermit!
Ohirume: … Do we have permission to use them?
Seishin: Not even a little.
Ohirume: Crag. DevilArtemis, if you're reading this -for some reason- I'm sorry and hope that this sentence acts as a decent enough disclaimer.
… Oh. And sorry for using the Zarbon thing back in the ALPN chapter.
D.A./Kaggyfilms Shallot: HA HA I'M A RIPOFF!
D.A. Mr. Perfect Cell/The Incredible Bug Daddy: *8-bit glass* Uh ha h- *record scratch* Wait wha?! Did you seriously use that stupid ******* monster name that that bald guy gave me?!
Seishin: *Masaaki Yuasa's "Mind Game" 'kami' voice* YEEEESSSS! :D
D.A. Mr. Perfect Cell: *deadpanned* … That's it. We're gone. Come on guys. Hey, Green guy!
D.A. Kermit: Yeah, Cell?
Omega: *sweat drops* I think he meant me, Frogger. *snap* *sci-fi portal sound*
Seishin: *waves* Bye Cell! Say hi to Ugandan Knuckles whose memory I wiped of that promise he made to you to leave you alone after you freed him from Minecraft and who I told where the new arena was!
D.A. Mr. Perfect Cell: WAIT WHAT?!
D.A. Ugandan Knuckles: E-
Ohirume: NO NO NO NO! We are not doing that!
D.A. Ugandan Knuckles: Aww … Can I do tha otha thing?
Ohirume: Ugh. Fine. It's cringy, but there's nothing inherently wrong with it.
D.A. Ugandan Knuckles: Thank you my brudda! *click* Do you know de way?
D.A. Mr. Perfect Cell:
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*Insert one of the D. Artemis's outro songs*
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Ohirume: *sigh* Yeah. I typed all of that out before "Perfect Cell Vs Budget Increase Frieza" was posted.
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Ohirume: One last thing. Pretty sure Artemis's content is rated R, if not just a smidge below.
Omega: … Did you just say 'smidge?'
Ohirume: Oh, give it a rest.
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From Wizzer96 (Trix chapter 43):
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Me:*excitee that a new chapter is up*
Also me:*spits drink all over during the kissing part* "oh well, at least it makes some sens-" *read the part were Soot ******* swallow the bags* "WHAT THE ####"
Seishin: HA!
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this was my reaction from these precise moments, as for the rest im really excited for the second part of the pikachu tribe.
Though i have some question regarding the... Kissing conseguences: since kissing is such a big action, as you say equal to mating, this would mean that a kiss on the cheek is basically saying you love him/her, if that's so, what about latias of pokemon heroes...oh i see, you evil genius, so you're preparing the ingredients for adding latias on the journey.
Laura: I don't think that'll happen. At least, not to that degree.
Faux: Yeah. Laura and I already have Altoshipping covered.
Ohirume: In all seriousness, the concept is entirely biological. Also, I'm not really sure a 'kiss on the cheek' is a thing for Pokémon … that haven't picked up the trait from humans.
They lick. They're animals.
Yugo: Also, we spoiled the mating concept back in "Ch10: Bulbasaur."
Seishin: Yeah. *wicked smirk* The chapter where Pidgeotto tried to kiss Ash's unconscious Braviary form.
And remember this little threat that Trix gave Surge's raichu back in the Vermillion chapter? *quite fury Ash voice* "If you ever talk about my little girl like that again, I'll mangle your reproductive esophagus to the point that all of your descendants will be rotom."
Also when i read the pregnant by kissing part i immediately imagined the anime "if you look at me, i might get pregnant"... I'd say they're pretty closely related.
Ohirume: *blinks in surprise* There's actually an anime with that premise?
Should we add a pokemon version of the skyrim guards? Like "i used to adventure around, like you, then i took a stone edge on the knee" xD
Ohirume: … I, uh, never got into Skyrim.
I mean, I think I've heard the 'arrow to the knee' thing before and I definitely know Fus Ro Dah. But that's it. Sorry.
Mizuro: *glares at Ohirume* Have you no shame?
Ohirume: *glares back at Mizuro* Hey, don't be a hypocrite! If I don't know about it, that means you don't know about it either! You're a figment!
Seishin: *wearing Dragonborn helmet backwards* Just goes to show how crazy you are. Looks at readers Doesn't it? … Oh.
Rob, you forgot the asterisks for the action descriptor.
*Looks at readers* Better. Doesn't it?
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From Johnathen Youngs (Trix chapter 43):
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Not a bad GoGo, JoYo uh what?
Seishin: It's a JoJo's Bizarre Adventure reference. :D
Y'know- JoYo; Johnathen Youngs. GoGo; 'not a bad go'.
Does, uh- does that make sense? ( ·_·')
Omega: To clarify, it was not an insult. It was just Seishin giving a weird and obscure nickname. And him being an idiot as usual.
Seishin: ( -_-') Hey.
So only azimuth knows or is it azimuth cant wait to find it but I wonder what the form is oh well cant wait to find out it's tough you guys did do a good job and making it unknown but at the same time giving hints
Ohirume: Thank you.
Seishin: Although, as you've likely already seen, the form will have been revealed to be Osmosian. Not in the story, but by someone guessing it right.
ˉ\_(ツ)_/ˉ Sorry.
Omega: And while Azmuth would undoubtedly know that, he's still not the only candidate.
though our of curiosity could ash meet ben 10 and if so witch version cant wait
Ohirume: I have been considering something like but I'm not sure how to implement it without messing up the story … although, spin-offs are always a thing.
I am not throwing Ben in Trix's world and letting him become a trainer because the concept of "Someone gets Isekai-ed into Pokémon and suddenly decides to become a trainer" has been played out like Yvel. And not just for Ben 10.
But I have been imagining Ash in a B10 world like a non-reincarnation Isekai.
As for which version- well… I've thought of a few things for each version.
Okay, more than a few:
*Classic 10-year-old (Original):
This Ben would probably be really interested in Ash's non-alien forms and even see him as a kind-of-mentor. Well … more like a maybe on the 'mentor' thing.
There'd obviously be some rough patches/starts involving arguments about what from to use and when and a touch of jealousy from Ben about Ash's different forms, Power Integration, and his watch's extra mode(s) and feature(s).
But I like to imagine it playing along decently as a whole.
*Classic 15+ (Alien Force/Ultimate/Omniverse):
This Ben would likely see Ash as a trustworthy partner like in that crossover with Generator Rex. After seeing Ash in action, that is.
If it's in Force/Ultimate, the starting interaction would involve Ben attacking Ash by thinking he's Albedo who he thought made another Omnitrix and got stuck in a different human form. Why? Because, no canon version of Ben is a full-blown genius who would figure out how far-fetched that idea is. At least … not immediately.
If it's in Omniverse, it be a lot easier for him to understand after he met Ben 23 and/or went through that multiverse nonsense.
Plus, if it's after Ben 10: Ultimate Alien episode 1 "Fame," there would be a recurring or continuous gimmick of Ash struggling with the idea of the entire pla- galaxy knowing about the Omnitrix and him being uncomfortable with the fame that comes with everyone knowing. In this situation, Tennyson would be more than happy to help Ash by drawing the paparazzi's attention.
*Reboot(any season past the first):
*annoyed sigh* This Ben would be ridiculously jealous that Ash has had his watch for so much longer and has Power Integration.
He would definitely try to one-up Ash at every turn; even during attacks. He'd also annoy Ash to no end from his immature antics, 'civilian endangering' one-up attempts, bragging about having the 'more advance(A.K.A. evolved)' Omnitrix, and overall selfishness.
Reboot would also question why the Yvel Ash would make the Change Lenses. It'd be a mindset of 'why would you let someone else use your Omnitrix. It's YOURS.'
… *flinch* Holy ****, Reboot Ben is a more immature, more selfish, and dumber Gen 1 Gary.
Mizuro: *eyes widened in shock* Oh ****.
Ohirume: Although, I have to admit, Reboot Gwen would probably get along really well with Trix and be ecstatic about the Lenses. Seeing as it's been four seasons and she doesn't have a viable grasp on magic/mana manipulation like the classic.
They'd also get along due to the fact that Ash is actually smart and will hear what she has to say during battle. Something that usually takes five attempts for Reboot Ben to do for the rest of that one episode.
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Ohirume: You also can't help but wonder how Classic 10yr old or Reboot would react to Soot.
I'm not including 15+ in that reactiong because of the 2nd season Alien Force episode "Save The Last Dance."
also I recommend you guys read 5 years later by kuro the artist basically it is a crossover with danny phantom and ben 10 I recommend you check it out
Yugo: We have heard of that.
Ohirume: Yeah. It's pretty good.
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From RT89 (Trix chapter 43):
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Awesome first part. Upped my curiosity factor for soots middle name by a thousand.
Ohirume: *snickers* Glad you're excited.
Omega: *glances at Ohirume; sweat dropping* You revealed the mutt's middle name in the third Tribe chapter.
Ohirume: *pouts*
Guess to the form: Anaditte, skinned so Adh wouldn't freak and disperse. Can't wait for more.
Seishin: *game show announcer voice* Ooo Hoo Hoo! Not a bad guess Eighty-Nine-er! But, I'm afraid that's incorrect!
Yugo: While the idea of a skin-on Anodite form in the Omnitrix is both unique and fits the clues we gave, I'm afraid there is one minor flaw.
Anodite's don't have DNA. Just, something analogous to genetic material. Technically, that species can't exist in the Omnitrix.
This could be argued with the concept of the multiverse, but I'm sorry to say that Rob plans to keep 'no DNA' concept for this story.
Ohirume: Sorry. Still, I like the creativity in this one.
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From RT89 (Random-ish chapter 5):
so many thoughts I had to send a pm
Omega: … *looks down at next response* Yup.
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Ohirume: For future refence, I will ONLY post private messages in comment responses IF permission is given by the person who sent it.
If you wish for the message to remain private, IT WILL REMAIN PRIVATE.
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From RT89 (Private Message):
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(Permission was given by RT to put this here)
Interested in what you found, Percy Jackson Omega, but I was referring to Percy Weasley from Harry Potter; I mainly stick to HP, with a side of other interests.
Omega: I'm not-
Seishin: Hey Omega, I'm pretty sure they mean in terms of personality. Y'know, prudish, orderly, and his wand up you-know-what. *snickers* Y'know, *looks at readers with a smirk* Like an opposite to me. *Winks*
Omega: *blinks in surprise* That's what they mean? *shrugs* Then, okay yeah. That sounds about right.
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Professor Paradox idea; you forged a bridge to the B10 verse by making this crossover, thereby allowing Paradox a new path to be interested in, if he's constantly walking a trans-temporal quantum scape do you really think he wont when something new occurs.
Ohirume: You are ten-billion percent correct and we recently put together some ideas for Paradox.
Yugo: As for when. Well, uh … let's just say, patience is a virtue.
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I got my brother involved with guessing the alien; he thinks osmosian, like Kevin and Aggregor, or the parent species of Michael Morningstar/DarkStar, I cant seem to find the official name.
Yukiro: *Game show announcer voice* Ring a ding ding ding! We haaaaaave a winner!
Ohirume: Well, done RT's brother. The correct answer was Osmosian.
Yugo: The Osmosian species was actually handpicked to be the Power Integration trigger. Their ability to absorb DNA and abilities is exactly why Power Integration does what it does.
Humanoid appearance, verified to exist in the Omnitrix -by Dwayne McDuffie again-, never even used by an 'alien watch' user, and has only been seen in the form of living specimens. Both good (Kevin) and bad (Kevin and aggregor).
Omega: Also, there's a reason you couldn't find Morningstar's parent species. They were never revealed nor verified to be any kind of siphon species. Or even aliens for that matter.
Michael's a mutant human. Like Cooper, Zombozo, and the circus freaks.
*shrug* Still, it's possible that some alien species was used to modify or give him his powers. But that's just speculation. We have no idea and may possibly never get a bona fide answer.
So, that wasn't a bad guess.
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Just read response to reviews, chapter 5, and figured this was easier and cleaner. By the way, I just had to take painkillers for my ribs, absolutely bloody hilarious.
Seishin: HAH! lol.
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From Lycoan wolf entity (Trix chapter 43):
This has been running through my head for a while now, I know it's a stretch; but I'm guessing that deleted "human" form is something akin to Ultimate Ben from Ultimate Alien, and the shock caused the Omnitrix to glitch so badly that the form became permanently merged with Ash's DNA somewhat like a reverse of how the Galvanic Mechamorph DNA from the reboot Omnitrix had to use some of reboot Ben's DNA to become Glitch causing Power Integration to become a thing for Ash. The reason I thought of this was because it was never actually confirmed whether or not Ultimate Ben's Omnitrix was actually an Omnitrix or a recalibrated Ultimatrix that took on the form of it's predecessor after it's own recalibration. At least, as far as I know it was never confirmed...
Seishin: … … 0-0 … … I … I am more speechless than Steve Harvey was when that guy screamed Nekkid Grammaw on Family Feud … and got it right.
Yugo: *wide eyed shock* Yeah. No kidding.
*shakes off shock* Still, sorry Lycoan. But that's incorrect. Also, GoldenGirlGalaxy guessed the Ultimate Ben 10K thing back on February 2nd.
Ohirume: Yeah. But, THIS- This is very impressive. If I were looking for ideas for the Integration trigger based on creativity and logical, thought out complexity, you would win by a ******* landslide.
Omega: Also, the Ultimate Ben thing was actually an alternate future where Ben kept the Ultimatrix. Main/Classic Continuity B10K is the one with the average Omnitrix followed by the Biomnitrix.
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From Reclusive Dork (Trix chapter 43):
it's like Ultimate Ben, Isn't it. The human form, modified to hold select powers of the different forms in the watch. in other words, Power inheritance ash.
Seishin: *game show announcer voice* So sorry, Reclusia! That is incorrect!
Yugo: Keep in mind it's an Omnitrix. Not an Ultimatrix.
Ohirume: I really didn't except Ultimate Human to be this common of a guess.
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From Reclusive Dork (Trix chapter 44):
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well... I feel kinda dumb. Osmosian seems like it should be an obvious guess, considering how often Kevin shows up. You must be laughing like a lunatic that it took this long for anyone to guess correctly.
Ohirume: *waves hands with a kind smile* Hey, don't worry. I didn't exactly try to make it easy.
Omega: Yeah. Truth is Rob chose that Omnitrix symbol placement for the Osmosian form to throw people off.
Seishin: ;P
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that said, i keep wondering- is this the prototype omnitrix(the white and black one) the complete omnitrix(from alien force) or is it that new, snazzy one from Omniverse?
Ohirume: Original – black and white variant. But it's on Ash's right wrist.
Omega: Also, the 'prototype' and 'complete' variants you mentioned are the same Omnitrix … not including the Ultimatrix.
The early Alien Force Omnitrix is what the first-era watch literally evolved into when Ben put it back on at the start of that series.
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From Reclusive Dork (Trix chapter 1):
Also, I dunno if you were trying to be an ass, Seishin, But I'm a dude. A big, fat, hairy bear of a dude. A big, fat, Hairy bear with Bipolar.
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HEEYYY!
Seishin: :( I wasn't trying to be mean. I was doing a nickname based on Crusadia Reclusia. They're a Yu-Gi-Oh card.
Omega: Crusadia Reclusia. Level 3, FIRE Spellcaster, Effect Monster. 400 ATK. 2000 DEF.
They have a hard once per turn effect to Inherent Special Summon themself (in Defense Mode) to your Zone a Link Monster Points to.
As another hard once per turn, if Normal or Special Summoned to a Link Arrow, they can COST:[target 1 "Crusadia" card you control -themself included- and 1 card the opponent controls] and destroy them both.
The fact that Reclusia's name sounds feminine is just a coincidence.
Ohirume: Yeah. Sorry. I didn't think that through.
Mizuro: … wait. Is Crusadia Reclusia a girl?
Nuevo: *sweat drop* Gary, it's a card.
Mizuro: *glares at Nuevo* Stay out of this, Paul.
Seishin: (-_-) Guys, obviously they're a- (·_·) (._. ) ( ·_·) Uh… ,':| Is Crusadia Reclusia a girl?
Omega: *pulls out and holds up card in question and squints* No distinctively feminine or masculine features. Face is covered by the hat. *deadpans* Yeah, I got nothin'.
Yugo: OH! What about Crusadia Magius?! They're Reclusia's older form, right?!
Omega: Oh yeah. *Puts away Reclusia and pulls out Magius* They should be able to clear this- And faceplate.
Mizuro: What?
Omega: *holds out card; revealing picture* They're wearing a faceplate.
Ohirume: *deadpanned* Well, crag.
*sad smile* Sorry for the misunderstanding Reclusive.
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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 44):
Good chap
Ohirume: Thank y-
Seishin: Hey everyone! Get in here! I've got someone I want you to meet!
*Everyone else walks in; not at all at the same time*
Seishin: *grabs something off 'screen' and drags them in* Everyone! Allow me to introduce Futurama's Malfunctioning Eddie!
Malfunctioning Eddie: *raises hand* hi.
Mizuro: *smiles* Oh, the car dealer. *smile disappears and eyes widen in shock* Yup! I'm gone! *runs out of room*
Nuevo: *watches as Mizuro leaves and sweat drops* Should we be worried?
Seishin: Not so long as we don't surprise Eddie.
Malfunctioning Eddie: *walks up to and holds out hand to Omega* Pleased to meet you.
Omega: *stares at hand; blank expression* *Looks Eddie in the eye* Team Fortress 3 has been announced.
Malfunctioning Eddie:
— WWW— — — — — —WWWWWW— — — — — —WWW — — — HHH— — — —HHH- — — — —AAAAAAA — — —TTTTTTTTTTTTT
— -WWW— — — — —WWW—WWW— — — — —WWW- — — — —HHH— — — —HHH- — — — -AAA — AAA— — — — —TTTTT
— —WWW— — — —WWW— —WWW— — — —WWW— — — — — HHHHHHHHHHHH- — — —AAA— — -AAA— — — — -TTTTT
— — WWW— — —WWW— — —WWW— — —WWW- — — — — — HHHHHHHHHHHH- — — -AAAAAAAAAAAA — — — -TTTTT
— — -WWW— —WWW— — — —WWW— —WWW-— — — — — — HHHHHHHHHHHH- — —AAA — — — — -AAA — — —TTTTT
— — —WWW—WWW— — — — —WWW—WWW— — — — — — — HHH— — — —HHH- — -AAA — — — — — -AAA— — -TTTTT
— — — WWWWWW— — — — — —WWWWWW— — — — — — — -HHH— — — —HHH- — AAA— — — — — — -AAA — —TTTTT
*SELF-DESTRUCT!*
Faux: AAAAHH! *flung back through wall*
Laura: *sigh* Not again. Faux! Do we need the Dragon Balls again or did actually survive?!
Faux: *wild coughing*
Luke: Huh. We got lucky this time.
Gem: *jaw dropped shock* Wha- what just-
Seishin: -_- And THAT is why we don't surprise Malfunctioning Eddie!
Illavera: *looks at Omega* Were you serious about Team Fortress 3?
Omega: **** no. Everyone knows Valve can't count past 2.
Yugo: What about Half-Life Alyx?
Omega: Doesn't count. There's no 3 in it.
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Ohirume: *Looks at Seishin* Didn't we already do a Futurama thing for one of B.F.P.'s reviews?
Seishin: Yeah. What's your point? ,':/
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From Wizzer96 (Trix chapter 44):
'Not to mention how bad they were' *snort, spill over drink in the meantime*
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The chapter was very good, i actually searched for that tutorial, now im a little mind blown by what you can do with a pencil, though it'll never reach the level of duct tape.
Ohirume: Glad you enjoyed it.
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From RT89 (Trix chapter 44):
My brother was ecstatic, awesome chapter. Love the Electra character, hope you have them take her along. BROCK, WHAT DID ASH SAY ABOUT THAT SLIP UP! Hahaha.
Seishin: HAH! lol.
Omega: *glances at Seishin; sweat dropping* You already used that in the response to their private message.
Seishin: ›:I Shut up Meg.
Omega: *deadpans* Seriously?
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From I am vegito (Trix chapter 44):
please continue this story it is so much interesting
Ohirume: *happy grin* Trust me. I plan to continue.
And thank you for the kind words.
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From Lycoan wolf entity (Trix chapter 44):
(This comment has been split up as follows. Not for length, but for convenience)
I'm glad you like my...guess? Review? I'm not sure what to call it.
Seishin: "Guess review", maybe? ˉ\_(ツ)_/ˉ
After all what do you expect from a fellow hard core Ben 10 fan. But I'm impressed myself, you had a lot of people convinced that Power Integration was caused by a glitch from the Omnitrix. I'm pretty sure RT's brother was the only one who even considered it was actually caused by a combination of both DNA and the device itself. I gotta give him credit, I didn't even think about Osmosian DNA being part of the equation.
Seishin: WOO-HOO!
Ohirume: Still, I didn't exactly try to make it easy.
I realize now that calling the form 'deleted' was actually a deceptive play. The Omnitrix's Osmosian DNA isn't gone, it's more- inaccessible. And, sorry to say, that isn't changing.
The accident at Franz's lab only removed the Osmosian DNA from the watch's Transformation Matrix. At the same time, it repurposed the form into a, uh … let's call it an Infusion Conduit.
Gem: YES! Finally!
Omega: Infusion, rock boy. Not fusion.
Gem: *looks down sadly and pouts* aww.
Ohirume: … anywaaaay.
The DNA is now continuously infusing minute, power-related DNA from the Omnitrix's accessible forms into Ash himself and giving him a limited version of the corresponding ability/abilities. Similar to when Aggregor graphically absorbed that Geochelone Aerio in Galapagus's flashback in the episode "Escape from Aggregor."
Omega: *frown* Jeez, man. Did you have to use that example?
Ohirume: *sweat drops* Probably not.
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From buterflypuss (Trix chapter 45):
Good chap
Ohirume: Thank you … wait. *looks around in confusion* Where's Yukiro?
Seishin: *runs into room frantically* GUYS! I think I ******* up real bad!
Omega: *Eyes widen in shock* Oh ****, Yukiro just cursed. This is actually serious.
Ohirume: *runs over and grabs Yukiro's shoulder* Seishin! Calm down! What happened!
Seishin: *deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep breath* I LOST THE QUIZNOS SPONGMONKEYS!
Omega: … … That's it?
*Meanwhile, in the 2nd Shadow Brigade's room
Spongmonkeys 2: *Playing guitar*
Spongmonkeys 1: WE LOVE THE SUUUUBS!
Spongmonkeys 2: *Still playing guitar*
Spongmonkeys 1: COZ THEY ARE GOOOOD TO UUS!
Spongmonkeys 2: *Guitaring continues*
Spongmonkeys 1: THE QUIZNOS SUUUUBS!
Spongmonkeys 2: *GUITAAAAAAAAR*
Spongmonkeys 1: THEY ARE TASTY THEY ARE CRUNCHY THEY ARE WARM BECAUSE THEY TOAST THEEM!
Spongmonkeys 2: *Even more guitar and then guitaring some more after because song is still goooooooing*
Mewtwo: *watches in confusion* I- I don't- what is-
Gem: *leans closer to his Pikachu and whispers* What the Yvel is a quizno?
Gem's Pikachu: *shrugs* I have no idea.
Spongmonkeys 1: THEY GOT A PEPPER BAAAAAR!
Spongmonkeys 2: *… … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … …*whispering* guitar*
Peridot: Could it be a form of a restaurant?
Pearl: No matter what it is, it has some freaky mascots.
Spongmonkeys 1: WE ARE NOT THE HUUUNS!
Spongmonkeys 2: *no more guitar because song oveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer*
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From Wizzer96 (Trix chapter 45):
(Given the length of this comment, I split it up as follows)
oh dear, i think i can feel a tear.
Ohirume: Aww. Thank you.
Yugo: We were going to put "WARNING! FLUFF LVL:DIABETIC" like you suggested back in story post 35.
Seishin: But then we decided, freak that! Let 'em find out themselves! XD
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ANYWAY, nice chapter. im very curious and cant wait to see how you'll develope the story with electra joining the fray *winks*.
Ohirume: Thanks. I'm pretty excited too.
Yugo: But, why the wink? For the 'fray' thing?
right now im very out of touch with the anime up until some core stuff or things i remember cuz of memes or other stupid things...or films, yeah mostly around the films.
Omega: … okay?
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i really curious about how you're going to make the charmender drama now. from what i remember of the anime charmeleon and later charizard refused to follow ash instruction because he was still rather incompetent at the time and they didnt see him worth as their trainer
Faux: *sighs with ear drooping* Yup. That sounds about right.
Ohirume: Still, while the 'incompetence' theory is completely viable,
Faux and Gem: *groan*
Ohirume: it's also been speculated that Charmeleon's disobedience stemmed from him taking down all kinds of stronger opponents and becoming overconfident. Namely, the 20+ exeggutor in the original series episode "The March of the Exeggutor Squad."
These accomplishments built up his ego and made him believe that he was so strong that he didn't need a trainer anymore. Hence, he ignored Ash because he saw him as inferior and thought that he didn't need a trainer to get stronger.
And, honestly, that's the theory I like the most.
Gem: *angry pout* You're mean, Rob.
...but NOW, not only charmender probably have a much stronger bond with ash thanks to him being able to directly interact with him and bring up some much needed self esteem, which i'll always be grateful for in my head.
Ohirume: *wide grin* Exactly!
The 'never addressed amount of time' of (presumed)abuse from Damien messed with Charmander big time. THAT is something the anime never addressed or expanded on so that it could remain a kid's show … to an extent. While Gen 1 Ash may not have been able to help beyond treating him well and basic training,
Gem: HEY! That's not bad thing!
Faux: Yeah!
Ohirume: Trix has been helping profusely in the form of proper and fair training, actual loving care and emotional support, and even teaching him an assortment of new moves that the little Fire Lizard wouldn't've cracked on his own.
While I won't reveal the route I'm going to take for Charmander, I have already decided on it straight up to his evolution to Charizard in the Fossil episode. … Okay some facts are shaky, but I have decided on the personality and a … conflict for that episode.
Plus, if Charizard does become too overconfident, Trix can set him straight as Dragonite(the powerhouse and something the Fire-type looked up to as a charmander), Vaporeon(Type advantage), or Mightyena(most experience as a whole).
i also remember that episode where bulbasaur was refusing to evolve, which i think its perfectly ok and more than fine with that, but also ivysaur is not that much of a big change on comparision of venusaur...oh well, its not me who decides
Yugo: *smile* Fair point. But that is route that Ashes of the Past took.
Ohirume: We're not saying that's an immediate decider towards evolving Bulbasaur, but … I don't where I'm going this. We don't know yet.
Seishin: Still, we have some time until then. :)
*i proceed to enter the ROB space somehow and looks at omega, yugo, faux and laura*
Omega, Yugo, Faux, and Laura: *eyes widen and stare at Wizzer96 in surprise* Wait, what?
"...i do not enjoy when someone makes bet behind my back. now, you guys better give me my due share otherwise..." *cracks nuckles and BFG divison starts*
Ohirume: Quick thing before we continue – I had to look up what "Bfg Division" is.
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Laura: Wait, what are you talking about?!
Seishin: *Looks at Laura* Don't you remember? Their idea for what to do with the dude mewtwo in Trix's world. *points at Laura* You, Yug's and your boyfriend bet on what Wizzer's guess would be. You were all dead wrong.
Omega: *raises a brow* That's what they're talking about? *looks at Wizzer96* Well then why am I at fault? I'm not the one who instigated the bet. ****, I didn't even take part in it. *points at other three* They're the ones who did everything. I only said 'pay up' to be an ******* to them.
Yugo: *gulps before waving hands defensively with a nervous smile* L- look, we were just having a little fun and- *bows shamefully* Sorry.
Laura and Faux: *bow as well* sorry.
Faux: *perks up and blinks in surprise* Wait. *looks at Laura and Yugo* Why are we afraid of them?
I mean, Laura, you're a Legendary Psychic Dragon who can break the sound barrier with the wave of an arm.
I'm a matter illusion creating, ancestral inherent zoroark who's a transmuter that can access nine life energies from overpowered worlds.
And Yugo. You're YUGO!
Ohirume: Well, Wizzer is a highly imaginative person from the real world. So, here, there are exactly as powerful as I am.
Yugo, Faux, and Laura: *flinch and look at Wizzer96 fearfully*
Wizzer96(continuation requested via Private Message): *looks at trio with wicked smirk*
Faux: *gulps* I just killed us, didn't I?
Yugo: Probably.
Laura: *looks back at Ohirume* Will the Dragon Balls or anything that can revive the dead be able to help here?
Ohirume: … good question.
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From RT89 (Trix chapter 45):
OUTSTANDING! Truly a wonderful chapter. Fear not Omega, you arnt the only one shedding tears from that touching chapter. Thank you.
Ohirume: *smile* Thank you, RT.
Omega: *small, soft smirk* Yeah, thanks.
Still, I mostly did that because of Yukiro badgering me the last few times I shed some tears from a chapter.
Namely, "Ch 2: Start Cont." in response to Soot's mom, "Ch 18: Porta Vista" from everyone comforting Trix, and "Ch 33: Kangaskhan" from the touching end-scene between not-Tarzan and his parents.
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*Deleted Scenes
Pikachu tribe pt1 – Shoulder ridin' Leaders + meeting the tribe ALT
Why: wasn't feeling it and had no idea how to expand on it.
Where: Original opening to the first scene change
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The group continued on their journey towards Cinnabar island. Although, things couldn't have been more backwards.
Brock and Misty looked around the forest in awe from Ash's shoulders; the Lenses on their chests. Soot had all of the Gym Leader's pokéball belts slung over her neck, and Pikachu and Clefairy on her back.
The Dark-type sweat dropped, 'This better not be a recurring thing.'
"Ash. Best. Invention. Ever!" Said the viridian-eyed pikachu with a ponytail from Ash's shoulder.
Ash smiled at her, "I'm glad you guys like it."
"It's incredible! It feels like all of my senses are on overdrive." Brock said. The squint-eyed pikachu looked at Ash, "Is this really how it feels every time?"
Ash chuckled, "I guess." He looked ahead and smiled softly, "Due to Power Integration, everything actually seems a little duller when I transform."
Misty looked at him in shock, "This is dull to you?!"
Ash chuckled lightly, "I mean, kind of." He brought up and looked at the watch, "I've had this thing for so long, that I've gotten used to it all."
*****(Something else that was cut that I couldn't put here. Because, it would be too much of a spoiler.)*****
Brock nodded, "Yeah." He put a hand to his chin, "I bet this could really help with my training in becoming a breeder."
Ash and Misty chuckled.
Pikachu sweat dropped, "This is how Brock and Misty felt a lot of the time, isn't it?"
Soot sighed, "Probably."
Pikachu sighed and jumped in surprise when his cheeks started sparking. He put a paw on one of his cheeks in surprise, "What the?"
"AH!" Brock and Misty shouted in surprise. Their cheeks sparking as well.
"What's happening?!" Misty cried out alarm.
Brock flinched and looked back at Pikachu, "This isn't electrical overload, right?!"
Ash frowned and put a hand on Brock's head, "I don't think so. You'd have a fever if it was."
"Did that human just understand them?!"
"Don't be ridiculous! That isn't possible."
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Pikachu tribe pt1 – Down by the river
Why: Keeping it like this made me feel like I was slapping Goldeen in the face. Especially taking the rest of the chapter into account.
That and the uh- well, you'll see.
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Continuing on their journey to Cinnabar Island, the group stopped to take a break in a peaceful spot of the forest. Ash and Brock were lying against a tree with Soot and Misty lying on the ground next to the tree … that last part will make more sense in a few lines.
Pikachu was climbing around some nearby berry trees. Clefairy was at the base of the one he was currently in and looking up at him.
Soot smiled, "Fresh air, clean and calm water, great shade and sunbathing spots." She stretched, "We really found a good spot."
Brock smiled as he laid down with his hands behind his head, "Yeah, it sure is nice to kick back and relax after traveling so much."
"Hey, speaking of the water," The viridian-eyed vaporeon with a hair tie on her ear said before looking at Ash with a pout, "Are you sure I shouldn't try swimming yet? There isn't really any risk of me drowning like this."
Ash frowned. "That's not really the-"
"Wait." Soot interrupted before looking over to the Water-trainer/Type with a sly smirk, "How about this. If you can make it to the water on your own four paws, you're free to swim."
Misty smirk determinedly, "Ha! Easy!"
The Bubble Jet Pokémon slowly got to her paws. All four were wobbling like crazy.
Misty frowned, 'Okay. Already harder than expected.' She shook it off and glared at the stream ahead, 'Doesn't matter. You've waiting for this moment for a long time Waterflower.' She stared moving a forepaw forward, 'Just one step at a-'
"VAY!" She cried out as she fell on her face immediately.
Soot laughed wildly, "Freaking Yvel! I at least expected you to make it half a foot!"
The Water-type glared at the Dark-type, "I hate you."
Soot rolled her eyes with a smirk, "If you want me to be offended by that, say it when I don't deserve it."
Brock sweat dropped, "Are you alright, Misty?!"
Misty glared at him, "Por vaporeon?!"
Brock sweat dropped, "Uh…"
Ash glanced at him, "She said 'do I look alright?'" He got up, walked over, and picked her up from under her forelegs; startling the Water-type, "It's like I said earlier. You need to practice walking on all fours as a pikachu before moving on in a practical way."
Misty blushed, "U- um, right." She looked up at him, "Can you put me down now? This is … weird."
Ash raised a brow, "Weird h-" He flinched and blushed upon realizing where his hands would be if she were still-
He quickly put her down and waved his hands defensively, "Sorry! Sorry. That's how I used to pick up Soot when she was a hatchling."
Misty shook her head and sat down, "Uh … y-yeah. I got that. Still, it just … felt awkward."
Ash chuckled nervously, "Yeah. Sorry."
Soot raised a brow, 'Seemed fine to me.'
Omega: Wait, so the hyena ships Trix and Water girl?
Ohirume: *sigh* It wasn't that. Soot may be twice as smart as anyone at Pokétech, but she's still a canine. Heck, she's a Pokémon who grew up in with Ash and Delia for Arc sake!
Omega: *raised brow* What does being a Pokémon have to do with that?
Faux: *deadpans* We're animals with nothing to hide. Literally.
Omega: *blinks in surprise and looks up and down Faux* Huh.
Ash looked over at Brock, "You sure you don't wanna try a new form? There are still five active Lenses."
Brock waved a hand with a smile, "I'm good. I don't really have anything specific in mind."
Misty shook her head wildly before laying down with smile, "Well, you're missing out."
Soot snickered, "Yeah, he is."
Ash rolled his eyes with a smirk.
Brock sweat dropped, 'Starting to think I should have taken the offer.'
"Hey! Wait up!"
Ash jerked and blinked in surprise. He, Misty, and Soot looked over to see Pikachu running into a bush with Clefairy chasing after him.
Ash got up and ran after him, "Wait Pikachu!" Soot ran after him. Brock followed soon after.
Misty flinched, "Wait a second! I still can't walk like thi-"
She was cut off by the Lens on her chest blinking red and beeping.
Misty blinked, "Oh. That works."
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Pikachu tribe pt2 – mind****ing Electra for the first time ALT
Why: A little too mean spirited.
Where: When the group is looking around the tent / alternate to Electra fainting
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Ash blinked in surprise, "Huh." He smiled, "That works." He looked back at Electra with a smile, "So, what do you say, Electra?"
Electra just stared at him in shock.
Raichu looked at her worriedly, "Sibling?"
Electra didn't respond and started walking towards the tent in a daze. Ash, Brock, and Misty stepped aside.
The human enthusiast looked around the inside of her tent in shock. Soot watched from inside as she did, blinked in surprise, and dropped the thermos. Electra just kept looking.
Soot cleared her throat before going invisible and leaving the tent. Electra didn't seem to notice.
The trainers shared a worried look.
Misty held out a paw, "Electra? Are you-"
"I was a fool." Electra muttered.
Brock jerked before glaring, "Now, wait a second Electra! You're not a fool at all!"
Misty smiled sadly, "So, you got a few things wrong. So what? Everyone does sometimes."
Electra shook her head; still turned away from them, "No. I wanted to learn about humans but never actually tried to figure out anything about this stuff. I made poor guesses and just assumed they were true."
Ash frowned, "I mean, sure. But doesn't mean you should just give up."
Electra's ears shot up before she looked back at Ash in surprise, "Who said anything about giving up? I'm not giving up."
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Pikachu tribe – uh … not really sure
Why: Couldn't fit it in
Where: Honestly … no ******* idea. I'm not even sure which part it could have gone in.
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Electra stirred awake and found herself back in her tent. She blinked in surprise and looked around, 'Wait. Wasn't I with Ash and the others before? Or, did I-' Her eyes widened fearfully, and she looked over at the tent flap.
She walked closer, held out a paw towards the flap, and gulped, "Please don't be a dream. Please don't be a dream. Please don't be a dream." She closed her eyes and swept the flap away.
"Morning Electra." Soot called out to her.
Electra's eyes shot open. She found the entire group around her tent's clearing. Brock was putting out bowls while Pikachu and Ash followed him with a larger can of Pokémon food than Ash showed her yesterday. Misty, Clefairy, and Soot each sat down in front of a bowl and ate.
Brock looked over at her with a smile, "You can go ahead and grab a bowl if you want. We're almost done."
Electra smiled happily
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Pikachu tribe pt3 - Raichu leaving tent flashback / Raichu asks Misty for advice on a something he can give to Electra for when she leaves:
Where: Immediately before Electra opened the cloth to reveal the necklace.
Why: Including this anywhere expect the end in the form of a flashback would have been to much of a giveaway. And I just felt like the flashback thing would be awkward.
Extra: While this scene wasn't included, it is still very much canon to the story
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Misty smiled, "Oh, like a farewell gift?"
Raichu smiled softly, "I suppose that sounds right." He shifted to a frown, "I was hoping to make something for her. Something that she can remember me by. Since you've all spent time around humans, I was hoping you'd be able to help a bit."
Misty smirked and crossed her arms, "And you asked for my help specifically since I'm a girl.
Raichu blinked in surprise, "What does you being female have to do with this?"
Misty sweat dropped, 'Apparently nothing.' She waved a paw, "Never mind." She perked up and smiled, "I'd be happy to help. Did you have something in mind?"
Raichu pointed at her head, "I was hoping for something like that."
Misty blinked in surprise and glanced at her ponytail, "My hair tie?"
"Maybe." Raichu responded, "I mostly mean something small that she can wear and that won't really get in the way of anything but big enough for her to notice easily."
Misty perked up and smiled brightly, "I've got it!"