Naruto's Various Chūnin Selection Exams Finals
Disclaimer: Masashi Kishimoto is the author and creator of the popular manga and anime Naruto, and has ownership of all official characters, ideas, countries, backgrounds, etcetera from the series. Anything else that pops up that's not original or is simply cameo I do not own, that includes crossover cameos, fictional cameos, celebrity cameos, and real-world cameos. All I own in this are the story's originality and plot, the ideas that may appear to not make it full-time on its own, any and all of my Original Characters both with background and of filler purposes, original jutsu, techniques, and original countries and locations to expand the horizon within the Naruto world.
Author's Note: This came to me after discovering the many different Naruto stories out there that go through their own Chūnin Selection Exams. Each one vastly differs from the rest, and others have a crossover flavor. This is MY version of Naruto's Chūnin Selection Exams Finals... against mostly Neji in different mannerisms. Each one can be considered its own separate little story, exploring the different sides of Naruto in my list of favorites and few chosen selections recommended by friends and fans of my works. Beware however that some of them will sound like crack.
The Black Shadow of Metal Country
A month had passed, and the fourteen possible Chūnin hopefuls lined... well, eleven hopefuls lined up in front of the wide audience of the open arena. Also here was the Metarukage, Malik Ishtal, and the Arashikage, Brut Kishida, of the western continent to foresee these events alongside the Hokage and Kazekage of the east, among other very important persons, companies, businesses, ECT. Needless to say, the arena was jam-packed. Chūnin exams were the most watched events of the year, and brought in tons of money, another reason why it circulated. Jōnin exams were held privately and were too risky for spectators, with A-rank jutsus flying about.
"Ahh, Hokage-dono." Sarutobi turned around, and smiled friendly as two men walked up.
"Metarukage-dono, Arashikage-dono. A pleasure to meet you two." The Arashikage, Brut Kishida, was a bald man with what remained of his hair pulled into a braided ponytail. He had cold black-looking eyes, and wore the traditional kimono outfit, which was outfitted with the Storm customs of lightning bolt-shaped shoulder gauntlets, lightning bolt charms dangling off leather string from the wrist sleeves, and a yellow obi sash tied to the waist. The kimono itself was a light gray, with yellow design markings over the right portion of the uniform, and the hakama pants were a royal blue, with strapped brown sandals. His ears were pierced with a set of earrings, which were the symbols of Storm Country.
"And the Kazekage-dono, a pleasure to meet you," greeted Malik.
The disguised Orochimaru nodded. "Likewise..."
"Thank you all for coming to the Hidden Leaf Chūnin Selection Exam! We will now start the main tournament matches between the twelve participants who made it through the preliminaries. Please stay in your seats and watch until the end," the third Hokage in a loud and clear voice announced, heard by everyone in the stadium.
With those who did not advance, they crowded around, Metal next to the Leaf as Metal Class spoke amongst them, while the Leaf held a similar but subdued conversations. Hayate joined the competitors in the arena.
"Rules: you can win by killing, knocking out, or making the other surrender. To surrender, raise your hand and proclaim your surrender, along with your name. Now, our first match is Uzumaki Haku vs. Hyuuga Neji. Will everyone else please report to the box in front for your use?"
Haku Uzumaki vs. Neji Hyuuga
As everyone left the field, Haku and Neji remained, as the pale-eyed shinobi shifted into Jyuuken stance, as Haku pulled out a metal bar and it extended into her staff weapon. She spun it lazily into the air and caught it, shifting into her own style stance, one completely foreign to the Leaf.
"You are fated to lose," Neji said, "give up."
"Fate this," she retorted with the flip of her middle finger. Neji developed an eye tick.
"Hajime!" Hayate yelled from his safe position.
"Hyōton: Kooritsugi (Ice Release: Ice Stage)," Haku whispered to herself mostly, as she stabbed her staff into the ground, and focusing her chakra sent a wave of ice blue chakra to flare out. When Neji ran at Haku while she was doing this, he suddenly leap into the air to evade the wave of chakra thinking it was an attack but upon landing immediately fell to his rear because the entire floor had been transformed into a giant ice rink. Haku giggled and started to skate along the ice, spinning her staff amazingly.
"Hyōton: Touketsurenda (Ice Release: Frozen Barrage)!" With a slash, several balls of spiked ice were launched at Neji; he shunshins out of harms way. He still had trouble staying on the slippery ice, as Haku suddenly skated in his direction and lashed out with a spinning kick that sent him back onto his rear. She smiled, as she skates elegantly drawing awes from the audience.
"Stop fooling around and fight me!" Neji yelled struggling to stay upright.
"Yeah right! As a little girl I always enjoyed skating on ice." Despite this being a match, Haku performed one of the simple skating jump moves, eliciting a polite applause from the audience.
She formed seven hand signs before grasping her staff, as the crystal began to glow. She created this secret jutsu after her Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors, Diamond Storm, and her Thousand Flying Water Needles. "Hijutsu: Aisu Kurisuittou (Ice Crystal Sword)!" Water shot out like a beam before rapidly condensing and freezing into a solid sharp blade of ice, shaped as a swallow tail of sorts (similar to Rockman Zero's Z-Saber). She popped the staff base into its handle form and twirled the blade in her hand. Skating at Neji and lashing out, cutting a mark into the teen's chest and ruining his clothing.
"I heard that the Hyuuga in the history books are to be the strongest clans of Fire Country today despite having some sort of martial law or something... of course I didn't pay attention in History class." She came at him again, this time boosting a bit of wind to her speed and slashing at him once more, this time blood began to drip from the right shoulder. Neji winced in pain as he bit down on his lower lip to not cry out. Crying out in pain is a show of weakness.
"Is this all the Hyuuga has to offer, because if it's true then you should hang up the headband." She shattered the ice blade and cocked the handle out to its staff form. Swinging it, two streams of water shot out and formed into Ice Dragons that flew towards the Leaf-nin, roaring.
Neji snarled in rage, mad that the woman before him dared to say he was weak. "Hakkeshou Kaiten (Eight Divination Palms of the Hand Heavenly Spin)!" Hiashi in his booth stared in shock, at seeing a Main Branch technique used by a lower rank branch member of the Hyuuga Clan. He kept spinning as the ice soon developed spider cracks, and loud audible cracks echoed, spreading out in a mile wide radius as the dragons splintered into sparkling shards on contact.
Suddenly, he had appeared before Haku when the ice had cracked and she collapsed from the force. Neji sneered at her. "You are in my range of Deviation. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou (Eight Divination Signs: Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand)!" With a kick, the staff was sent flying where the spike end of the staff bottom stuck to the icy ground, "Two Strikes!" Haku was struck by two thrusts, feeling tenketsu close, "Four Strikes! Eight Strikes! Sixteen! Thirty-two! Sixty-four!"
Haku winced, and spat up a bit of blood, trying hard to get up.
Neji glares. "Give up, fate predicts your failure and allow me victory."
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"No I don't!" yelled Fate high in the clouds beside Kami.
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She sneered at the arrogant Hyuuga. "Hijutsu: Sensatsu Suishou (Thousand Flying Water Needles)!" The staff's top glowed, responding before water spewed forth into needles, immediately turning to ice as Neji was struck several times before he Shunshin away. However the damage was already done.
"Hyōton: Hyōkai Tsunami (Ice Release: Frozen Tsunami)!" The staff once again unleashed a tidal wave of water from the blue crystal, washing over the field and her as she held breath. Neji was screaming as the tidal wave washed over him with a powerful splash, spraying many of the audience members soaking wet and cold. When the wave subsided, Haku was drenched in waist-deep water as what remained of the ice chunks floated. Somehow, the water washed away her top freeing her breasts into the open air.
"... She just lost her top," said Sakura. Both her and Ino looked down at their chests, and then somewhat crossed their arms. Can someone say jealous? Bad enough Hinata has early development in the chest area than most girls her age...
"What an unyouthful occurrence to have befallen her!" Lee yelled in his usual loud voice. With the Jōnins watching in the audience, a man in green spandex yelled the exact same thing.
"Damn... lost my top again," she whispered, annoyed that a lot of men in the audience were whistling lustily at her while crossing her arms to cover her assets. The other half stared at Hyuuga Neji, who was in mid-scream frozen in a block of ice that floated in the water somewhat. She growled at the perverts, wishing Kami (or the Thunder Siblings) could smite them. Naruto loved both her and Nessuru, as they were both attractive and sexy, and he had no prejudice when it comes to looks. She doesn't have big breasts, nor are they small, they were perfect for Naruto, as was the same towards Nessuru.
"Shōsha! Uzumaki Haku!" Neji was immediately retrieved and quickly taken out of the arena to the hospital to be freed from the chunk of ice and under heat blankets. She summoned an Ice Dragon through a jutsu technique once recovering her staff, and it took her over to her friends where Hina began administering medical treatment to unseal her tenketsu while Nessuru took out a scroll. Once she was healed enough, Nessuru helped with putting on another wide ribbon strap.
It took awhile, because they had to find two other Jōnins who knew Doton jutsu to drain the stadium of the water and also melt the ice to vapor. Of course, after twenty minutes and the water was now emptying out of the arena...
Naruto Uzumaki vs. Hiten Raijuu
"Next match! Uzumaki Naruto vs. Raijuu Hiten!"
There were some mixed reactions, mainly from the Leaf, since most of the adults knew about the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki, except the younger generation. Hiten flew down into the arena, flames spilling from the sides of his footwear, as he laughed.
"C'mon out, Naruto! We can settle our score in this match!" Hiten yelled out.
Suddenly a purplish spiraling aura appeared in the middle of the air over the arena floor. Hell, it looked like a strange wormhole or some sort. To the Kage-ranked ninja, and those with the Byakugan, it was just a highly advanced Genjutsu technique being used for intimidation. And right now it was scaring the hell out of the Genin who came just to watch these matches, and the civilians who jammed the stadium full.
Naruto unbeknownst to anyone else used Chakra Sori to appear in the black hole and make his Genjutsu entrance. Then, many jaws but Nishi dropped as the brown-cloaked shinobi appeared, actually levitating in the air. Naruto smiled behind his cloak, as he floated there in the air, pushing out his Wind affinity. "Ah, Naruto the Black Shadow... Heh... just 'cuz we're comrades doesn't mean I'll go easy on you."
The portal closed and wavered out of existence, dispelled by Naruto. "Likewise," Naruto replied.
Many shinobi would kill to possess such an ability of levitation, since such an art was not physically possible, even for a Wind affinity user. Right now, a certain young lady with a giant fan strapped to her back was drooling at such an ability which Naruto possessed. She could only fly for short distances using her Wind affinity, and that was using her battle fan. Flight without aid was still impossible, yet this kid has done just that.
"You know Naruto... I am sure many ninja that surround us wonder how the person they want to kill is still alive, and defying the laws of physics."
Naruto chuckled softly. "Unfortunately... they don't have to acknowledge the facts that I survived dying by their hands." He smiled behind the cloak before spreading it out.
"Hajime!" Then he Shunshin out of the arena and next to the judges high above near the Kage box.
"Naruto, no hard feelings but I'm going to win this match! Raiton: Shiro Denkou (White Lightning)!" Hiten fired off a bolt of white lightning and Naruto blocked the electrical attack. Hiten's flames boosted him towards Naruto who met him half-way, and exchanged blows via Taijutsu styles before Hiten was kicked towards the ground. From there Naruto held out his right palm facing up, left hand clenching the wrist area and started forming a sphere of swirling chakra that many Leaf shinobi during the time of the Yondaime recognized, even Sarutobi Hizuren.
"Rasengan: Āsubureikā (Spiraling Sphere: Earth Breaker)!" Naruto then dropped like a stone and Hiten immediately Kawarimi away in place of a Kaze Bunshin (Wind clone). From the post-explosion of the jutsu, and the settling of dust, revealed the blonde in a crater. Naruto immediately used Chakra Sori to evade the three shuriken Hiten launched high in the air, causing everyone to gasp at the sudden teleportation.
"He knows the Rasengan!" Sarutobi exclaimed, sitting up from his throne chair in the Kage Booth. Orochimaru in the disguise of the Kazekage also wished to know, though he did not voice out his thoughts.
"His own style, yes... He taught the original basics to his sister Hikari," explained Malik as the two ninja engaged in Taijutsu once again, "I believe she's still working on improving the jutsu Uzumaki Kakashi left for them to master when he was on his deathbed."
Sarutobi became silent and sat back down. He had seen the letter Kushina left to Jiraiya, explaining that she had taken a copy of how the Rasengan worked, the jutsu Minato, her husband, used greatly during the Second Shinobi War. To hear that the jutsu was given to the clan on his deathbed meant the man had already gone past the border of life and death.
"How does he know that? It's a, or was, a jutsu that was only seen and known to Fire Country," said Jiraiya, popping up behind the Uzumaki Clan in the stands. Yeah, screw hiding in secret, he just saw his student's jutsu used!
Hikari looked up at the perverted old man, and giggled as she held out her hand, and before the old man's eyes, formed a Rasengan. It wasn't like what Naruto could use or what the old hermit could bring forth, but it was Hikari's perfect Rasengan. "Grandfather Kakashi taught Naruto-kun Rasengan on his deathbed. He then taught me the basics while perfecting his own style." Even with his heavy cloak donned, he was moving well and his fighting wasn't inhibited by the brown material. Naruto levitated back as he shifted through the hand signs as Hiten flew across the floor, Thunder Pike ready to strike.
"Katon: Shounetsujigoku (Fire Release: Hell Burner)!" He thrusted his hands out before him and unleashed a jet of dark red flames. Hiten swore and spun the Thunder Pike, but a few embers grazed him before Naruto created a ring of jade green fireballs that spun around his body, "Kitsune-bi!"
Hiten swore again as the fireballs collided, causing an explosion of dark red and jade green. He was sent flying back, crashing to the ground. Naruto cut off his chakra, and landed in a soft thump feet first, as his cloak stopped ruffling outward from the pushing wind energies that had kept him aloft. Naruto shifted through twelve hand signs before smiling.
"Doton: Doseki Kobushi (Earth Release: Golem Fist)!" The ground before Naruto erupted, forming a stone fist that levitated in the air before being launched towards Hiten, who was now back on his feet. He saw the stone fist coming his way so he did the only thing possible; he charged his weapon up and leapt into the air, twisted his body back into a vertical somersault and swung, cutting cleanly through the stone fist. As he landed the two halves smashed into dust on the wall, creating damaging holes. If anything else, that particular moment would have looked awesome in slow motion.
"Raiton: Toraiado Ikazuchi (Lightning Release: Triad Thunder)!" A sphere of crackling lightning akin to the famous Chidori appeared hovered over Hiten's head, before three more shot out at Naruto who got caught. The fourth sphere immediately shot over and Naruto cried out as volts of electricity poured into him within a pyramid barrier before the jutsu faded away.
Naruto had collapsed to his knees, as Hiten looked upon his opponent. Smoke was rising off the young teenager, and the ninja had to wonder how he survived such a direct assault. Many would have died from such a high electrical shock. "Sorry Naruto, but I'm winning this fight," Hiten said.
"Kiss my silk-covered ass," Naruto said, before he stood up albeit shakily, and grabbed the cloak. With one motion the cloak went flying and landed with an audible crash in its small but noticeable crater. Those who were sitting to his back saw the image of the fox with nine spread tails on the back of the bodysuit, while females in the crowd whistled at the eye-candy bodysuit.
"KAI!" Naruto yelled forming the Ram sign, as a flare of energy swirled around him briefly before fading, gravity seals disabled in his armor parts. With a grin he shot across the battlefield and struck an uppercut in Hiten's jaw line. As Hiten crashed against the wall, Naruto went through the signs.
"Kuchiyose no Jutsu!"
A blast of pink smoke, surprisingly enough appeared, and when the smoke faded there stood a pink fox with lavender eyes, white tipped tail, ears, paws, and underbelly. The fox wore a Hitai-ate around its neck, and it carried a scroll on its back. Seeing Naruto with a Fox Contract had many of the Leaf civilians having flashbacks to Kyuubi attacking. The fox dropped a scroll which Naruto quickly unsealed before picking up a strangely-colored metal helmet with fins that looked similar to that of a cobra's hood. The inside was orange, while the rest was all black. Sealing the scroll Kyuuchi the fox tucked it back into its holder and vanished in a puff of pink smoke. Hiten had stood up, and faced off Naruto who had now placed on the helmet, now completing his Black Shadow identity. He closed the back lock, his hair spilling out the back. If anything else he looked like some manga super hero or something.
"Now... time to face the true Black Shadow," said Naruto, as rings of purplish black formed and fell from his arms. "Meiton: Jigoku Hanten (Dark Release: Hells Rolling)!" He flung the wheels at Hiten who took to the sky, but Naruto released his wind energy and shot into the air with a super jump, and landed a roundhouse kick, before dropping down with another Āsubureikā. This time Hiten yelled in pain as the jutsu connected and an explosion erupted, blinding the entire floor level.
Naruto immediately leapt away from the crater, and Hiten began to shift through sixteen hand signs speedily. "Hijutsu: Hiryuudageki (Secret Technique: Dragon Strike)!" The gathering clouds darkened a bit as Hiten was in the air after he flown out from the crater. Flashes of lighting lashed out, and bolts crashed down in random areas. The jutsu Hiten unleashed was becoming a bit too dangerous for the civilians and fellow shinobi in the audience, and of course the ninja themselves were getting nervous.
"Fūton: Hayabusa Tatsumaki (Wind Release: Falcon Tornado)!" Naruto shifted through the sixteen hand signs fast as Hiten did, and the clouds exploded. A blazing chakra-made dragon roared into existence and flying down towards Naruto, while he unleashed a powerful light green energy of wind, as a translucent shape of a strange falcon formed in the destructive twister.
The two forces collided, and there were screams all around as the jutsus overpowered one another into a mighty explosion. Hiten fell from the air, and crashed through the audience, taking a few by complete accident as they collapsed into one of the hallways of the arena. Already shinobi rushed to Hiten, while Naruto himself was in a hole of his own. There was complete silence, before Hiten stirred, and he leapt out of the hole and landed in the arena floor. From the hole, Naruto stumbled through cursing rather colorfully because he sported a hand print on his cheek from the woman who slapped him (he had crashed into the women's restroom).
"I must have his blood," Gaara muttered to himself, scaring Temari and Kankuro.
Hiten and Naruto stared at one another, before grins cracked on their lips, and they began to chuckle. There was confusion spreading through the audience as the two fighters broke into full-blown laughter, Naruto walking over and donning his cloak, and Hiten retrieving his Thunder Pike. When they stared at each other, the laugher ceased as did the grins, now their faces were etched with rivalry.
Hiten smiled. Naruto smiled back.
Naruto took his position as he levitated off the ground, holding his right hand as chakra formed and began to swirl, building up power, as Hiten began to gather his lightning affinity chakra all into the Thunder Pike. The weather took this time to bring upon a cloud cover over the arena, so that the only light in the dim shadows in the open stadium was from the Rasengan forming, and the flaring chakra just emanating off the Thunder Pike. Then Naruto flew across the field and leapt into the air as the wind blew his cloak back, exposing the scar on his chest as he reared his glowing hand and then thrusted it forward.
"Rasengan: Āsubureikā (Spiraling Sphere: Earth Breaker)!"
"Raiton: Raiyū Endan (Lightning Dragon)!"
Hiten swung his Thunder Pike and launched a bluish yellow dragon made of electricity as it roared, and collided with Naruto's Āsubureikā, causing an explosion to filter in the air.
"Naruto!" Metal Class screamed.
"Hiten!" Souta and Souten cried.
The smoke finally cleared, and Hiten was on the ground, the Thunder Pike broken in half. Naruto was just barely able to stand, as Kyuubi was starting the healing process to the heavy injuries. Everything else needed traditional medical treatment.
"Shōsha! Uzumaki Naruto!" And then Naruto collapsed beside Hiten, the metal helmet falling off and resting to a clang on the ground. The crystal gem piece on the forehead shaped as the Kyuubi's head glittered in the sunlight that now broke through as the cloud cover passed on through. Sekai, Rin, Sanosuke, Serenade, Ryoji, Koto, Blackjack, and Chow leapt down from their seats to the floor to assist the two fallen warriors. Hiten was out cold, and Naruto was just very exhausted. Against the loud cheers for a spectacular match, the two boys were taken straight to the medical bay, while the two Kages of Metal and Storm excused themselves to check up on Hiten and Naruto.
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Forte Silvermoon vs. Shinji Takami
Forte and Shinji displayed moves many shinobi would kill to possess, mainly because they excelled beautifully with kenjutsu mixed with few ninjutsu and taijutsu. Not to mention the rare Metal-affinity jutsu of Shinji's Hagane Ame (Steel Rain) jutsu. Nevertheless, Forte succeeded and advanced to the next round, but just barely. During this match Naruto had waken up thanks to Kyuubi's healing tendencies.
Shigetaka Hayato vs. Shino Aburame
Shino had difficulty fighting against Shigetaka due to two sword techniques, Ittougufū (Blade Tornado) and Genwaku Akki Kiriorosu (Blinding Demon Slash). But when Shino finally managed it implant one of his kikai bugs on Shigetaka, the twin sword user soon forfeited the match to preserve his own chakra reserves. Hiten had awaken and was mostly healed of his injuries though he had to take it easy.
Kagura Uzumaki vs. Shikamaru Nara
This match went off with a slight delay (exactly as canon) up to the point however when Shikamaru forfeited the match to Kagura (instead of Temari), who put up quite a tough fight with her scythe wielding abilities. During this interesting match some foxes had appeared, having been sent as stealth and investigation units, about enemy ninja appearing outside the village and setting up traps and such, possibly for an invasion.
Hina Asakura vs. Hikaru Morota
Both didn't feel like beating each other up so they both quit and left to go check on Naruto and Hiten. Sabaku no Gaara in a whirl of sand Shunshins down to the arena floor which was still damaged from the match between Kagura Uzumaki and Shikamaru Nara, and Naruto Uzumaki and Hiten Raijuu. Orochimaru, in the disguise of the dead Kazekage, grinned mentally at the plan that was about to commence soon.
How badly his plan was rapidly falling to death because of a few snoopers. Metal Class left because they didn't want to wait for the late Uchiha to arrive late (plus they clearly saw Konoha heavily favored the boy; anybdy else and he/she would be DQd immediately) and due to the reports by Naruto's foxes was busy fighting off against numerous enemy shinobi that were setting up summoning rune marks, most of them from Suna and Oto. And as this fight went on, the match of Gaara versus Sasuke went down back at the arena.
"Think we should alert the village to what's happening?"
Hikari nodded to her brother. "Yup, do it! Make it an explosive notice."
As Naruto prepared his powerful jutsu technique, the match between Gaara and Sasuke heated up, with the duck-haired boy having some trouble getting through the sand defense. However, at the moment Naruto fully charged, Sasuke struck with Chidori, causing blood to spill from Gaara's arm.
"Fall back now! Meiton: Kuragari Obarodo (Dark Release: Darkness Overload)!"
They did so, Naruto high in the air to unleash his devastating supercharged jutsu. A powerful explosion was heard, and Orochimaru heard the explosion echo out from the Darkness Overload attack. Sarutobi looked off to the side, and then Orochimaru cursed (recognizing the position where his lackeys would summon giant three-headed snakes to destroy the outside walls) and unleashed smoke bombs while kidnapping Sarutobi. The ninja in the crowds sprinted into attack after Kabuto placed everyone under sleeping Genjutsu.
The invasion has begun... earlier than scheduled.
Okay, to describe what this is about... this is about the Uzumaki Clan existing in a different land after the clan's old home Uzushiro was destroyed. While some would spread out across the elemental nations, the rest of the survivors banded together and migrated to the western part of the planet. Kushina dies like in canon alongside Minato, however Naruto is soon discovered to be the offspring of Kushina and taken away to live a better life in the west and thus is NOT a ninja of the Leaf, is not a ADD/ADHD brat (an OC would take that position minus the 99.9 percent hatred by Konoha who gets killed off in the invasion by rampaging Shukaku), and is more different than canon.
Terms and wordings are still part of the "Elemental Nation" speak and the whole story this chapter was taken out of (I had another chapter of this story's discontinued plot in The Forbidden Scroll of Stories, labeled under Pathway XXXVII) was in-fact my EARLY basis for expanding the Naruto world when the manga itself was still in the early stages of Shippuuden, and would be worked on time and again as well as seen in my LOZ/Naruto crossovers. This plot was going to be really great but... yeah... I eventually lost total interest but I kept it around as memories, and as a reminder of how greatly I had improved my writing as the years gone by. It also had great smutty scenes aside the action...
To clear things up: Haku is female (part costume modeled after Rikku) and is adopted into the Uzumaki Clan, I had a pairing between Naruto, Haku, and a female OC of the Uzumaki Clan, Itachi and Kisame are good guys in the plot (with Itachi protecting Naruto due to a promise by Kushina when she was seven months into the pregnancy), Naruto's whole character basis was profiled after Bass/Forte's Battle Network counterpart, and the west are technologically more advanced than the east. Some of the OCs in the old story would soon have reincarnations and improved status in other stories that I have written such as Blackjack and Serenade, and my self-proclaimed alter-ego Sekai Ishtal (who today can be seen living many different lives in different fanfictional universes). Also, the invasion would be cleared faster than canon what with the strong help of the westerners plus Naruto and his fox summons.
Edited a lot of mistakes... to make it look even better.