I'm back! Thank you to anyone who's reviewed or anything! I don't have anything against Four, btw, but I can't help but make him seem like a jerk. And, Eric is so underrated. HE NEEDS TO BE SEEN AS A GOOD GUY! Anyways, back to the story! Still looking for beta. THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! I'll take that to mind. It might make it easier to read. Characters might not always be like the OC.
Chapter 2: This can't be happening
"Max, you have to be lying. My father is Andrew Prior, my mother is Natalie Prior, and they live in Abnegation. Wouldn't she have mentioned you?" I asked, since I was greatly confused. "Tris, dear-"
"Don't call me dear!" I growled out, annoyed. "Fine, Tris. Tris, have you noticed how you're more of a Dauntless, than a Stiff?" Max asked, and I thought about it. I usually did act as more of a Dauntless than Abnegation. But, I'm a Nose as well. "Yes. I have. But, if it's true, we should do a blood test between us, Max. If you're right, you're my father. If you're not, you're not my father."
"Sure thing, darlin'."
"Ugh! Do. Not. Fucking. Call. Me. Darlin!" I yelled, getting annoyed. "Let's go. Eric, take Tris with you. Just throw her over you're shoulder again, she seemed to like it." Max said, with a grin. "Let's go. I can't wait to prove the big bad Dauntless leader Max wrong." I said, grinning crazily. Eric threw me over my shoulder, and I just grinned. I went back to before when I was playing with the hemn of his shirt, I was addicted to it. I felt Eric shiver in pleasure, and I smiled. "Does this feel good to the big bad Eric?" I teased, and he fucking spanked me! "What the hell was that for!?" I yelled, shocked. "You teased me, that's you're punishment." Eric said, and I could practically feel his smile. It made me smile. "Seriously?" I asked, and he just nodded. I went back to playing with his shirt, and my hands kept finding the skin on his back, accidently. "Seriously, Tris? You were calling me the cheater, when look at you! Slut!" Four yelled at me, and Eric stopped. Shit is about to go down! "What. The. Fuck. Did. You. Just. Call. Tris?" Eric growled out, and Four gulped. "Uh, um, nothing?" Four tried, and I slid down Eric's body. Eric got right in front of Four's face, and he leaned in. "Shut the fuck up with insults on Tris!" Eric roared, causing people to stare. "You think you have the right to call me a cheater, Tris? Eric's defending you, he doesn't defend anyone. Whore." Four said, before he had a taste of Eric's fist. "Shut the hell up about Tris! Next rude comment and you're factionless!" Eric roared, and I flinched. I carefully rested my hand on Eric's arm, and he calmed down at my touch. "Leave her alone, Four. She never cheated on me, you would've seen that whilst you were stalking her on the cameras, Tobias." Eric said, and Four groaned. "Let's go, Eric. I don't want you to be killed or kicked out of Dauntless for throwing this sad excuse for a human in the chasm. I have a better punishment, but I'll tell you after the DNA test with Max." I said, and he grabbed my hand. "Thank you, Tris. I don't want to be kicked out either, but I couldn't help but be concerned about you. My vision went red, stupidly. Let's go! Let's prove Maxy wrong!" Eric exclaimed, jumping up. I started to chuckle, and he pulled me to the clinic. Marlene was in there, and Max had a cotton ball against the inside of his elbow. "Just take Tris' blood. She won't believe that I'm her father already." Max said, and Marlene pricked me. "Ow!" I yelped, in surprise. "Pansycake!" Uri, of all people, yelled when he came in. "Uri, careful what you say." I sung, suddenly feeling happy. "Dammit! Who injected Tris with peace serum?" Eric and Max yelled, while Uri was hiding a needle. I don't know why, he made me happy. "Uri, have I ever told you you're the best almost-brother!?" I exclaimed, hugging him. Max broke into fits of laughter, and I joined him. It feels good to laugh. "Maxy, I have a question for you, but I'd rather not ask you until the results are in." Eric said, and I just giggled at his voice. "Guys! Results are in! Tris, Max is you're father!" Marlene said, with a huge grin on her face. "Yipee! You know, Maxy, you've always been a father to me!" I exclaimed, trapping him in a hug whilst kissing his cheek. "Eric, please help me." Max whined, and I giggled. "Oh God. I'm here to help, Maxy." Eric teased, pulling me away. I quickly kissed Eric, and everyone gasped. "Trissy-poo likes ERIC!?" Uri and Marlene yelled, and I giggled. "No, I love Eric!" I exclaimed, followed by a giggle. "With that information, it brings me back to my question. Maxy, Max, can I please date Tris?" Eric begged, and Max, no, Dad nodded. "She's in love with you already, I'm not stopping it. Tris, dear, can you walk back to my office?" Dad asked me, and everything started to sway. "Here's the anti-serum." I heard Uri say, and everything stopped. "Uriah, thank you so much for putting me under the serum! You made me happy! And, Eric? I'd love to be you're girlfriend, I heard you ask my dad. Dad, I'm glad I'm you're daughter!" I exclaimed, and then I realized what was up. "Uriah Pedrad, why the fuck did you put me under TRUTH SERUM!?" I yelled, mad. "Sweetheard, calm down. You don't want to kill Uri, right?" Four asked me, as he sat his hand on the small of my back. I quickly kicked him in the balls, and he doubled over. "Stay. The. Fuck. Away. From. Me. And. My. Family. Four." I sneered, and he just groaned out a yes. "Let's go to you're office, Dad." I said, and Eric picked me up and over Fours body, and my foot just 'slipped up', and hit him in balls again. He just groaned louder, and I looked at dad. He smiled at me, then stomped on Fours dick. I saw some blood trickle through Four's zipper, and I just laughed. "That's what you get, Four. Let me guess, you were fucking Christina weren't you? I just hate to be the one to tell Will. I heard he wanted to pop the question in a few months, and now, he can't." I said, shaking my head. "Let's go!" Eric yelled, as he threw me onto his shoulders. My head hit the doorframe, knocking me out.
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