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Chapter 4(Tobias, hehe): No!
We all ran to the pit, and I saw them drag Will out. There were the flowers and Will's will right next to his head, and I broke into sobs. Eric pulled me to his chest, letting me cry into his shirt. Five minutes later, I wiped away my tears. I saw Christina and Four laughing their asses off and having a grand old time in the corner, with gasps going all around at them and at Will. "Can we have Tris Prior and Eric Coulter come up here please? Come on, kids." Max said, his voice heavy with sadness. I slinked up there, and my father and my boyfriend had me in a hug. "Tris, it's not you're fault. He felt bad because Christina cheated on him. It's not you're fault." Dad was saying, before the two killers walked up and tried to hug me. "GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME!" I yelled at them, and then I felt a sharp sting in my cheek. Christina slapped me, and I stopped my boyfriend and my dad from killing her. "I can fight my own battles, thanks." I said, and I had the shock of a life time! Christina tried to push me into the chasm! "Four, babe, a little help here?" Christina grunted out, and Four came over. He picked me up, and put me over the ledge. "Are you sure you don't need any help, Trissy?" Four asked, and he dropped me. I managed to latch on by my feet, as he thought I fell. "WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT!?" Dad and Eric yelled, as Eric came running over. He tried to look for me, but he stepped on my foot. "Ow." I mumbled, and he gasped. He bent over to grab my hands, and he lifted me up. "Thank God you're alive! Max! Execution!?" Eric yelled, puttiing on his stone face. "No shit sherlock! They tried to kill my daughter, you're girlfriend!" Dad yelled back, and I heard Peter laugh. "So you fucked Four to get into Dauntless, and now you're fucking Eric to get into Leadership?" Peter asked, and I growled. "Dad, can you take care of this one. I'm sore." I whined, wanting to be let sleep. "Max, I'm taking Tris to my apartment. She wants sleep!" Eric yelled over his shoulder, as he picked me up, bridal style. "Use protection!" He yelled back, causing my face to ignite. "Shut the fuck up, old man!" Eric yelled back, as he made his way to his room. He suddenly dropped me though, his face twisted in pain. He fell face forewards, and I noticed a knife in his back! There was suddenly one implanted in my arm, as I howled out in pain. Four came out of the shadows, with a smirk on his face. "Not so big and bad now, are you whore?" Four asked, as he walked closer. He took my arm, and he wrote 'Slut' on the inside of one arm, 'Whore' on the inside of the other one. "Now, no one can forget what you are. Bye, Slut. Be sure to get you and you're man-whore of a boyfriend to a doctor. Wait, let me do this!" He exclaimed, before he wrote 'Man-Slut' on the inside of the same arm that he wrote 'Slut' on for me, and he wrote 'Man-Whore' on the inside of the same arm he wrote 'Whore' on for me. "Now, everyone will know. Have fun, whore's." Four said, laughing as he walked away. I quickly grabbed Erics phone. I called the clinic, and Marlene picked up. "Eric!? What happened!?" Mar yelled, as if she was seriously concerned. "Come down the path to the leadership apartments. Eric and I need you're help. Four threw a knife into Eric's back, then wrote 'Whore' and 'Slut' on my arms. He then wrote 'Man-Whore' and 'Man-Slut' on Eric's arms. Please, help. Quick." I said, and I hung up. I barely could hit Dad's number, I was losing control of my body! "Yes, Eric? Is everything okay?" Dad asked, and I could feel my control slipping. "Down the path to Eric's apartment. Hurry. Clinic called, them coming to help. Hurry." I barely managed out, before I slipped into a comfy and peaceful darkness.
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