Hey guys. So, first off, I have something to say. I expected some people to be upset with my story, but one of the reviews really pissed me off. Someone, and I'm not saying who, said that I need to step up my writing. I know I've asked for you guys to tell me what you think, but that was kind of rude. I'm not the best writer. I hate to tell you guys this but I'm not any famous writer. I'm a normal girl. Sorry that I'm not the best writer. And, you don't have to read this story if you don't like how I write this. It's my writing, not yours. I enjoy getting told something like my grammar is bad, that I understand. But being told I need to step it up? Not so much. Anyways, sorry that I screwed up the chapters at first, then I changed it because I love you guys so much, for the few that read this. Shout out to my beta, Starcrossed. You rock girl. Here's the next chapter. And, I don't own anything.
Tris' POV
"Come in." Uncle Max gruffly said, and I blushed.
"Come on, Bea. Be my little warrior sister that I know you are." Toby said, and I smiled at my brother.
"Let's go." I said, walking in, but with my head down.
"Tris? I know Four told you who I am. What's wrong, sweetie?" Uncle Max asked, and I sighed. He motioned for us to sit down, and I tried not to cry.
"Uncle Max, I-I need you to stay calm but listen to what I have to say, okay?" I asked, and Uncle Max nodded.
"Uncle Max, I've been being beaten along with Four, until he left. Once he left, Marcus and Andrew started to hit me more, they even raped me last night. They tell me it's my fault that Mum died and that it's my fault that Four transferred." I said, with my head down. I looked up, and I saw the pain in Uncle Max's eyes.
"Tris, come here." Uncle Max said, and when I did, he hugged me.
"I'm sorry that they hit you, Tris. And, I'm sorry about Nat and Evelyn. But, your here now. And, your going to be Dauntless. I'm going to make sure that Tobias and Eric make you the best Dauntless here, at least better than some older members. Got it, guys? And, Tris? Marcus and Andrew are never getting close to you. I'm thinking that I'll put a ban on them coming here. There's still James Black, which is Susan's father. Did Caleb hit you too?" Uncle Max asked, and I tensed at the mention of his name.
"Uncle Max, Caleb beat me, raped me, and then publicly humiliated me. Can we also not allow him here, if that isn't too much." I said, blushing.
"Tris, anyone who harmed you or your brother will not be here. And, I'll make sure that he is punished for that. That is a crime, and it needs to be dealt with. Are you two fine with making statements against Marcus, Andrew, and Caleb?" Uncle Max asked, and Toby looked at me.
"Bea, do you want to? If you want to, Bea, we can do it. It's up to you." Toby said, rubbing my back.
"I-I don't know. It's already too much for me to be in training when Toby wouldn't have to train me." I said, feeling guilty because I took over to much space.
"Tris, look at me." Toby said, using the hard voice again. I looked up, with tears in my eyes.
"Bea, don't cry. Bea, I know they made you feel like shit, but you aren't. Okay? I promise. You can ask Uncle Max and Eric and Zeke. I've done some stupid shit, to where I was at gun point against my head. I dared them to shoot me, but they all stopped them. And then I knocked the gun away, because they reminded me of you. And I knew that I couldn't die when you were here alone. I couldn't leave you alone. So, I know they made you feel like crap. But I can't let you go away, sis." Toby said, making me look at him.
"Toby, they told me the truth. That I'm just a waste of space. That all I do is make people's lives horrible. That I shouldn't have even been born." I said, and Toby had me in the quickest hug ever.
"Beatrice, please. Never say that again. If it wasn't for you, I'd be dead. You've made my life heaven when it was Hell. You're not a waste of space, I promise. And, I'm so glad you were born, especially as my sister. I promise. I love you, Bea. You can't die. I can't lose you." Toby said, in a choked voice as tears fell from his eyes. I buried my face in his chest, and he held me to him.
"I'm sorry, so sorry." I whispered, and Toby held me tighter.
"I love you, Toby. I'm sorry that I've made this horrible." I whispered, and Toby buried his face in my short hair. It was supposed to be long, being from Abnegation, but they cut it short because they said that 'good girls get long hair'.
"Bea, you didn't make this horrible. I love you, Bea." Toby said, and we wiped our tears away. We looked up, and saw everyone gone.
"Let's go get everyone." I said, and we did. Once everyone was situated, Uncle Max cleared his throat.
"Tris, do you want to go to Dauntless therapy? You can take people with you. It can be very helpful with you being abused and raped. And if you take Tobias with you, he can help talk through with you. I promise, Tris." Uncle Max said, and I nodded.
"I-I want to go to Dauntless Therapy. But I have a few questions. Number one, is to Eric. Eric, will you go to therapy with me? I'd take Toby with me, but there's some things I'd like to keep secret. So, will you go with me?" I asked, and Eric looked at Toby for approval. Toby nodded, and Eric smiled at me.
"I wanted to get your brother to like me, so, yeah. I would've gone, no matter what. Next question, Tris." Eric said, and I had a look in my eyes.
"Next question is for Uncle Max. Uncle Max, can it just be Eric and Toby training me, but without the physical part? I already know how to shoot a gun, very well, I've thrown knives really well, and I can fight really well. If you want, I can go against one of them." I said, and Uncle Max grinned.
"I wanna see it, Tris. If you can, then we'll start on your mental training. It's just your fears later." Uncle Max said, and he smiled at me.
"Tris, I think that you should head down now. Their in the leaders area, it's actually my friend Harrison who's in charge of therapy. I'll call him to let him know if you guys want." Uncle Max said, and I nodded.
"I want to talk to Harrison." I said, and they smiled at me.
"I'll call him. I love you, Tris. Be careful. Eric, son, take care of my niece." Uncle Max said, and Toby smiled at me.
"I love you, Bea. Be careful. Eric, take care of Tris, or your ass is going into the chasm." Toby said, and he hugged me.
"Eric, we never got along, but I need you to take care of Tris. If she's Four's little sister. He's my brother from another mother, so you need to take care of her. Have fun." Zeke said, and we went to Harrison, to have therapy.
Lovely.
Hey guys. Hope you like this long chapter. Figured you guys might like it. Sorry about if you guys don't like it, I'm just writing from my heart. 1 review=1 chapter. Though it'll be here soon. Love you guys!