Hey I'm back for round three, thank you all who've followed and or favorited so far. Special thx to ryuujin96 for the continued feedback. While Yui won't start in 1A hope is not lost. With a little sister running around campus miracles can happen.
Crescendo thanks for the feedback. I will try to have clearer scene changes in the future. Now while The boys will be powerful from the start they won't have everything from the start just the basic abilities from their quirks. The only reason canon Izuku didn't have an idea of his basic powers was due to All Might not knowing how to teach them to Izuku as he had a natural knack for it. I guess I didn't really clarify that the hospital trip wasn't nearly as emotionally charged as most disaster related trips due to Izuku's quirk. The trip was more a formality than a necessity. Izuku's health was never really in danger after his quirk activated he just overdid it making him pass out and the minor fever was his body re-acclimating to a new internal temperature, being draconic in nature he will run a bit warmer than he used to. The dragon forms are pretty much just that right now. They have the pros and cons a larger dragon body would along with a boost in their elemental power but they have less fine control. picture this, in human form the boys could catch with a fireball that's shaped like a football whereas, in dragon form they could direct larger amounts of fire with ease but not really shape it (Izuku passed out because he was in human form when he put out such a large fire) . I hope that helps, and while the big bad won't be AFO or Shigaraki and his band of merry misfits(who I love to bits for the most part); they will be a canon character if not using the exact methods from canon. So I suppose I should get on with the story, just need to think if there's any other mentions… Welp if there are, it's going into the end notes...probably...oh I've enlisted my brother's help as a proofreader! Ha knew I forgot something anywho on to the story enjoy!
10 month time skip night before entrance exam
Tatsuma Residents
"So boys, do you think you're ready? UA has high standards and I'm going to be requesting the footage of you two so give it your all the whole time or no matter how well you do I'll pull you two understood? A real hero gives it 110%!" Ryuko briefs the dragon duo
"You got it aunty, we'll give it our plus ultra!" Izuku cheers
"Auntie if we go too hard the other examines might not get anything" Arashi points out
"Than they didn't try hard enough" was the dragoon hero's response
"Yea Zuku and 'rashi go kick but so aunty Inko doesn't have to find a new house!" Yuki shouts
"...snowflake? I'm pretty sure that's not the motive but she won't have to worry" Arashi sweat drops
"Don't worry about it you two we'll be proud no matter the results" Inko tells them
"Now go catch your train. The room is already taken care of, you just have to check in, and don't forget to check out! We'll see you tomorrow!" Ryuko tells the boys pushing them out the door
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Next day outside of the UA building
"GET THE FUCK OUTTA MY WAY YOU EXTRAS!" an angry blonde shouts with a striking resemblance to a Pomeranian
"Zuzu? You definitely under played his personality" Arashi tells his cousin as they walk
"Well to be fair I wa-" Izuku started
"Crack" Arashi interrupts shoving Izuku around said hazard
"Oh thanks, anyway I was pretty acclimated to him so I couldn't really do his description justice ya know?" Izuku finished
"My condolences" Arashi says
"Much appreciated" Izuku replies as they laugh and enter the building
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1 hour later after written portion
Conference hall
The pro hero present Mic stands up front explaining the rules and objective of the practical exam when a tall dude with blue hair asks a question
"Yes listener?" The pro asks
"Sir you stated there were three robot types but the official pamphlet clearly lists 4! Such a mistake is a horrible standard to set for such a prestigious school! And you two the dragon boy and the plain boy next to him cease your incessant fidgeting! If you can't take this seriously you shouldn't be here. You're just distracting everyone one here!" The Blue hard rants
"Wow, what a blow-hard. Get a load of this guy Izuku!" Arashi says
"Well yea but I'm sure he's just nervous" the greenette reasons
"Excuse me?" Blue guy is ignored
"Then maybe HE should leave. He couldn't even let Mic finish before complaining and seriously our fidgeting? Nobody noticed but that guy" Arashi continued
"EXCUSE ME?" shouted the indignant blue guy
"Damn you're still talking? Shut up and let the man finish and save your anal nagging til the end. I mean damn we NEVER get to open up and give it everything and the longer you bitch the longer it takes for me to unleash this pent up excitement" Arashi berated the blue guy
"Well i-" blue guy starts again but Mic takes over
"That's enough listeners, dragon listener was a little rude but was right. I was about to explain that the 4th wasn't worth any points and was just an obstacle best to avoid. Now everyone go to your respective fields" Mic ends before they get sidetracked again
"Yo Zuzu, where are you?" Arashi asks
"Field G. You?" He counters
"Field F. How bout a wager on who scores higher loser buys winner lunch" Arashi challenged
"Deal" Izuku says as the shake and board their busses
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Field G
Present Mic recaps some things while Izuku is stretching. As he finishes the gate opens and Izuku takes off causing shouts of discontent only for Mic to spur them on
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Field F
Arashi is almost vibrating with anticipation when the gate opens he takes to the air knocking over those who weren't balanced with the wind from take off. As he soars above the cityscape he dives on clusters of robots destroying the group's in mere seconds, whenever he notices an examine trouble he assists, gives a tip and leaves. He doesn't keep track of his points just pushes harder.
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Field G
Izuku has turned robot after robot into slag and helped many people regroup and even disabled a handful of robots for easy points for the less combat inclined.
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Surveillance room
"Well isn't this quite the crop of potential" the principle tells the room
"I am not taking those problem children Nezu"a hobo-esque man tells his boss as he watches two boys decimate robots and assist others
"Too bad for you, I say you are. You can't tell me they don't have potential, but there is only one test left, Toshinori the button if you will." The Boss tells a skeletal blonde.
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Field F
"What's that door" Arashi asks no-one as he watches a large trapdoor I'm the ground open allowing a massive robot to rise up
"Finally a challenge" he grins beginning his dive while transforming into his dragon form
"Get some!" The large black dragon bellows as he makes a pass severing the robot's arm with his tail before making a tight turn and severing the other.
On his return instead of a strafing run he digs his feet into the chest, latches onto the shoulders with his arms, and turns the head into forbidden soup with a gout of blue flames, all before it steps of its platform
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Field G
The ground begins to shake as Izuku runs toward the central lane. When he gets there everyone is fleeing a massive robot so what does Izuku do? Runs towards it shifting into his dragon and caves the face in with a nasty headbutt then proceeds to slag the thing when he clears the ground around it of people
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Surveillance room
The staff is left completely speechless at the events that they just witnessed when The principle breaks out into hysterical laughter and a man hanging from a construction themed exosuit starts grumbling about overpowered brats wrecking his toys. Potential indeed
So a fair few scene changes here hope i did better. It might still have pacing issues but I'll try to fix that in the future. So what were your thoughts? Was I too hard on Ilda? Did I write the battles Well? And my updates are on a whim not a schedule though I'll try for one Every day and not double post so people can read and review if they wish, this one was done not long after I posted the last one but I held it overnight, and I'm glad because it gave me a chance to implement suggestions and clarify things. I'm going to try and draw their dragon forms but I'm not confident they will look great. I hope you enjoyed! catch ya next time. Peace