Chapter 52: Gut Feeling

Rhombulus was the in charge of finding and taking prisoners. There were plenty of dangers through out the dimensions.

HOWEVER there was a huge problem.

He was extremely childish and often behaved like a toddler having a tantrum.

He also followed his gut whenever it came to came to catching criminals.

And his gut was sometimes among.

However for a while had a gut feeling about one Monkey D. Luffy, that one day he would become one of the worst criminals there was.

Granted Luffy's dream at being king of the pirates it was true this time around…

However most of the time it could be a problem…

But still he decided to capture Luffy thanks to his gut.

Luffy was dragging a dead crocodile behind him heading to the tree house.

That was when Rhombulus jumped down from somewhere.

Luffy stared at the member of the Magic High Commission, it made sense he would as Rhombulus was weird looking, he had a crystal for a head with an eye somehow inside the crystal, he had a green body and snakes for hands and crystal nipples.

"Stop right there criminal!" yelled Rhombulus.

He shot crystals from his hands.

Luffy managed to doge.

"Hey!" yelled Luffy, "Who are you!"

"I don't have to say anything to you your future criminal!" yelled Rhombulus.

He sent out more of the crystals at Luffy.

Luffy mostly dodged, as one of hands was now encased in crystal.

"What the!" yelled Luffy.

"You won't be able to get your hand free!" taunted Rhombulus.

However Luffy smashed the crystal on a rock.

"It wasn't even that hard!" yelled Luffy.

"Stupid leak!" yelled Rhombulus.

"I don't know who are you but you're not going to beat me!" yelled Luffy.

However Rhombulus just tried to crystalize him more times, however Luffy continued to dodge.

Thankfully Luffy shouted "Gum Gum Pistol!" and punched him the gut.

"My gut!" yelled Rhombulus, "That hurt!"

"Maybe this wasn't a good idea!" said one of his snake hands.

"Your hands can talk! That's so cool!" yelled Luffy getting distracted.

"Hey! Thanks!" said the other snake hand.

"We shouldn't be taking compliments from him!" yelled Rhombulus.

Rhombulus began to shoot more crystals and Luffy had no choice but to dodge them.

"Gum Gum Whip!" he called out kicking Rhombulus away.

However Luffy noticed nearby a partially crystalized tree.

HE knocked on the crystal and got an idea.

He looked at Rhombulus.

"There's nothing you can do that will stop me!" yelled Rhombulus.

Rhombulus once again shot at Luffy.

Luffy mostly dodged however his hands got crystalized.

"Yes! Both your hands got crystalized!" cheered Rhombulus.

Luffy however grinned.

"I think he let them crystalized on purpose." Said one of the snake hands.

"What?" asked Rhombulus.

"Crystal Gum Gum Gatling!" yelled Luffy using the crystals like a sort of boxing gloves, this attack knocked away Rhombulus.

"Why are you attacking me!" yelled Luffy.

"Why should I tell you!" yelled Rhombulus.

"Just stop!" yelled one of his snake hands.

"This is getting us nowhere!" yelled the other.

"He's going to be the most dangerous criminal the universe has ever known! I feel it in my gut!" yelled Rhombulus.

"Wait!" said Luffy realizing something, "You're Time Out Guy!"

"Who calls me that!" yelled Rhombulus.

"Hekapoo, River… I think I heard Queen Mom call you that a couple times." Said Luffy.

"You know this is just getting worse and worse." Said one of the snake hands.

"Yeah." Said the other.

"Oh come how bad is it?" asked Rhombulus.

"Well you just beaten up by him and if you do crystalize him someone's going to find out." Said one of the snake hands.

"Do you really want Queen Moon, King River AND Hekapoo angry with you because you decided to crystalize him!" said this other snake hand.

"I mean we don't know if he's going to become a criminal." Said the first snake hand.

'I do plan on becoming king of the pirates." Said Luffy like it was nothing.

"WHAT!" yelled his snake hands.

"But I only want to go on adventures." Said Luffy.

"Wait… what I'm so confused…" said Rhombulus.

"Wait a second what dimension is this!" said one of the snake hands realizing something.

"The Blue Dimension." Said Luffy.

"Wait! This is that dimension that's full of pirates." Said Rhombulus in shock.

"Yeah this is the Dimension I'm from." Said Luffy.

"Called it." Said one of the snake hands in a high pitched voice causing the other snake to laugh.

"Wait does Queen Moon and King River know!" yelled Rhombulus freaking out.

"Queen Mom cant' find out!" yelled Luffy.

"What about River?" asked one of the snakes.

"Oh he's been here a lot of times!" laughed Luffy like it was nothing.

That was when Rhombulus' stomach rumbled, causing the crystal headed man to blush a little.

"You want me to help you kill something?" asked Luffy.

"What do you mean?" asked Rhombulus.

That was when they saw they were surrounded by wolves.

"Uh…" said Rhombulus.

"I know how to kill them." Said Luffy with a big grin.

"Um… okay…" said Rhombulus.

The two killed one of the wolves and they began to cook it with the crocodile.

"The Crocodiles mine…" said Luffy, "Wait how do you eat?"

"Shoe them!" cheered Rhombulus.

The snake hands began to eat the wolf.

"So awesome!" said Luffy with his eyes sparkling.

"Okay! You said you trying to become the Pirate King!" said Rhombulus.

"Yeah!" said Luffy.

"So you plan to murder and pillage?" asked Rhombulus.

"I have no plans to kill anyone right now." Said Luffy.

"But you want to be a pirate"! said Rhombulus.

"Yeah but those kind of pirates are jerks!" said Luffy pouting, "Don't want to be those kind of pirates!"

"Wait… what about your older brothers?" asked Rhombulus.

"I don't' know about Sabo…" said Luffy, "We never talked about it…"

"What about the other one… the one that always sets fires." Said Rhombulus.

"Oh he's trying to kill someone right now." Said Luffy.

That was when Luffy's mirror rang.

"Luffy! Portal! Now!" yelled Ace who of course was on the other end.

Luffy opened the portal and Ace came out of it.

"It hasn't been going well." Said Luffy with a big smile.

"Uh…" said Ace.

"?Oh this is Time Out Guy!" laughed Luffy.

"Don't call me that!" yelled Rhombulus.

Ace knew that "Time Out Guy" was a member of the Magic High Commission.

And decided that would probably be best to leave the two idiots alone.

"I'm going to go treat my injuries at the tree house!" said Ace.

"Okay!" cheered Luffy.

Ace left the two of them alone.

"It's been happen for a while." Laughed Luffy.

"Okay…" said Rhombulus with a shrug, "So even though you're going to be a criminal you're not going to hurt innocent people?"

"No." said Luffy, "Only jerks!"

"I don't know how to feel about this…" said Rhombulus.

"Your crystals are awesome by the way!" said Luffy.

"Oh thanks!" sighed Rhombulus.

"What's wrong?" asked Luffy.

"You saw you broke them?" asked Rhombulus.

"Yeah… wait aren't they supposed to be super Strong?" asked Luffy.

"Well there's a magical leak it's causing my crystals to become weaker! It's like they're like rock candy!" yelled Rhombulus.

"No way!" yelled Luffy.

"Yes way!" yelled Rhombulus.

"Do you know what's causing it?" asked Luffy.

"I have a gut feeling!" said Rhombulus, "But I don't know if I should do it."

"You had a gut feeling about me becoming King of the Pirates!" said Luffy, "Maybe you're right about this!"

"Uh…" said the Snakes Hands getting a bad feeling about it.

""You're right!" said Rhombulus, "I should follow my gut and Crystalize the one responsible Thanks… uh… what your name again?"

"Luffy!" said Luffy with a big grin.

"I'm Rhombulus!" said Rhombulus, "Remember it and don't call me Time Out Guy again!"

"Okay!" laughed Luffy.

And indeed the two had become friends.

"I'm going to get the person behind the leak!" yelled Rhombulus.

"I have a bad feeling about this." Sighed one of the snake hands.

"Me too." Sighed the other.

"Later!" cheered Luffy.

Rhombulus made a portal his with scissors and left.

And so Luffy headed to the tree house where Ace was waiting.

"So what happened?" asked Ace.

Luffy told him and Ace sighed.

"Of course that happened." Sighed Ace after getting the story.

"Yeah! I guess we're friends now." Laughed Luffy.

"So… who's causing this leak?" asked Ace.

"I don't know… I hope he gets them though." Said Luffy with a big grin.

Turned out that his gut feeling led him to taking Star getting the feeling that she was behind it.

Though as it happened after a series of mishaps that led to Rhombulus crystalizing his own Marco, Lekmet (the high chancellor of the Magic High Commission) and his own hands he and Star ended up talking about what was going on and much like Luffy ended up hitting it off.

However what none of them knew was that much like his Gut Feeling about Luffy becoming criminal was right… his Gut Feeling about Star being the cause of the leak was indeed true… adept indirectly…

However that is for another time…

Next Time: It's Luffy's birthday! And they hold a party! With Luffy's sister and friends in attendance it will sure be fun! But what will happen when Ludo crash's the party to get a piece of the book? Find out next time!